a vampire seducing a girl who uses a wheelchair

[coffinbait]

here's my story idea I have read all the stories about a vampire eating a chick out and sinking his fangs into her gentalia.
but what if she couldn't feel below her waist? because she was born paralysed. I happen to be paralysed from the waist down,but the romance and sensuality of vampires turn me on a lot. I would love to have someone write a story about me being seduced by a vampire who makes me his forever,
I feel alienated from most women because I have no idea what an orgasm feels like. This would really make me happy if I could read a story like this.
My name is Danielle I don't really care who the vampire is as long as he is male with dark hair. I'd like him to be wearing tight leather pants with a trench coat and be into using light s&m on me. blindfolds, whips, feathers, handcuffs things like that. I can't wait for this story! Let's say he is drawn to me because I pine for him in my dreams every night until he has a connection with my mind that he cannot ignore.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

here's my story idea I have read all the stories about a vampire eating a chick out and sinking his fangs into her gentalia.
but what if she couldn't feel below her waist? because she was born paralysed. I happen to be paralysed from the waist down,but the romance and sensuality of vampires turn me on a lot. I would love to have someone write a story about me being seduced by a vampire who makes me his forever.

I feel alienated from most women because I have no idea what an orgasm feels like. This would really make me happy if I could read a story like this.
My name is Danielle I don't really care who the vampire is as long as he is male with dark hair. I'd like him to be wearing tight leather pants with a trench coat and be into using light s&m on me. blindfolds, whips, feathers, handcuffs things like that. I can't wait for this story! Let's say he is drawn to me because I pine for him in my dreams every night until he has a connection with my mind that he cannot ignore.

Interesting idea and one no quite along the main stream. The usual is the virginal young professor's daughter with giant, fake boobs who spends the entire story swooning for some unfathomable reason.

This idea has a missing element. The main stream story always has a woman victim who is perfectly able to defend herself. Not the case here so why would the vampire choose you, Danielle, when you are so vulnerable?

The two things I could think of would be the "decendant of the arch enemy" sceniero. Your great grandfather was Van Helsing or something. That's pretty cheesy.

The other thing is something specifically about you on that particular night (I assume the attack would be at night). I'm not sure what. Menstural Blood perhaps.

Anyone have ideas?

 

[Carnevil9]

Maybe the vampire is in a weakened condition. Maybe he hasn't had any blood in a long time, and needs a victim that can't fight back. Maybe he was buried underground for centuries a la Lestat, and needs to gradually recuperate while sucking on some easy pickin's.

Or, alternate hypothesis: maybe he is a vampire with a conscience, or a tender heart, and doesn't want to inflict pain. So he chooses a victim with no feeling below the waist, one that he can bite and suck to his heart's content, and never have to feel guilty about causing her physical distress. Yes, he is stealing her undying soul, but at least he is not giving her an ouchie.......Carney

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

coffinbait. . . I'd be willing to write this. You have a PM option that needs to be turned on, that or just yahoo me if you'd like.

I've written a couple of Erotic Horrors that are strickly that Horror that deals with vampires and their lust for blood. I've also written a series about a blind couple called - Loving in Silence there are 3 additional subtitled chapters to it.

Here is the link to my submission page here on Lit. I have done several reader requested works and I would like to write this for you.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=506530&page=submissions

I get the impression you're looking for a romantic work, so if that is the case I do a lot of romantic and in depth story development, depending on how much you want your true self in the story, there would be some questions I'd need to ask you, so you think on that and let me know.

Thanks,

RedHairedandFriendly

 

[sunandshadow]

Hmm, with the paralysis being below the waist, the lips, neck, nipples would still be sensitive, right? Maybe an analogy between the vampire's unending craving for blood and the yearning for the impossible orgasm?

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think you are all missing the point of this very strongly. Particularly if you'll excuse my insensitivity, but the original post was made by a woman who is in this condition and noted a lack of connection with her gender because of it.

