A villian's work

ToolmanTim

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"Stand back." Jack waited for the bank manager to step away, then he flexed his right hand, a sheen of yellow light formed around it, more colors joining it until Jack reached his hand forward, disintegrating the lock and ripping the door open from the inside, breaking one of the door's hinges. Jack took the duffel bag off his back and filled it up with bills. Jack dropped the bag on the ground, cracked his knuckles and concentrating, light and electricity flowing around his hands. Then there was a flash of light and all the lights and computers in the bank went down.

"What the hell was that?" asked the bank manager, rubbing his eyes.

"Electromagnetic pulse, kills any tracking devices," Jack hefted the full sack of money over his shoulders. Jack walked out into the main foyer of the bank. Lights were flashing through the window, blue and red, and Jack sighed.

"Come out with your hands up, we have the building surrounded," came the megaphone message from outside. Jack checked to make sure his mask was still in place. It was an ornate mask, made of paper mache and designed to draw attention to itself. The rest of the outfit were a pair of basic black sweat pants and sweat shirt with black loafers from Wal-mart. Jack had wanted to be as non-descript as possible so the mask was the only thing they could report. Assured that the mask was firmly in place Jack walked outside and raised his hands.

The police had a barracade set up and there must have been at least a dozen officers with guns aimed at him. Jack looked up to the sky. Light and electricity began to coalesce around his entire body and an instant later Jack was a streak in the sky, leaving the cops and the bank miles behind him as he flew away.

He landed on the roof of his dorm and took the mask off, gathering energy about his hand and disintegrating the mask. He checked his watch on his other hand. "Shit, I'm going to be late for class."

Jack went through the roof entrance and down the stairs to his dorm. He tossed his duffel full of cash under his bed and quickly changed into jeans and a polo shirt, grabbed his regular book bag and headed off to his world civ class. If he ran he just might make it.

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OOC: Jack is obviously the villain of the story. What I'm looking for is a female to play the hero. She'd also be a college student by day and a super hero by night. As college students the two become friends and eventually lovers, while their alter-egos are at each other's throats. His daring bank robberies can't be stopped by the police and so the female lead takes it upon herself to stop this evil villain. As the story goes forward his thefts become bolder and he learns to harness his powers as weapons so there could even be a few fight scenes.

Any lady interested in the part is welcome to drop an OOC here, though I'd prefer a PM. You'll have alot of freedom to create on your own, friends, family, we can even work on the storyline together.

Thanks!
 
Charlie was in college sitting in Civ bored out of her mind as she bit her pencil thinking about the bank heist that she just missed the perp got away..

She wasn't to happy about that one bit as she looked around wondering who he might be ..She knew since she was a child what she could do it was annoying as hell being in her family to have to chill the wine or ice tea for that matter but after awhile she put it to good use..

She had made her own outfit slinky as it was it served her well.. and a sword of ice not many people would think of that she mused daydreaming not paying attention to the teacher once again..

As she looked over she saw a guy everytime she saw him he gave her goose bumps and she wondered why.
 
Professor Berkhauser gave Jack a dirty look as he came in a few minutes after the lecture had started. Jack kept his face down and moved silently to his desk. He got his notebook out and started copying down what the prof had written on the white board. Old Berkhauser was a good professor even if he had a bias toward Germany as the premiere country in the world. It only took a few moments to catch up with the lecture, and after that he was free to relax. This was an intro class needed to fill out the core curriculum and while Jack wasn't the next Einstein he was far enough above average for this class to be a snap.

His eyes landed on a pretty girl across the room. He was pretty sure her name was Charline or Charlie or something. Jack grinned when he caught her looking at him. He held her eyes for a moment and winked. There was something about stealing ten million dollars or so that gave a man a sense of confidence. Jack even knew what he'd use for an openning line.

After an hour Berkhauser finally finished up and Jack tossed his notebook back in his bag and made his way through the overcrowded classroom over to the pretty girl. He smiled at her, but she didn't seem to see him. Jack cleared his throat and she turned.

"Uh, excuse me, I'm Jack," he offered his hand, "I missed the first half of class and was wondering if I could maybe borrow your notes? Maybe go over the class over lunch? I haven't eaten yet."
 
