adopted girl returns to split family

[danston]

Dan brings home his new girlfriend Zoe to meet his family (his mum, dad and 2 brothers)..

What none of the family know is that Zoe was the girl who the mum gave up for adoption when she was young and before she met the dad...

Zoe has deliberately got togehter with Dan for this chance, where she intends to get revenge and break up the family that she should have been a part of by sleeping with all the men...

We need a girl to play Zoe, and then others to play Dan's family members...

PM me for parts..

 

[danston]

Mor info..

The story will take place over a weekend, in which Dan and ZOe go to stay with his parents, starting on a saturday morning...

Character desciptions

Dan
22
6" tall
Slim build
short blond hair
average looking
bit of a mummy's boy

Zoe (dan's girlfriend/secretly mum's daughter)
description to be decided by player


Rob (Dan's older brother)
26
5"11
well built
Shaven head
rough but good looking
family hardman

Mike (Dan's younger brother)
18
6"1
average build
spikey blond hair
shy but a bit of a pretty boy

John (Dan's dad)
47
just above average build
little hair left which is shaven
typical ageing builder


Ok, we are still looking for someone to play roles of the Dad and one of the brothers, pm me if interested (not much point in having anyone play the mum as not much of a role...)

 

[BradJames]

OOC:
Mike (Dan's younger brother)
18
6"1
average build
spikey blond hair
shy but a bit of a pretty boy


Mike is a senior in high school. He's had two girlfriends, but hasn't had any sexual experiences with them. He is pretty shy, although he has good looks and he doesn't really realize that many girls in school would love to be his girlfriend.

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

OOC
Zoe age 21 Dans girlfriend
Zoe is a tall girl standing almost 5"10 with killer long legs, jet black curly hair that is long. She has a deep dark natural tan that never fades. She has a wicked sense of humor but enjoys playing the dumb blonde type though she is not blonde. She is athletic and stays in shape with a tight stomach, firm legs and great tits. She has just graduated college when she met Dan with a degree in nursing. She is also a bit of a tom boy and loves to wear tight jeans, low cut tops and cowboy hats.

 

[danston]

BUMP

still looking for a dad and an older brother, anyone interested??

 

[danston]

Dan and Zoe pulled up at his parents house, it was a pretty big one, a gated driveway, decent sized house, a massive garden out the back, with a mini forest at the end...

Dan was excited, but also very nerous, Zoe was the first girlfriend he had bought home to meet his family, he had fallen for her in a big way and was sure she felt the same...

They climbed out of the car, Dan getting their bags out of the car and they headed upto the door..

"this is it babe" he turned to her as they got to the door, giving her one last kiss before they went in...

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

Zoe took a deep breath wondering if she was really ready to go through what she had planned. It was so devious and cruel that she almost felt bad as Dan was not a bad guy. But no she had resolved herself to see it through and she meant to do so.

Dan kissed her gently just before entering the house and Zoe steadied herself.

 

[danston]

Dan took his girlfriend by the hand, and opened the front door, walking straight into a big hallway, he put the bags down and they walked through the house into the kitchen, where his parents were.

His mum ran upto them and hugged Dan, his Dad came up and shook his hand, Dan turned them to Zoe

"Mum, Dad, this is Zoe"

Dan's Mum said she was pleased to meet her and kissed her the cheek, then his Dad came and did the same...

Dan's brothers were up in their rooms, where they ususally spent their time...

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

As we entered the house it smelled of rose's and had a nice relaxing decor. The floors were hard wood and shined like a new penny. Everything seemed to have a place and there was no clutter. Pictures adorned the walls of family and friends along with numerous landscape paintings. Dan's parents came to greet us and first his mom who came up and hugged me then kissed me on the cheek. Then Dan's father walked up to me and hugged me closely as he too pressed his lips against my cheek.

"Hello everyone, it is very nice to finally meet you guys. Dan has told me so much about you. So where are your brothers Dan?"

 

[danston]

"probably in their bedrooms, Mum am I right?"

