TabooTeller
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- Jul 4, 2003
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If I understand things correctly this forum can be for discussing specific stories. I would like to commenton one. It is "Accedantal Fantasy" by a MsSeminaleWind. First I want to say that I did seend some of these comments to her but no repsonse to see if she got them.
Second I want to say that I do not know when it was orgianlly posted and so I don't if anyone has discussed it before, however I would assume that there could be other newbies like me who may want to discuss it.
I liked this story, it was well written. The opening was good as was the conclusion. The sex was excellent and I may reread that part again soon. I did expect at one point as the main character, not sure of her name, was having sex with the friend's husband and he said he was as big as he always was that she should have figured out it wasn't her husband but obviously that wasn't what MsSeminaleWind wanted.
I Think the ending cries out for a sequel. Of course thinking up another accident might be hard but I thought of one today invloving Motor homes that looked alike. Or the sequel could be the smae story from another character's point of view> So much so that if the writer doesn't want to write one I would except I don't think I would do the characters justice. If one ever was written I would like to see certain things. One is the conversation that the main character was going to have with her husband. She said she would tell everything except one little detail. She obviously wasn't jealous or feeling quilty but what about her husband??? Another thing I would like to see is each couple being loving with their husbands. The way it ended one could wonder if they did love their own husbands. One last things is prehaps a sex scene between the other couple or a longer story of the sex scene between the other sprouses.
Finally it was a Good story, which is one reason I would like another.
Second I want to say that I do not know when it was orgianlly posted and so I don't if anyone has discussed it before, however I would assume that there could be other newbies like me who may want to discuss it.
I liked this story, it was well written. The opening was good as was the conclusion. The sex was excellent and I may reread that part again soon. I did expect at one point as the main character, not sure of her name, was having sex with the friend's husband and he said he was as big as he always was that she should have figured out it wasn't her husband but obviously that wasn't what MsSeminaleWind wanted.
I Think the ending cries out for a sequel. Of course thinking up another accident might be hard but I thought of one today invloving Motor homes that looked alike. Or the sequel could be the smae story from another character's point of view> So much so that if the writer doesn't want to write one I would except I don't think I would do the characters justice. If one ever was written I would like to see certain things. One is the conversation that the main character was going to have with her husband. She said she would tell everything except one little detail. She obviously wasn't jealous or feeling quilty but what about her husband??? Another thing I would like to see is each couple being loving with their husbands. The way it ended one could wonder if they did love their own husbands. One last things is prehaps a sex scene between the other couple or a longer story of the sex scene between the other sprouses.
Finally it was a Good story, which is one reason I would like another.