Charlie looked at the guy and smiled "Yeah I got the notes and Lunch as long as your buying " she got up and put her notebook in her bag as she looked at him

"You know Jack most men don't bother comeing up to me what makes you so brave" she smiled as they both walked out of class and down the hall...

She tucked a stray hair behind her ear as she looked over at him..She got those damn goose bumps again and it made her wonder what the hell was going on it wasn't like her to get this maybe it was an early warning signal that she had or maybe something else she mused as she smiled at him flashing a dimple on her lift cheek..

"Don't worry about the teach I had him before for History " she grinned "He pretty much easy to figure out and his tests are easy " she smiled at Jack
 
"You know Jack most men don't bother comeing up to me what makes you so brave"

"What can I say, I was inspired by your beauty." He winked at her. As they exited the building Jack pulled out a pair of sunglasses, quickly placing them over his eyes. He turned on the quad toward the cafeteria.

"And I'm happy to buy lunch as long as it's at the caf. I've got a meal card." He turned his head slightly and grinned at her. "I'd take you out on the town, but I'm trying to keep the fact that I'm a millionaire a secret so I'm masquerading as a poor college student without a car." His grin was to make her think he was joking. There was nothing quite like the truth to mislead someone with.

"Don't worry about the teach I had him before for History " she grinned "He pretty much easy to figure out and his tests are easy " she smiled at Jack

"I'm not to worried, it's a survey class. How hard could it be?"

They had made it to the cafeteria. Jack stepped forward, grabbed the door and held it for her as he half bowed.

"After you milady."
 
Charlie smiled as he put on some sun glasses as heard him say he was a millionare she couldn't stop her self as she looked at him "You sure you didn't rob a bank " she grinned "Just jokeing"

They both got to the cafeteria as she walked in and got a tray as she looked at him "What all glasses are you takeing Jack?" she smiled grabbing some fruite she looked at him shyly ..

She never enjoyed Men because they just seemed to want her for a trophy so she ended up just shooing them away from her as she looked at Jack and yet he seemed different weather he was a millionare will that would not matter much and she wasn't impressed at all..

She waited for him to pay as they found a table in a far off corner as she sat there and got her notes out she looked at him "I have tons of notes so which part do you want ' she grinned at him ..
 
He laughed at her joke about robbing banks. "You figured it out, I'm a millionaire bank robber. While we're engaging flights of fancy why not give me super powers like the Ice Angel, or Angel Ice or whatever her name is. I can fly through the air, bend steel in my bare hands and dance on the head of a pin." He laughed again as he grabbed a banana. "Hehe, dance on a pin."

Jack ended up with a philly cheese steak and steak fries to go with his banana and Pepsi. He paid for them both and followed Charlie to the far corner of the dining room. He put his tray down and took a look at her notebook.

"I only need the first page, I was only a few minutes late." He got out his own notebook and started transcribing her notes.

"I'm taking a bunch of survey classes this semester. I'm supposed to declare a major by the end of this semester, but I don't really know what I want to do." He paused and looked at her, winking. "Besides rob banks that is. Dad says accounting and law are where the money is these days, so I may look at becoming a lawyer or accountant. I don't really know though. What do you want to do?"
 
Charlie looked at him and chuckled as she handed him the first page of the notes.. "I'm not sure I think maybe a writer or maybe a photographer for models that sounds like fun to me " she smiled "Though I probably could be a Model if I wanted to I just don't want to be in the lime light "

She gave him a look "I heard Computers are where the money is at " she shruged and ate her fruite salad and smiled at him , He was good looking in the cocky sort of way.. and yet she felt there was more to him then just meets the eye and wanted to get to know him more ..

"So are you saying that you have a Major Hard on for the Ice Angel?" she grinned at him
 
"No, I do not have a major jones for the Ice Angel, because dating a superhero would ruin my bank-robbing, millionaire lifestyle." Jack chuckled, "Lets be serious, even if I did have a hard on for Ice Angel I doubt she'd be interested in a guy like me. What do I have to offer a goddess like that? I mean besides my huge college debt. You think a girl like that can be won over with personality and charm?"

Jack handed Charlie her notebook back. He picked up his philly cheese steak and grinned at her. "So, have you written anything I might of heard of? Or do you have some photos on display somewhere?" He took a big bite out of his cheese steak as he listened to her answer.
 