I propose we with a Ricean or Whedonesque "good" vampire. I can easily see Lestat meeting a woman, perhaps on a erotic story bulletin board and hearing about her plight. He gets her information via, PM and goes to meet her. He then attacks her, drinking her blood and gives her an off she can't refuse. Die, here and now drained of blood or come with me. Become a vampire, my blood can restore your legs, and so much more, you'll be stronger than men, faster, you'll be immortal. All those things you've been missing in life, you can have them. All.

We'll walk, run, skip, jump and fuck, fuck till you can't take anymore.

You can either end it there or at this point you can spin it around and turn into a tragedy where she realizes she'd rather see the sun, eat human food, associate with her family, go to church perhaps if that is her kind of thing, than walk and we can end with her ending her life or something. A sort of the the grass is always greener story.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I don't see all of that in her request. That's why I asked her to PM and discuss it. For anyone to want to and be willing to write a reader a story, they need to ask a lot of questions.

She also didn't say she wanted to write it, but for someone to write it. She wasn't asking for a stroke story either . . . but she wants seduction. Also no mention anywhere in her post does it say she wants relieved of her paralysis, another thing the writer would need to discuss with coffinbait.

I had to do a lot of research on sign-language and the technologies for the stories I did dealing with blindness. For a reader to really feel the story has them in it, there has to be some really good communication between writer and reader, otherwise you can lose the reader and you've only written a story for everyone and not one person.

I may be off in my assumption, but without communication then one never really knows.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I don't deny the seduction part, I don't feel that I described a stroke story either.

As for the rest, yeah you may be right, there is definitly more information needed. I'm just unable to form a solid idea of a story of any level sexuality that involves a body part that cannot feel. Might be my inexperience, its not like romance is my strongest field.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I'd say until she posts again there isn't much anyone can do but guess at what she wants and then a person isn't writing for her anymore, but for them.

Sorry if I came across implying you were suggestion a stroke story, that wasn't my intention. ~ Red

 

[Sean Renaud]

No offense taken. Its all good. And yeah we really can't do much but guess. I'm not real good at writing for others anyway, I take what they suggested and then twist it into something I enjoy and hope they do also.

As for the me describing a stroke story, one, no harm done. Two if you were looking at my track record it wouldn't be innappropriate to think that is mostly what I'm good for.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I enjoy writing for others, in the end though if I don't feel I can do it, I won't. I have to be able to get pleasure from writing it or there is no story.

I didn't look at your track record. I'm willing too, though... even I enjoy a good stroke story now and then. I've written some of those also. If you've seen my track record I've written a variety of stuff. I don't try and assume only strokes come from some writers and other stuff from other writers. It all depends on the story.

 

[va4footlvrs]

Interesting idea and one no quite along the main stream. The usual is the virginal young professor's daughter with giant, fake boobs who spends the entire story swooning for some unfathomable reason.

This idea has a missing element. The main stream story always has a woman victim who is perfectly able to defend herself. Not the case here so why would the vampire choose you, Danielle, when you are so vulnerable?

The two things I could think of would be the "decendant of the arch enemy" sceniero. Your great grandfather was Van Helsing or something. That's pretty cheesy.

The other thing is something specifically about you on that particular night (I assume the attack would be at night). I'm not sure what. Menstural Blood perhaps.

Anyone have ideas?

http://science.howstuffworks.com/fr...rl=http://www.afn.org/~vampires/articles.html

"Not so, the modern literary Vampire. Apparently, in a society that has become more complex, the road to Vampirism has become quite simple. There seems to be just one means by which the Dark Gift may be bestowed and that is by surrendering enough blood to the Vampire and in turn drinking some of it's blood -- in other words, and exchange of body fluids.

This implies that the modern day Vampire wanted to become a Vampire and that he or she asked for it. The guilt is shifted from the victim-for-nourishment to the one who has actually chosen to become one of the un-dead. This is an important shifting of guilt to the Vampire, a symbol of buried sexuality from the "victim".

I think this view of the vampire mythology is very appropriate here.

Also, somewhere on howstuffworks, there is a reference to a belief that practitioners of withccraft were highly succeptable to becoming vampires. Perhaps the victim offered up some dark spell that called the vampire.

