Adopted Story: Adventures of Anya

[Gunde]

I have taken over a story that in my opinion is a chyoo-classic, created way back in 2001.
I'm glad to see that it is alive and well, just during the last week or so, there has been three new posters:
maidenself with "A rescue?" (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51232/) and "His answer" (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51550),

minimum with "He's been the subject of a repopulation experiment." (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51025/51550)

and nicolasp with "Lady Richardson, Lord Richardson’s wife" (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51530/51025).

All three of them are relatively new at Chyoo, minimum have so far posted a total of 2 threads, maidenself is up to 5 and nicolasp 10, but still their threads are both good and rather long.
Seeing that they are new but don't write threads 2 sentences long, I think that they all deserve a little positive feedback from the rest of us

 

[Torg]

I have taken over a story that in my opinion is a chyoo-classic, created way back in 2001.
I'm glad to see that it is alive and well, just during the last week or so, there has been three new posters:
maidenself with "A rescue?" (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51232/) and "His answer" (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51550),

minimum with "He's been the subject of a repopulation experiment." (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51025/51550)

and nicolasp with "Lady Richardson, Lord Richardson’s wife" (http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51530/51025).

All three of them are relatively new at Chyoo, minimum have so far posted a total of 2 threads, maidenself is up to 5 and nicolasp 10, but still their threads are both good and rather long.
Seeing that they are new but don't write threads 2 sentences long, I think that they all deserve a little positive feedback from the rest of us

Everyone got feedback, and good feedback too. Those were excellent threads. I like the various styles. Woohoo! Fresh blood!

 

[Gunde]

Fresh blood is nice indeed, here's the adress to another addition from nicolasp:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/51651/51530
The title is: "An unexpected help may save the Amazons"

 

[Gunde]

Update

A new thread by nicolasp, an alternate one to maidenself's, this one adding some good old superstition to the story.

 

[nicolasp]

thanks

Thanks for the feedbacks. Actually I read them only yesterday because I didn't notice the "feedback" option in the menu before.

By the way, how does one post rating and feedback about a story? For I can see the radio buttons next to the "rating" sign, as well as a text input next to the "comments" sign, but then, how does one submit his/her rating and comments?

--
Nicolas

 

[Torg]

By the way, how does one post rating and feedback about a story? For I can see the radio buttons next to the "rating" sign, as well as a text input next to the "comments" sign, but then, how does one submit his/her rating and comments?

Well, you click on a rating (1-5) and then type a comment in the text box. Then either click Next Thread or Previous Thread.

If you don't type a comment, you just leave a rating, which doesn't translate into a feedback. Only a rating with a comment is a feedback.

 

[Gunde]

New Update

minimum has added another thread, http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52542/

An absolutely brilliant thread, ending with a proper cliffhanger.
I'd like to add a thread to it, but I'm not sure if I can add something of the same quality.

Nicolasp, I'm glad that you've found your way here.
I intend to follow up on your latest thread within the next couple of days.
And if you have any ideas about new additions to the story, feel more than welcome to share them with the rest of us.
I look forward to seeing more of your writing.

 

[nicolasp]

I may continue, although, as you probably guessed, English is not my native language.

 

[Gunde]

I may continue, although, as you probably guessed, English is not my native language.

Please do continue, your additions are quite good.
And as for english not being your native language, do like I do; simply view Chyoo as the perfect spot for improving it
Seriously though, your english is more than acceptable,as far as I'm concerned: Good language and perfectly understandable grammar.


Edit: new addition from minimum, to be read at: http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52607

 

[Torg]

Please do continue, your additions are quite good.
And as for english not being your native language, do like I do; simply view Chyoo as the perfect spot for improving it

This is not so funny. I started writing here for a very similar purpose: to improve my writing skills. I think the area I've improved the most is in plot. For some reason, sex scenes have always come pretty easy for me. It's how you get to the sex scenes that I've always had trouble with.

 

[jizzlober]

Anya etc

Hi all,

This is minimum (I'm logged in at literotica as jizzlober). Thanks for the kind words about my threads, I really appreciated the feedback that I have got so far.

I think that the Anya story in particular has a lot of potential, so anyone who wants to add threads to or deviate from my threads is more than welcome to do so. I've just added another thread which can be found here:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52630/972

I have some ideas for this story which might be quite lengthy, so stay tuned and let me know what you think to the developments.