Charlie smiled "Yeah I have a few photos " she pulled a few out of her bag on of them was her self and the others were just nature in black in whites

"I kinda like the old style black and white" she smiled at him showing him as she finnished up her salad..

"Why do you say your a villian , I always thought most Villian were either nuts or just misunderstood and seeking attention you don't seem like the guy seeking attention " I mused at him

"So you want to work with money , Why not open a Casino hell open two" I teased him watching his face .. He hide alot of him self and yet part of only what he wanted me to see is there .. That intrequed me in some ways ..
 
Jack picked up the photo of Charlie, taking a long look at it as he had another bite of hoagie. He turned it and showed Charlie as he swallowed. "I admit, I like the subject of this photo, the girl is very pretty." He winked at her and took another bite of his sandwich, looking over the other photos. "These are pretty good too, but I like the first one the best."

He grinned at her when she mentioned villains. "Ok, you figured me out. I am looking for someone's attention. But it's not Ice Angel." Jack caught Charlie's eye, smiled and looked away, taking another bite of his hoagie.

He snorted when she suggested openning a casino. "Sure, and while I'm at it I could invest in real estate in Aspen, you know, just to get my feet wet. Sorry, I don't have the capitol to build a casino. Maybe after I rob a few more banks." Jack dipped a steak fry in ketchup and ate it, still smiling at Charlie.
 
Charlie looked at him "And if you rob a few banks what makes you thin Ice Angel won't find you?" she grinned at him "Thanks I don't think I'm pretty but it works for a background on what I want to do"

She was amazed of how of a good time she was haveing it didn't happen often as she blushed and looked away , Her thoughts going somewhere it shouldn't her goosebumps started to form all over her body as she felt her nipples get hard..

This was a first for her most guys repulsed her but Jack does something else , She was almost afraid to find out ..
 
"See, that's your problem, you keep forgetting I have superpowers. Remember I can dance on the head of a pin. Not alot of people can do that you know." Jack laughed and sipped his Pepsi. He was having a good time too and if he wasn't mistaken he could just see the outline of her nipples forming under her shirt. He wasn't sure if it was a sign of attraction or just being cold but he liked it.

"I'm not going to argue with you over whether or not you're pretty, because, well, you'd lose, and I mean really lose. By like a landslide. And I don't want to do that to you on a first date." He put the soda down and picked up the sandwich. "So, what project are you working on that you need a picture of yourself as the background?" Jack took a bite of the sandwich and listened to Charlie.
 
Charlie chuckled at the pin head remark as she smiled at Jack he was full of life and it seemed nothing got him down , yet she wondered why he was so single

"Well I have this art class and I have to have a personal photo of ourself and If I do good I can use some of my photos at the new art musem they just put in " she smiled at him "IT could mean my big break or it could break me if you think about it "

She took a drink of her water and looked at him "I don't know I just like the idea of seeing beauty in things instead of everything being so down right rotten or evil " she smiled "I went on a nature hike last year with the class and took my camera I actually spotted a black widow spider it seems everyone is afraid of them but yet her web was so pretty I couldn't stop my self from getting a close up of course me being not a nature natural I got bitten " she giggled "Had to spend three weeks in the hospital because I found out not only was she poisonous but I was allergic to all bug bites "

She pulled out the pictrue and showed him ..
 
Jack took a long look at the spiderweb photo as he ate his sandwich. He finally handed it back to Charlie. "That's really good. If you submit that I bet it'll get in the museum. But tell me, was it worth the price?"
 
Charlie looked at him "Noooooooo but the lesson is learned I guess " she grinned at him "I'll post it up but if doesn't make I'm blameing you " she looked over it was almost time to go

"What is your next class?"
 
Jack finished up his hoagie and pulled out his schedule.

"Looks like Intro to Physics, gotta get those core science credits out of the way. Hey, I had a pretty good time, I'd be happy to walk you to your next class." He grinned at her, "That is, if you want me to."
 
Charlie smiled "sure I'm going to Art Class now " she got up and put her food tray on the trash can and throw her stuff away as she looked at him "I had a good time Jack thank you " she looked at him ..

They walked out of the cafeteria as she looked over at him "I'm sure I'll see you in class again tommorrow is my day off "
 
Jack bussed his tray and followed Charlie out. "Tomorrow, say lunch? I've got a morning class but I'm free the rest of the day if you want to do something? I don't have a car, but if you do, or know someone we could hit the mall and catch a movie or something?"