 

[Sean Renaud]

http://science.howstuffworks.com/fr...rl=http://www.afn.org/~vampires/articles.html

"Not so, the modern literary Vampire. Apparently, in a society that has become more complex, the road to Vampirism has become quite simple. There seems to be just one means by which the Dark Gift may be bestowed and that is by surrendering enough blood to the Vampire and in turn drinking some of it's blood -- in other words, and exchange of body fluids.

This implies that the modern day Vampire wanted to become a Vampire and that he or she asked for it. The guilt is shifted from the victim-for-nourishment to the one who has actually chosen to become one of the un-dead. This is an important shifting of guilt to the Vampire, a symbol of buried sexuality from the "victim".

I think this view of the vampire mythology is very appropriate here.

Also, somewhere on howstuffworks, there is a reference to a belief that practitioners of withccraft were highly succeptable to becoming vampires. Perhaps the victim offered up some dark spell that called the vampire.

The thing is that it doesn't truly imply that at all even in the modern literaly vampire. Read Rice. Louis had his choice, die from blood loss or drink. The same for that interviewer.

If you go with Buffy, there are multiple cases of Did they MAKE him drink. I don't deny that some of the modern vampires wanted what was given but quite often they were either forced to drink, or had the choice between dying and turning. Kinda like Aetheists pray during disasters I would think even most good people would drink when faced with their own death.

 

[va4footlvrs]

The thing is that it doesn't truly imply that at all even in the modern literaly vampire. Read Rice. Louis had his choice, die from blood loss or drink. The same for that interviewer.

If you go with Buffy, there are multiple cases of Did they MAKE him drink. I don't deny that some of the modern vampires wanted what was given but quite often they were either forced to drink, or had the choice between dying and turning. Kinda like Aetheists pray during disasters I would think even most good people would drink when faced with their own death.

I was just sharing some insight I came across that I thought might help. But I guess I can't really argue with the way Ann Rice or the writers of Buffy did it.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm just a big vamp fan, those two are just some of the longest running consistent vampire universe.

The same rules apply mostly in Vampire the Masquerade, and seemed to in John Carpenter's Vampires and Dracula 2000. If you have other references, I wasn't really trying to shoot you down as much as say that your interpretation of the information you had seemed kinda flawed.

 

[AlienHunter]

here's my story idea I have read all the stories about a vampire eating a chick out and sinking his fangs into her gentalia.
but what if she couldn't feel below her waist? because she was born paralysed. I happen to be paralysed from the waist down,but the romance and sensuality of vampires turn me on a lot. I would love to have someone write a story about me being seduced by a vampire who makes me his forever,
I feel alienated from most women because I have no idea what an orgasm feels like. This would really make me happy if I could read a story like this.
My name is Danielle I don't really care who the vampire is as long as he is male with dark hair. I'd like him to be wearing tight leather pants with a trench coat and be into using light s&m on me. blindfolds, whips, feathers, handcuffs things like that. I can't wait for this story! Let's say he is drawn to me because I pine for him in my dreams every night until he has a connection with my mind that he cannot ignore.

I luv stories involving people with disabilities I have a fetishe about those kind of stories hehe
I've written an erotic story involving vampires maybe i could alter it a bit

 

[va4footlvrs]

I'm just a big vamp fan, those two are just some of the longest running consistent vampire universe.

The same rules apply mostly in Vampire the Masquerade, and seemed to in John Carpenter's Vampires and Dracula 2000. If you have other references, I wasn't really trying to shoot you down as much as say that your interpretation of the information you had seemed kinda flawed.

I'm by no means a vampire expert. Any references I have were looked up on the internet today because I was kind of interested in how this story could work. My interpretations were based on an hour or so of sifting through thousands of years of vampire folklore. I just offered a couple interpretations of the legend that I thought were appropriate. Maybe I should have just spent the time watching cable.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm by no means a vampire expert. Any references I have were looked up on the internet today because I was kind of interested in how this story could work. My interpretations were based on an hour or so of sifting through thousands of years of vampire folklore. I just offered a couple interpretations of the legend that I thought were appropriate. Maybe I should have just spent the time watching cable.

