After "Club Spartacus" - What Next ?

[Jim Miller]

I would like to express my appreciation to all of you who make "Literotica" available free of charge. It's a great web site! I have read lots of your stories, visited some of your advertisers, read through messages on the bulletin board, etc. I hope to be a regular visitor for a long time to come.

"Club Spartacus" is my first attempt at writing adult erotic fiction. I hope that my story wasn't too long to be worth reading. I enjoyed writing the story. . .

I must have because I am feeling a kind of "itch" to write some more! But I'm not sure how I should respond to my itch. Should I write some more about Club Spartacus? Should I write about totally different things? Is Jim Miller interesting enough to be kept as a character in my stories, or should I dump him and try to find some new characters to write about? Should I write another long story or should I concentrate on keeping it short next time? I really don't know . . .

I would like to hear any suggestions that you might make after reading my series "Club Spartacus". I do expect to write some more, but I do want to take it in the right direction. Thank you for any suggestions you might give me. I will consider them all, then scratch my itch.

 

[Hullo_nurse]

I really love the setting of the Club Spartacus stories. I like the idea of the domination, but would like to see a new character & more humiliating thing & torture kind of things done to the guy & his sex organs. What can you come up with???

 

[Guest]

Club Spartacus was an interesting story. In my opinion, it was too long to make it worth reading all in one sitting. I always found the aim of the erotic fiction on literotica to be more of the short story type rather than the miniature novel type (though there are some stories here that do that).

As for your character, I'd say go ahead and find a new one. For me, at least, erotic "series" don't hold much interest for me unless they are all a continual storyline (part i, part ii, etc.) but not actual separate episodes.

Overall, though, what you've done so far is great and you should definately try your hand at more...