A Wedding Story (second try)

bigsteve

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This is the second attempt at a thread that started off with a lot of potential, but due to lack of player involvement never seemed to be able to go anywhere. All the parts are now filled. Thanks.

Nancy (The Bride, goddess_euphoria) - Nancy is Steve's longtime friend who she's secretly lusted over, but has never had the guts to admit her feelings for him. As her wedding day approaches she feels it's important that she at least see what she might be missing. Nancy is a chesty 34C, 5'6, black haired, brown eyed girl.

Constance (Steve's Girlfriend, mfucker) - She is normally a withdrawn person, quiet in public, and always in a good mood. She is truely a very energetic and outgoing person, loving to work with her hands and walk around in the woods for hours.

Steve (Friend, bigsteve) - Long time friend of the bride. There has always been sexual tension between us, but for some reason we never got together. I'm 6'0, very fit, blonde hair, blue eyes.

Keith (The Groom, a1stories) - 6' tall, 170 pounds. I'm fairly muscular as I work out 4 days a week. I am a 25 year old accountant. Nancy and I have known each other for about 4 years and have been dating for about 2 and a half years. I proposed last year, on Valentine's Day.

Gwen (Maid Of Honour/Nancy's Sister, angie girl) - 5'7", long blonde hair, slim and fit with a very firm sexy ass, 36d - very femme and quite a bit younger than Nancy. Love to wear very sexy feminine clothes - high heels, short skirts and into a lot of kinky stuff.

The story starts a week before the wedding. It's taking place in Hawaii.

[Edited by bigsteve on 04-24-2001 at 04:53 AM]
 
I was juss looking at your original attempt (dah, I mistakenly posted this there also), and though it never got off the runway, I like the idea and you guys seem interested in developing a story. Hawaii, tension, backbiting rivalries, bitches in heat. Sounds like heaven to me.

I would play either the Bride or her Sister, though maybe the Sister would be better since that might be a a real shit disturber role? But whatever. I'll even play a blonde, since I had a fun time with that in my Twins thread. Try checking out Twins or Jenny Learns About Deepthroat if ya want a clue where I'm coming from.

Unless my world falls apart I can post a couple times a week. Am always looking for a fun thread, so hit me with an email and let me know?
 
OOC: Well angie, I'm sure bigsteve will agree with me that you are good with words. You can play either part that you want, just pick one. If you wanna make your character blonde, do so.
 
OOC: been a while since I've got myself seriously involved in any thread, would love to take up Constance's role, but I might not be around sometimes. If Constance's role is not pivotal or anything, and you don't mind me posting once every two or three days then count me in. If not feel free to open it to someone else yea...
 
Nancy

OOC: I haven't been around in a while either, but since classes are almost over, I should have more time. So I promise I'll write at least once a week. :)
 
And they're off...

Well it looks like we've got a live bunch this time around. mfucker and goddess_euphoria you both have the parts you requested. We can start now, this looks like it should be fun, happy playing everyone!
 
Steve (7 Days Before The Wedding)

OOC: Hope nobody minds me recycling the first post from the last thread, I thought it was a good start.

I step off the plane in the Hawaiian airport. I've come all this way to see one of my best friends, Nancy, get married. The weather here is gorgeous, I feel the need to get out of this stuffy suite and into something a lot more climate friendly. It's been a long flight, 10 hours! and I've been up all night. I took the first flight out after work. I wanted to see Nancy and even though it's early in the morning here in this time zone, I'm feeling a little beat. I look around for a familiar face, but can't see any. I'm hoping Nancy came to pick me up, but I know she might be busy with the wedding and all. I've really missed hanging around with her, so much in fact that I ditched my current girlfriend and came here early in the hopes that we might have some free time together, alone.

Just as I find a comfortable chair with a nice view of the planes I see Nancy approaching me, she looks gorgeous.

Nancy pulls me to her immediately and gives me a huge warm hug. Her hugs are always so great. She has a way of hugging your entire body, only this time I feel myself being pressed closer then usual.