Dan's mum, Jenny nodded wth a smile, she didn't know why, but she already liked Zoe, she seemed to have a warm, loveable smile, and seemed to be genuinly very happy to be there meeting them, Dan's Dad also took a liking to her, but secretly he was quite proud of his son for pulling such a hottie..

"Dan, why don't you take Zoe up to the spare room and get her settled in the spare room, you can introduce her to your brothers while you are up there"

Dan's mum was quite old fashioned, and wouldn't let Dan and Zoe stay in the same room, even though she knew they would be sleeping together already, she wasn't happy with them doing it under her roof...

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

I smiled and tried to say all the right things as his mom suggested that he take me upstairs and show me my room while intorducing me to his brothers. I was ready to get away from her intense stares and looks and followed quickly behind Dan. I could tell that his father was staring at me as well though in a much different way than his mom. I knew where his eyes were looking as I climbed the stairs.

"Dan honey, after we get through with all the introductions I would feel so much better if I could have a hot bath."

 

[danston]

"Yeah of course honey, no problem"

Dan put her bags down in the corner of her room, it was a nice and big for a spare room, a nice double bed made of really solid thick wood, and just a small wardrobe and chest of drawers inside...

Dan pulled her out of the room and pointed to the next door, telling her his rooms was next to hers..

He then took her to the next door across the hall, knocking on it and opening the door, it was his older brothers Rob's room but luckily his little brother was in there as well..

Dan showed Zoe to his brothers "hey guys, this is Zoe... Zoe, this is Rob.. and this is Mike"

They both just stayed where they were and waved, but they both definately admired her as they said hi, both wondering how Dan managed to pull such a hottie...

Dan eventually shut the door and showed her into the big bathroom..

"here you go sweetie, the towels are over there, anything else you need should be in the cupboard, I'm just gonna be downstairs chatting with mum if you need me just shout, OK?"

Dan gave her a quick kiss before he left her to it..

 

[BradJames]

Mike thinks about Dan and Zoe

Mike sat at his desk and was looking something up on the internet, when his brother introduced him to his girlfriend, Zoe. At first, Mike thought his brother had made a joke, but she really was his girlfriend. He wondered how Dan had ended up with such a hot chick. "Why don't I get any girlfriends like that?", he thought But he knew the answer. He was just too shy to ask a girl out. He knew of his looks - he definitely looked better than Dan - but that didn't help him. Everytime he was around girls, his knees got shaky and it was hard for him to speak without stuttering. "Oh well", he then thought, deciding to care about other things and continued his search on-line.

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

Wow, Dan's brother Mike was really cute though a total nerd. As I sat there and watch him go from lusting after me to lost within the monitor of his computer I wondered if he might even still be a virgin. If not he couldn't be to experienced.

"Hi Mike, its really nice to meet you and I look forward to getting to know you much better sweetie."

I put particular emphasis on "getting to know you much better sweetie",and as I said it I bent low down to his eye level allowing him a view down my shirt and of my ample clevage.

Rob was even more quiet and didn't seem to be talkative so I only nodded at him and smiled.

Then Dan showed me to the rather large bathroom with the huge jacuzzi tub. As he shut the door I turned on the water and began filling the tub with very warm water. Finding a bottle of bubble bath I poured some in and watched as the bubbles covered the surface of the water. I then started undressing after making sure that the door was unlocked. I stepped slowly into the hot water and eased my body down below the surface as the bubbles enveloped me to my neck. Laying back and resting my head on the neck roll I closed my eyes.

 

[danston]

Dan went back downstairs and found his parents sitting out in the garden, it was a really nice sunny day, he got himself a cold beer from the fridge and sat down with his parents in the garden, he proceded to tell his parents all about how they met and told them all he knew about her...



Rob heard the water running in the bathroom, he was a man of few words, yeah he thought she was hot but he wasn't going to let her know that, he was too much of a player, and he was the hard man of the family so he didn't let anything show, although he started to imagine what she looked like naked in the bath...

