I have a story I would like to publish here on lit. A shy young man becomes the focus of a somewhat older woman. She approaches him in a coffee shop they both frequent. Recently out of college he is unemployed and looking for a job. She gives him her phone number telling him she may have a job for him.
He takes the job. It starts innocently enough but grows increasingly degrading. Soon he is living with her and unable to leave. In the end it (he) is her complete slave and even serving as her full toilet.
The story is complete and in need of an editor. I think the my spelling and grammar are ok. Does everything make sense? Is there a good build to the end? What sucks and what works?
Any help would be appreciated even just to read it and comment.
He takes the job. It starts innocently enough but grows increasingly degrading. Soon he is living with her and unable to leave. In the end it (he) is her complete slave and even serving as her full toilet.
The story is complete and in need of an editor. I think the my spelling and grammar are ok. Does everything make sense? Is there a good build to the end? What sucks and what works?
Any help would be appreciated even just to read it and comment.