[Edited by bigsteve on 04-25-2001 at 04:29 AM]
 
Deleted

Forget this, I erased it. Will start later. Sorry.

[Edited by angie girl on 04-25-2001 at 09:05 AM]
 
Nancy

OOC: Isn't Gwenn supposed to be Nancy's sister? From Angie's post it didn't sound like it, unless I misunderstood something. And if Steve ditched Constance to come to Hawaii, then when is her part going to come in? (I'm just full of questions today) And it doesn't seem that Angie (Gwenn) is aware that she's supposed to be in the airport with me, maybe it would work better if she weren't? None the less I will add my part in.

IC: I was a little late getting to the airport, it took longer than I expected to talk Keith out of going. He was just being his sweet self, offering to pick up Steve so I wouldn't have to add that on to my list of last minute preparations. But I really wanted a chance to spend a little time alone with Steve. I finally gave Keith a little list of things he could do to help me out and ran out the door after a quick kiss goodbye.

As I drove to the airport, I couldn't believe how nervous I was, Steve was one of my closest friends, but there were times when I thought of him in a very more than friends kind of way. Honestly there were times that I wanted nothing more than to jump his bones. I laughed at myself and shook my head, I couldn't believe what I was thinking!

Once I was in the airport, I had to make my way through the drove of people that had just arrived, I hated big crowds sometimes! I see Steve sitting down in a chair by the window and push my way towards him. He spots me and stands up, his handsome grin spreading across his face. I can imagine I must be grinning like an idiot, but I quickly wrap my arms around Steve, pulling him close to me and breathing in his cologne.

"It's so good to see you!" I say, stretching up to kiss his cheeck. We finally pull ourselves apart and I hook my arm through his as we walk towards the luggage claim.

"So how have things been going with you doll?" I ask him.



[Edited by goddess_euphoria on 04-24-2001 at 09:57 PM]
 
Steve

OOC: I sent an email to angie girl voicing the same concerns as you goddess_euphoria. I also edited my post to not include her at the airport though so it's just you and me now. As far as Constence she can join whenever she wants, but as far as Steve knows she's coming down a day before the wedding, but surprise visits are ok too.

Nancy held me close to her, and it felt great being here and being held by her. She pulled me away and planted a big kiss on my cheek. "So how have things been going with you doll?" she asks. I tell her about work she tries to remain interested, I know I haven't been, and about Constence. I tell her how she'll be down for the wedding but couldn't get away immediately. I take my bags to her car and have a little smile on my face as it's just us and we're going to be able to hang out if just for the ride back to her place. I ask Nancy how the weddings going?
 
OOC: seems like there's a bit of confusion here, think you guys should try to leave the first thread behind, and just play along as it comes yea. :) just a suggestion. anyway, steve, since i might not be around all the time and given Constance's nature, i suppose you could help me write her actions and feelings in public; after all she is pretty quiet and all, shouldn't be too much alterations.

Constance:

34B-24-34 (notice that i'm the only girl around without vital stats...haha)

The plane touched down, and as I put away my knitting aside the craft comes to a complete halt. It was just one of those things to keep me occupied when Steve wasn't around. At least I would be seeing him soon.

OOC: i don't really see a need to enter the fray as yet, steve you can decide whenever she should enter, if not i'll think of something by the next post. thanx.
 
OOC: and yea this is the first time i'm playing a really reserved role, so cut me some slack yea...:)
 
New Start for Gwen

OOC: I only got about 9 things wrong out of 10 on my first attempt so I erased it. I will wait to see how things shape up, and try again, but somebody go ahead and 'tell' Gwen where she is to start off. Sorry, as I hang my head in embarrassment.
 
An Apolgoy

OOC: Sorry angie girl if I came across at all mean spirited, that wasn't my intent, I just thought there was some confusion. I hope you can forgive me ;) Although I did enjoy your post (too bad it's gone). As far as Constence goes mfucker feel free to play her anyway you think the story should dictate. If it helps you any orginally my idea was that she would show up around the wedding, but the way the thread had been going she was actually in Hawaii before me up to who knew what. BTW it was my every intention to leave the first thread behind, I just didn't have a better idea for a first post.
 