 

[Gunde]

minimum/jizzlober

Welcome to the forums!
The same goes for you as for all the other contributors: Feel free to post here if you have or need any thoughts or suggestions.
And thanks for your excellent threads, it's been a pleasure reading them

 

[jizzlober]

More Anya

New thread here.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/52655

I'm getting quite into this...

 

[Gunde]

New writer to the story

Just wanted to inform everyone that moonblack has recently added a good thread to the story, one that shows a lot of promise.
The thread can be found here:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61014/

Other new writers are Sky1269:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/59735/61014

And Imhotep, who decided to open an entirely new direction for the story to take:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/59349/59735

Finally, lilguy, had added a continuation to one of his earlier threads:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/60803


Thanks guys!

 

[jizzlober]

New threads to Anya

Over the weekend I have added the following threads to Anya:

Inopportune entrance of Ilona - as things were getting interesting

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/60879

Titfuck

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/60960

Slave market in Obille

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/60960

Lara starts her show

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61015

Some of these are linked into Moonblack's, Sky1269 and Imhotep's new plot strand. I would really love it if this story started to gather some momentum!

jizzlober/minimum

 

[Gunde]

And I hope to be able to add to at least a few of yours as well before the month is over.
The story is going for 15-20 new threads this month, and 1500 clicks on "view story".
I suppose that I'll have to get better at updating this thread as well

 

[Gunde]

A few threads of my own design

Just added another thread to this story:
"Not just another slave"
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61100/0/s_032

Earlier additions of mine during the weekend include
"Black, voluptuous and surprised" (Earlier tonight)
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61095/61100

and "Right behind Anya", added a few days ago
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/60836/61095

 

[Gunde]

minimum strikes again

minimum just added another long thread of high quality, titled "Ilona gets it in the ass and Sean gets triple-tongued"
It can be found here:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61139/61139

Edit: this is minimum's 25th addition to AoA. I can't wait for the 50th!

 

[Gunde]

More threads from me

I have added two more threads today:

"Both!", a continuation of minimum's thread "Titfuck"
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61120/972

And "Valuable information", continuing moonblack's "Erin tries to negotiate"
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61141/61141

 

[Gunde]

Imhotep and minimum...

...has added new threads today.
minimum was first, and his new thread can be found here:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61169/

While Imhotep continues to explore the new storyline, which he started, here:
http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61189/

 

[moonblack]

Erin tries again is a continuation of my previous addition. It's a little bit similar to Valuable information, but that's not my fault. Blame gunde for having a similar idea

 

[Gunde]

Erin tries again is a continuation of my previous addition. It's a little bit similar to Valuable information, but that's not my fault. Blame gunde for having a similar idea

And I, of course, blame you for taking so long in adding your second thread .
But I grudgingly admit that your thread is a lot more developed than mine...

 

[moonblack]

My next thread will probably take even longer because I have only a vague idea what to do (to be exact I have an idea what Erin's proof is, but that's all).

Anyway, about:

My only protest is that Erin owes someone money, it feels as though the economy should be more primitive than that (unless you mean Fallout-like bottlecaps)

I never said that their ideas of money are the same as ours, or that all areas use the same "money". Those shiny gold coins that are so valuable in one area could be completely worthless in another area, where those shiny glass imitations of gems are considered to be worth a fortune... in any case since there are slave markets where people buy and sell slaves it's obvious that there is some form of currency used.

 

[Gunde]

My next thread will probably take even longer because I have only a vague idea what to do (to be exact I have an idea what Erin's proof is, but that's all).

Anyway, about:

I never said that their ideas of money are the same as ours, or that all areas use the same "money". Those shiny gold coins that are so valuable in one area could be completely worthless in another area, where those shiny glass imitations of gems are considered to be worth a fortune... in any case since there are slave markets where people buy and sell slaves it's obvious that there is some form of currency used.

I know, just wanted to make absolutely sure that no universal currency was introduced, but that the system was kept relatively open (the economics of the triangular trade is a pretty good example of how I feel that it should work).

I look forward to your next thread

 

[moonblack]

Yes, she does - continues where Erin tries again left off.

I also made a small EDIT to Erin tries again as I had forgotten to mention Anya taking off her bra.

Originally Erin was going to take and show the proof to Anya, but I changed my mind as I got another idea. Who knows what else Erin has in that pouch...