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

The water refreshed me as I imagined how it would be to get my justice. The thoughts however began to arouse me and my hand eased between my legs hidden by the bubbles.

 

[danston]

Dan sat in the garden, bragging to his parents about how ell he was doing at work and all about his upcoming promotions..


Rob sat on his bed, the bathroom right next door to his room where Zoe was naked in the bath, Rob could have sworn that he did not hear her turn the lock on the door, he was really tempted to get a quick peek at her curvy body by walking in on her and pretending to be unaware that she went in there, he could just get a quick look and apologise and leave...

He looked up to see Mike engrossed in his work on the computer, so he decided to go for it, discreetly getting up from his bed, shutting his bedroom door behind him...

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

I slowly eased my finger down until I found that magic spot and began applying small amount of pressure as my imaginations took over. I was totally unaware of anything else but my innermost urges.

 

[danston]

Rob burst through the bathroom door, as if he would when he thought it was empty, he immediately looked over to the hot tub to see Zoe's naked body, admiring her curves and her deep tanned body for as long as he could before she opened her eyes, as soon as he looked over at her he realised what she was doing, her hand between her legs, her mouth slighly open as she let out very soft moans...

"Oh shit, er... er.. sorry, I didn't ..er.. realise anyone was in here"

Rob gave her a little sly smile as he made his apologies, but the shock of what he walked in on made him stand there looking just a little bit longer than he had originally planned...

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

Suddenly I heard a voice and my eyes opened to see Rob standing mouth agape and eyes wide in the bathroom. He looked like a deer in the headlights standing there not knowing whether to run and hide or join me in the tub.

"It's alright sweetie as it is my fault since I forgot to lock the door. But since you are here why don't you come over here and wash my back for me. I was going to call Dan but I hate to bother him as he is visiting with the family."

 

[danston]

Rob quickly regained his cool as she hinted that he go and join her in the tub, he looked her in the eye and grinned at her arrogantly, he knew her type all too well..

"maybe some over time honey"

Rob replied very cooly, he didn't like girls to have any power over him, he just gave her one more grin and turned to leave her, he had gotten his glimpse and was very impressed at what he saw, but he wasn't going to be that easy, he may be the hardman of the family but it didn't mean he would screw over his own brother..

 

[sandinextdoor]

Sandi

Hmmmm, this was going to be harder than expected at least with this one but that was alright as I like a challenge. I knew that he wanted me but for whatever reason was hesitant either because he was scared we would get caught, that perhaps his performance might be liking or maybe he was trying to be true to his brother but I would get my way eventually.

"Alright honey, you are right it is probably best as if you got in the tub we might lose control of ourselves and do something we would regret later. Also I would hate to hurt you baby."

 

[danston]

Rob left the bathroom happy, he had gotten his glimpse of Zoe's hot body, that was enough for now, maybe he would decide to have more later, but for now he closed the bathroom door behind him, and headed downstairs to the garden to join his parents and Dan, grabbing a beer from the fridge and sitting in a lounger chair in the bright sunshine..

 

[BradJames]

Meanwhile, Mike was sitting in his room, with the music turned down. He had heard what had happened in the bathroom and also had heard how Rob had declined Zoe's offer. He now had only one thought. Should he? What the hell, he thought, got up and walked over to the bathroom. The door was closed again, but Mike knew it wasn't locked. He took a deep breath and pushed the door open.

When he saw Zoe in the tub, he almost forgot to act shocked.

"Oh...uhm...sorry...I didn't know you were...in here..."

He almost used the exact same words Rob had used, but he didn't care at that moment. He just admired Zoe's body.

 

[sandinextdoor]

Zoe

Rob had no sooner left when suddenly the other brother Mike appeared and made a weak attempt at acting shocked to find me in the tub.

"Goodness doesn't anyone knock in this house?" I feigned surprise and irritation myself just in case.

"But come on in sweetie but please close and lock the door behind you."

The bubbles were covering the majority of my breasts so I raised up out of the tub giving him a view of my nipples as I ran my wash cloth over them.