add a few words

[BluePoet]

Add about 2 to 5 words to the poem. Keep it brief. Try to keep it interesting. You can add more once someone else has a turn.
Reason? Just for fun and just because I was fooling around on those playground game threads. And the poetry forum is slow.

First line:

The last sun

 

[darkerdreamer]

The last sun

died out today

 

[BluePoet]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks

 

[darkerdreamer]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks

Goodbye cowering biomass

 

[champagne1982]

Goodbye cowering biomass

If life were easy

 

[darkerdreamer]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it.

( I dig this majorly, never seen a poetic exquisite cadaver before. )

 

[champagne1982]

( I dig this majorly, never seen a poetic exquisite cadaver before. )

A couple of years back Lauren Hynde organized an exquisite corpse challenge. It was a lot of fun and I think I have one of mine on the desk top hard drive.

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it
and let the dead pass

 

[vampiredust]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it
and let the dead pass
underneath a regimented sky

 

[champagne1982]

Here it is, my old exquisite corpse
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b395/champagne1982/carrie2Bpoem.jpg

 

[darkerdreamer]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it
and let the dead pass
underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil embrace

 

[champagne1982]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it
and let the dead pass
underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil embrace
monuments strive to forget

 

[The_Fool]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it
and let the dead pass
underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil embrace
monuments strive to forget
memories imbedded in stone

 

[4degrees]

transgressing into sand

 

[sellthecookie]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye shadows on sidewalks.
Goodbye cowering biomass.
If life were easy
We could just accept it
and let the dead pass
underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil embrace
monuments strive to forget
memories imbedded in stone
transgressing into sand
breeding haloes from eclipses

 

[RhymeFairy]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye, shadows
on sidewalks.
Goodbye
cowering biomass.

If life were easy. We could
just accept it and let the dead
pass, underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil. Embrace
monuments. Strive to forget
memories imbedded
in stone, transgressing
into sand. Breeding haloes
from eclipses.

while bronzed bodies

 

[bluerains]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye, shadows
on sidewalks.
Goodbye
cowering biomass.

If life were easy. We could
just accept it and let the dead
pass, underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil. Embrace
monuments. Strive to forget
memories imbedded
in stone, transgressing
into sand. Breeding haloes
from eclipses
while bronzed bodies
shed their husk for
the shelter of blue.
__________________

 

[drown]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye, shadows
on sidewalks.
Goodbye
cowering biomass.

If life were easy. We could
just accept it and let the dead
pass, underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil. Embrace
monuments. Strive to forget
memories imbedded
in stone, transgressing
into sand. Breeding haloes
from eclipses
while bronzed bodies
shed their husk for
the shelter of blue.
__________________

shaken still, she remembered

 

[4degrees]

a cerulean vision of

 

[unapologetic]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye, shadows
on sidewalks.
Goodbye
cowering biomass.

If life were easy. We could
just accept it and let the dead
pass, underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil. Embrace
monuments. Strive to forget
memories imbedded
in stone, transgressing
into sand. Breeding haloes
from eclipses
while bronzed bodies
shed their husk for
the shelter of blue.
shaken still, she remembered
a cerulean vision of
butterflies swirling.

Sinking downward

 

[darkerdreamer]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye, shadows
on sidewalks.
Goodbye
cowering biomass.

If life were easy. We could
just accept it and let the dead
pass, underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil. Embrace
monuments. Strive to forget
memories imbedded
in stone, transgressing
into sand. Breeding haloes
from eclipses
while bronzed bodies
shed their husk for
the shelter of blue.
shaken still, she remembered
a cerulean vision of
butterflies swirling.

Sinking downward,
rats jump ship first

 

[bluerains]

Sinking downward,
rats jump ship first
Redwall rises
Bellringer signals the corp

 

[darkerdreamer]

Sinking downward
rats jump ship first
Redwall rises
Bellringer signals the corp
Mossflower blooms

 

[4degrees]

into a wet chasm

 

[RhymeFairy]

The last sun
died out today.
Goodbye, shadows
on sidewalks.
Goodbye
cowering biomass.

If life were easy. We could
just accept it and let the dead
pass, underneath a regimented sky
into a shallow soil. Embrace
monuments. Strive to forget
memories imbedded in stone,
transgressing into sand.

Breeding haloes
from eclipses, while bronzed
bodies shed their husk
for the shelter of blue.
Shaken still, she remembered
a cerulean vision
of butterflies swirling.

Sinking downward.
Rats jump ship first
Redwall rises
Bellringer signals
the corp, mossflower blooms
into a wet chasm.

the last
golden rays


( ? )

 

[bluerains]

the last
golden rays
in defiance of the wild cat queen