OOC: Well looks like we are still missing a bride or am I missing something? Anyone have nay ideas on where we can find one?
 
OOC: goddess_euphoria has taken the part of Nancy the bride a1stories.
 
Nancy

OOC: I liked your post too Angie, it was just a little confusing in reguards to a few other things. Personally, I don't mind if you're my sister or friend, but it's not my thread, ya know? :) And I liked the idea of her being a little trouble maker! (and I'm definately going to keep the idea of Nancy being loaded! ya can never have too much money ~L~)

Oh, and just for the purpose of mind set/character building, could I be filled in on the relationship between Keith & Nancy (any underlying tension, or anything like that?)

IC: Steve tells me about his job, and his girlfriend, I feel a little twinge of jelousy, I guess we always want what we can't have. We climb into the convertable Mustang I've rented for the time I'm here and start down the road.

"How's the wedding going?" Steve asks me. I push my hair behind my ear as I accelerate through the traffic, intentionally taking the longest possible route back to the hotel.

"Well, so far the only problem has been with the dress, but that’s enough of a problem in itself ya know, a girl can’t get married without a wedding dress!” For some reason I felt a little strange talking to Steve about the wedding, almost like telling a current boyfriend about an ex, wow, how screwed up is that? I shook my head to clear my thoughts and smiled, deciding to change the subject.

OOC: Ok, it just occured to me that it might help to know a little more about Steve’s likes and dislikes, since it’s kinda hard to chat with someone who’s supposed to be your best friend when ya don’t know much of anything about them. If ya want you can just e-mail me so we’re not cluttering up the place too much!
 
Steve

I noticed that Nancy seemed very aloof in the car, and avoided every attempt I made with her to talk about the wedding. Almost about as much as I tried to avoid talking about Constence. Things had been a little shaky with us, in my opinion. She was very focused on her career as of late and truth be told we really hadn't been seeing a lot of each other. I almost began to wonder if she was seeing someone else. Nancy mentioned her wedding dress, and suddenly I was filled with images of ravashing her in it before her wedding. Maybe it was the heat, but I was sure feeling something now that I was around Nancy. She was arousing things in me I hadn't felt lately. Like a joy of life, and good spiritedness.

The drive back seemed to be taking forever, but I didn't mind it was giving us some time together, and I was seeing the beautiful countryside. It suddenly occured to me as a shock, "Were you able to move up my reservations at the hotel for me?"

I suddenly had images of sleeping on a couch at wherever Nancy was staying and having to listen to her and her fiance fucking all night long.
 
Erie Gwendolyn

Well somebody screwed up the travel arrangements. Of course it was probable me, so I better not bitch too loud. Even with this multi-complexity palm pilot thingie I was lucky to know what day of the week it was. Well I can’t say that this foul up was total bad. Two days early before my Big Sis arrived for her Hawaii, tropical, paradisical, flowered heaven wedding. This resort was one step over the line from heaven, with black volcanic beaches, isolated coves, villas with private pools. Out on the western end of these island places. In the Pacific Ocean, I am pretty sure that is the right ocean anyway.

And food, drink and luxury any girl would cry for. I had spent the two days in some kinda state of total non-being. At first tempted by the strong dark male masseuse, and then even more so my the slim island native female pedicurist. But Gwen was proud of herself. She had resisted. No tension these two days, not even sexual.

But today the wedding party arrived, Big Sis and all. If my friggin palm pilot worked at all she should be on her way from the airport right now. Probable with good old reliable Steve, who might not be able to keep his tongue in his mouth during the drive. And I suppose Connie would be here too, whew, Miss Earth Mother, and lemme tell you, that lil dish can hold my hand for a walk in the woods any day. I should be so lucky, but this was the tropics, so who knows?

So here I am, tripping down the stone garden walk way, clickety click in my spiked heeled sandals, wearing a rose and peach slip dress that was illegally short, and so flimsy it clearly showed the outline of my large pink nipples, and my tiny tie string panties. Sigh. I love my clothes.

As I perched on the high bar stool with my legs crossed Richmond, my fav bartender greeted me.

