a woman who wants to be raped ?

[NASCARaddicted]

as far as I know, some women have rape fantasies, they wanted to be "forced" into having sex.

Now, what about this: There is this one woman (Emily) who has this rape fantasies. For some strange reasons, she wants to be raped. Her partner fucks her really hard, but still that ain't enough for this woman.

So one day, Emily has a plan: She puts on a blond wig and sunglasses. Then she goes to a district of the town, where only criminals live.
She hires 3 guys. What this guys have to do: They should rape a woman really hard - both, in the pussy and in the ass. They shouldn't beat or kill her - just rape her. Therefore this guys will get a lot of money. The woman gives this 3 guys a photo of their "victim" - it's Emily, but of course, without the wig and the sunglasses. Also, she tells them, that "the victim" usually hangs around in this one bar, on each wednesday. Usually, she leaves at about midnight .... to reach her home, she has to walk through this dark alley .....

The next wednesday, Emily is sitting in the bar. When it's midnight, she leaves the bar and walks home .... through the dark alley.
"Suddenly" she is attacked and raped by the 3 guys - so he fantasy is fulfilled ......

Do you think this is an interesting story idea ?

 

[SexyChele]

It could be interesting, yes. However, how about a little spin on it? Let's say the 3 guys she originally hires flake on her. They take the money, then skip, afraid this chick is going to turn them in and say they raped this other woman. But, Emily is walking home from the bar, expecting a certain 3 fellows to take her, and she's excited. Well, 3 men do jump her - but they aren't the ones she thinks. Now, you bring in the element of her still wanting to be raped, but also the unknown - she's not really sure who these men are and how far they will carry things out.

I'm just thinking if she hires 3 guys to rape her, and she expects it, the one element that most readers look for in these stories will be missing. That element is fear. You should at least have some of it in the story to appeal to the readers, or it is simply group sex.

Whatever you choose to do, I hope it works out well for you!

 

[BlueDaisy]

Sounds good to me!!!

 

[Guest]

 

[evesdream]

I agree with sexy_chele, something more than the woman fulfililng her fantasy A-B-C needs to happen to create conflict of some sort.

If you want to do something slightly deeper than a one-handed read, you could make her conscience and mounting unease with her plan the conflict of the story.

Or she could change her mind after watching these guys for a while, their casual brutality might frighten her for instance, and part of the drama could be her trying to get out of the situation, successfully or not.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

yeah, I think SexyChele ís correct.

So I have 2 possible changes: The woman hires 1 guy for the rape. But this guy "invites" 2 of his friends to take part in the rape ....

Or, the other (but not so good) change could be: Maybe the story is written from the POV of the rapist.
There is this woman who hires him for the rape. She tells him, how this "other woman" looks, where she works, all that stuff. So he stalks her and rapes her .... but then he recognizes her - his victim is also the woman who hired him ....

 

[sweetnpetite]

yeah, I think SexyChele ís correct.

So I have 2 possible changes: The woman hires 1 guy for the rape. But this guy "invites" 2 of his friends to take part in the rape ....

Or, the other (but not so good) change could be: Maybe the story is written from the POV of the rapist.
There is this woman who hires him for the rape. She tells him, how this "other woman" looks, where she works, all that stuff. So he stalks her and rapes her .... but then he recognizes her - his victim is also the woman who hired him ....

I like both of these ideas. For the last one, she could dress up to hire him, tell him some story or whatever about why she wants this woman to be attacked, set the terms, pay half with the other half due after the deed so long as the woman is not harmed and everything is done as ordered. Then after he tracks her down and carrys it out (she has to really act like a victim the whole time) and then when its done, and he starts to run away or whatever she yells "Wait!" and for some reason he stops, and then she sais "don't you want the other half of your payment?"

 

[Guest]

Another humdinger you could throw into the story is don't have her or her "attacker(s)" change their mind. But on Wednesday night, while she's sitting in the bar waiting for midnight, she happens to MEET a gentleman and he offers to walk her home. both being WAY to drunk to drive. No matter what she does, she just can't get rid of this guy.

Then have the attack happen and make this woman have to PROTECT her new beau while trying to fulfill her fantasy.

 

[peterpan]

I don't want to be afraid of how far a story will go. Someone's long term terror just makes me woozy.

There is also suspense in knowing exactly what is going to happen.

I would enjoy a tale even as simple as: A woman calls up some sort of sex-talk line, finds herself having this totally open talk with these people on the other end about all her fantacies, largely about being ravished. Finally they ask her if she was sure she would really like something like that in real life. She thinks about it. Says yes. They say OK, and hang up.

There is a lot of room for a writer to show us what is going on in her mind as she sits on the couch with the phones disengaged signal, disbelieving, and over the next hour as she waits, getting more and more nervous, and more certain that somehow they ARE coming, until perhaps she tries to flee.

Then the sex is totally NC, yet also totally about her, not someone getting their rocks of while not caring if she is ripping inside.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

sounds interesting.

She things, she will remain unknown, so she confesses her deepest (rape) fantasies. Or she talks to someone who should be trustworthy, like maybe a priest, or a family relative.

The priest tells her, that everyone has some dark fantasies. Sometimes they will be fulfilled, sometimes they will never be fulfilled .....

Maybe the priest thinks: He wants to help the woman fulfill her fantasy .... so he stalks and rapes her.
When I think about it ..... After he raped her, he could take his mask off and tell her: "I hope you appreciate the fact that I helped you to fulfill your fantasy ...... "
(Needless to say, that the woman did not appreciate it, because it was only a fantasy of her, but nothing more .....)

 

[peterpan]

Hmmm, I might be able to enjoy this tale, if the next ten chapters was her stalking and murdering holyier-than-thou clergy. It still wouldn't meet my criteria of erotic.

Sigh. I felt her enjoyment was an important detail.

But I am butting in on your thread. I'll wander off now.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Hmmm, I might be able to enjoy this tale, if the next ten chapters was her stalking and murdering holyier-than-thou clergy. It still wouldn't meet my criteria of erotic.

Sigh. I felt her enjoyment was an important detail.

But I am butting in on your thread. I'll wander off now.

I have no problem if you bring some new ideas in this thread.

Actually, it really ain't "my" thread. When I post something here, usually, I just post something that maybe will inspire someone to a story, I don't really request a story ....