HMILF
Hot MILF
- Joined
- May 30, 2020
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I had an idea for writing a story in WIP (women in prison) genre which morally condemned and belittled the sexual offenders instead of the victim.
The version which I had in my mind was good, but when I actually wrote it, it came out poorly. It became somehow childish, far from reality and full of statements and declarations instead of true emotions.
I still think the original idea was good, but maybe because of my poor writing skills, I couldn't make something good out of it. I don't want to publish my story as it is right now. It probably won't be approved, and even if approved, it's just boring and absurd.
Is anyone interested in my original idea and wishes to correct / complete my story or use it as a basis for a new story? In that case, I can offer my draft which might provide some ideas for such a story.
The version which I had in my mind was good, but when I actually wrote it, it came out poorly. It became somehow childish, far from reality and full of statements and declarations instead of true emotions.
I still think the original idea was good, but maybe because of my poor writing skills, I couldn't make something good out of it. I don't want to publish my story as it is right now. It probably won't be approved, and even if approved, it's just boring and absurd.
Is anyone interested in my original idea and wishes to correct / complete my story or use it as a basis for a new story? In that case, I can offer my draft which might provide some ideas for such a story.