What can I get Little Sis? He grinned, but the pina colada was already in front of me. Yeah, ok, I had pretty much confessed all about the wedding and the family in the last two days to this tall, so-dark skinned import from Jamaica who spoke with that clean melodic speech I loved so much. (OOC: somebody oughta play his character if they wanna get laid by Gwen, lol!)

‘Today’s the day Richmond’, I sighed and reached over to clasp his hand. Against his meaningful strong hands, mine a pale excuse.

‘Erie, Gwendolyn, erie,’ he said, which I think he had told me to mean, have a good day, or all will be well. Something like that anyway. All will be well my ass.

So much shit to stir, so little time.
 
OOC: seems like it's inappropriate for me to come in now, enjoy reading all your posts though...:)
 
I was sitting in Nancy's apartment, waiting for them to come back. I knew she used to have feelings for Steve and was a little concerned when she talked me out of going to pick him up but then I thought about our wedding, which was a week away. Of course, if she did fool around with Steve, I might be forced to fool around with her sexy little sister Gwen. I had a crush on Gwen for awhile Before (and during) my relationship with Nancy. Gwen was very sexy and had wild side, which is what I liked most. Oh, I hope they all get here soon.
 
Nancy

Steve asks me if I've been able to move his reservations up, seeming a bit concerned, I imagine he'd be less than thrilled to have to share the appartment with Keith and I.

"It's amazing what you can do with money," I laugh as I reply. "They tried to tell me the room I'd reserved for you wouldn't be avaliable for another 3 days, so I went directly to the people staying there. They gladly left yesterday to spend the last 3 days of their vacation at a very exclusive spa." I smiled, "you know, the one that daddy's cousin Sherri owns." He smiled back at me, shaking his head in disbelief.

I laughed and said, "Well, I didn't really think any of us would be too thrilled with the idea of you, Keith and I all sharing an appartment. If we'd had to, I'm sure the two of us would drive Keith crazy with our staying up all night playing nintendo and blabbing and getting sugar highs. And he'd like it even less in the morning when he found us all cuddled up together, cause that's how those nights always seemed to end." I laughed, "on second thought, that sounds like a lot of fun!"

OOC: Maybe Steve and I roomed together in college or something? And Nancy, for the most part thought of him as a big brother/girlfriend type for the longest time but something changed that? Just a few thoughts.

[Edited by goddess_euphoria on 04-29-2001 at 11:46 PM]
 
Gwen

'My Sister's wedding', I reminded Richmond when he asked why I was on holiday in Hawaii. I was on my uncounted-th cool drink and was hitting a new level of relaxation. Happy to lean over the bar slightly, allowing my bartender buddy to enjoy the sight of my rose tipped breast as the low front of my dress fell away.

'Well I'm sure then that you will be thrilled for the bride and groom?' he asked as he deftly replaced my drink.

'Ah'll be frilled if I can get the groom in my panties afore the big day!' I said with a slur and a laughing surpressed snort that even cracked Richmond up.

'I am sure Miss Gwen is making a joke,' he said politely.

Yeah, a joke. Well I would be a joke if I stayed here an drank anymore fruity rum killers, so maybe go up to my room? ugh, all alone, anxious, no way. But maybe I could make it over to those lounge chairs, sit back, clear my head and hope the happy weddding party would so up soon. Then the games could begin. Maybe.
 
I was so releaved to find out that Nancy was able to bump up the reservations on my room. I smiled and laughed with relief, which I hope she wouldn't misinterpret. She started reminicing back to college days when we would just crash at each others houses. It almost seemed like we were dating sometimes, but for some reason we never made it past the friendship stage. She started to trigger feelings in me when she mentioned the staying up all night, hanging out and just waking up cuddling the next morning. That was something I'd been missing for a long while. Don't get me wrong I think Constence is great, but sometimes I miss whatever it is that Nancy and I have.

I turned to her in the car and said, "There's nothing stopping us from doing all those things again. I mean, it is your wedding, shouldn't the bride be able to get whatever she wants" I said smiling.
 
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