advice

[MsKitty11]

oral - a guy I have met only wants to give me oral but not actual penal sex - then I want to write about it - Im worried the story wouldnt be liked, your comments appreciated

 

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[PennLady]

oral - a guy I have met only wants to give me oral but not actual penal sex - then I want to write about it - Im worried the story wouldnt be liked, your comments appreciated

Whether the story is liked or not would depend, I think, on how well you write about it and not so much on the experience itself.

 

[MsKitty11]

thank you. points noted x

 

[sr71plt]

Go ahead and write it up. It could be interesting.

 

[colddiesel]

The interesting thing is the apparent hang up he has, and the tensions and resolution of it -- not so much the actual sex.

Have a crack at it.

 

[estragon]

And Be Prepared For A Quibble

"Penal sex" lands you in jail. "Penile sex" is great fun, when I get to have any.

 

[roomfor1more]

There are a few points to consider if you are going to write that type of story.

1. Do not just retell it, include the senses (sight, hearing, smell, taste). Also include feelings and thoughts to make it more enjoyable
2. Story most likely would fit in Erotic Couplings. However there are a few other possibilities too. Your login name implies female but if the story involves two males then Gay Males. Finally depending on the story it could fit into Exhibitionsit / Voyeur, Mature, or Novels / Novellas to name a few.
3. Make sure your grammar and spelling is correct, especially any dialog. Literotica will reject story with improperly punctuated dialog.
4. Include your relationship with the individual and how the two of you met
5. Spend time developing the sex scene, do not rush to it, and do not rush through it.
6. Make sure all characters are at least 18 years of age.

 

[Corpse_rider]

Do it, baby. Do it, do it, do it.