Nothing quite like that feeling of throwing yourself out there and wondering how the girl would respond. She had said she had a good time but Jack felt his knees get a little weak while he waited for her response
 
Charlie looked at him 'Sure I have a beater that sounds good Jack " she wrote down her cell number "Give me a call on the time " she smiled ..

She started to walk ahead and stopped "Jack why don't you have a girlfriend?" she looked at him as she hugged her book bag waiting for his answer
 
Jack wasn't sure what a beater was but he figured it was some kind of car or motor vehicle. Either way he made sure to get those digits down cause the girl said yes. It was pretty much all he could do to keep from leaping for joy. Then she laid a whopper of a question on him. Jack caught up with Charlie and kept walking her towards the art building.

"Well, I never really thought about that before. Why don't I have a girlfriend? Hmmm. Lets take stock of the situation. I'm an 18 year old college student in his second semester, with no car, no real money, who doesn't play sports and has no clue what he wants to do with his life. Gee, you'd think the women would be knocking down my door." Jack stopped walking, Charlie getting a step ahead of him. Jack shook his head.

"If I could do that moment over, and I can't, but if I could, I would have said, 'because I only met you today.'" Jack smiled at Charlie and stepped toward her.

"C'mon, lets get you to class."
 
Jack walked me to class , I enjoyed talking to him and I was looking forward to seeing him tommorrow...

Of course I didn't know how busy I was going to be ..

I Knew who I need to be at times at this time I had to be Ice Angel as I watched three men hold a woman at gun point my wings were blue as my hair turned blue as well and my face at this change .. I swooped down "Is that any way to treat a lady boys "

I froze their guns and rolled my eyes as I looked at the woman and handed her purse back to her "Run" as I said that I froze their feet to the ground and grinned

"This is why I don't have a social life" I glared at them .. They watched me with their eyes I could tell they liked what I was wearing due to the fact that I only had my bare essestials covered ...

"Lets go boys I need to drop you off at the police station and then I have to go do something maybe eat chocolate" I muttered to my self on the last part as I picked them both up by their shirts and carried them to the police station freezeing them again in place i left a note and flew to the top of the building waiting for my next save ..
 
For his part, Jack was having a hard time paying attention to classes. He had hoped intro to physics would give him some insights into his powers, but even the allure of being able to do more with his abilities wasn't enough to keep his mind from replaying their conversation over and over in his head. He still didn't know what a beater was, besides the quidditch position from Harry Potter, but he never really got into cars, so it could be anything. And Jack found it odd that charlie would wonder why he hadn't been snatched up yet by the love train. He didn't see himself as much of a catch, not like a football star or one of the campus "cool" kids, or even one of the band guys. But Charlie liked him and that was good enough for him.

He had dinner with his roommate at the caf, but didn't see Charlie there. He was a little disappointed, but spent his evening doing homework in the cafeteria and then headed to one of the anonymous computer labs and did some research on banks in the downtown area. He liked to know what kind of vault he'd have to deal with and the floor layout before he went in.

After that Jack headed back to the dorm, still undecided on his next big score. He broke out his sketch book and started designing his next mask.
 
I wasn't haveing a good I mused as I spent most of my time and working I forgot lunch with Jack "Damn you peopLe" Charlie growled as she speed off to change and get in her1965 mavrick slick black as she pulled up to the school she waited for him to get out of class hopeing he would see her and not miss her at all
 
His roommate had gotten in late that night, coming from a mid-week kegger over at one of the frats. He'd woken Jack up when he stumbled in and fired up the playstation 2 and popped in Soulcaliber 2. Since he was awake anyway Jack joined his roommate and the two of them killed each other with pixelated swords till four in the morning. Jack overslept and was late to his first class earning the enmity of his professor. He ducked into the gym to grab a quick shower before his physics lab. Consequently he got to lab a few minutes late. This was not a good week for punctuality.

The professor kept Jack after class, extolling the virtues and benefits of being a physics major. Jack was noncommittal and left in a hurry not to miss Charlie. He actually walked past her car as it was pulling up. He needed to do a double take before he saw Charlie was driving it. He walked up to the driver's side and grinned at her.

"Howdy stranger, going my way?"
 
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