LoL. No no no, the Modern Literary Vampire has little relationship to his Folklore kin. So mixing the two automatically runs into certain problems. No two stories are precisely the same anyway but there are certain consistancies throughout most of the Modern Literary Vamps. Which is what we were discussing. Hense me quoting
Buffy and Angel
Anne Rice
Vampire The Masquerade
Blade

Rather than the accounts of Elizabeth Bathory and Vlad the Impaler. If you start looking into the mythology vampires don't have fangs until Bram Stoker (and that was because biting on the neck was/is considered sensual. In his time he couldn't actually write about sexual acts so the intimacy of the bite is meant as a stand in) prior to Bram Stoker most Vampires had barbed tongues.

Chinese vampires have to count grains of rice, or untie knots before they can pass.

In Romania (I think) there have been cases of vampire pumpkins and water melons.

African Vampires are heads connected to entrails, they can fly but they don't so much drink blood as eat flesh. That's just off the top of my head its been a while since I've really cared to read up on vamps, been working on demons a lot more lately.

 

[va4footlvrs]

LoL. No no no, the Modern Literary Vampire has little relationship to his Folklore kin. So mixing the two automatically runs into certain problems. No two stories are precisely the same anyway but there are certain consistancies throughout most of the Modern Literary Vamps. Which is what we were discussing. Hense me quoting
Buffy and Angel
Anne Rice
Vampire The Masquerade
Blade

Rather than the accounts of Elizabeth Bathory and Vlad the Impaler. If you start looking into the mythology vampires don't have fangs until Bram Stoker (and that was because biting on the neck was/is considered sensual. In his time he couldn't actually write about sexual acts so the intimacy of the bite is meant as a stand in) prior to Bram Stoker most Vampires had barbed tongues.

Chinese vampires have to count grains of rice, or untie knots before they can pass.

In Romania (I think) there have been cases of vampire pumpkins and water melons.

African Vampires are heads connected to entrails, they can fly but they don't so much drink blood as eat flesh. That's just off the top of my head its been a while since I've really cared to read up on vamps, been working on demons a lot more lately.

I think we're going to have to agree to disagree. My vampire is a little more old fashioned than yours.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think we're going to have to agree to disagree. My vampire is a little more old fashioned than yours.

Is there a source I can check? Not trying to argue, I'm genuinely interested in the mythology around it, what part did we disagree on btw just so I know.

 

[va4footlvrs]

This is from my original post. There's a link to the article I got my information from.
Originally Posted by va4footlvrs

http://science.howstuffworks.com/fr...s/articles.html

"Not so, the modern literary Vampire. Apparently, in a society that has become more complex, the road to Vampirism has become quite simple. There seems to be just one means by which the Dark Gift may be bestowed and that is by surrendering enough blood to the Vampire and in turn drinking some of it's blood -- in other words, and exchange of body fluids.

This implies that the modern day Vampire wanted to become a Vampire and that he or she asked for it. The guilt is shifted from the victim-for-nourishment to the one who has actually chosen to become one of the un-dead. This is an important shifting of guilt to the Vampire, a symbol of buried sexuality from the "victim".

I could be wrong, but it seems to me that your vision of vampires inolves them forcing the victim to drink blood. And I dont think there's anything wrong with that, but in this story I see the vampire seducing the girl by offering her what she desires.

By the way, any thoughts on healing or self-healing powers of vampires?

Is there a source I can check? Not trying to argue, I'm genuinely interested in the mythology around it, what part did we disagree on btw just so I know.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh. Ok, that wasn't even really a diference in opinion as in situation. You had a story where the young woman was seduced. I don't deny this to be a possibility, possibly even a common occurance. It just seems that it isn't the only choice you have open to you. So that isn't even worth arguing, the process is exactly the same. The only part where we differ is if the girl wants it, or wether a funnel is forced into her mouth.

Its generally accepted that vampires can heal any wound shy of actual dismemberment with enough time and blood. So I see no reason why a person who became a vampire wouldn't heal wounds they had previously, scars and the such, or in this case paralysis. At the very least it sounds solid enough that you could make it work out for your story if that was your focus point.

 

[va4footlvrs]

Oh. Ok, that wasn't even really a diference in opinion as in situation. You had a story where the young woman was seduced. I don't deny this to be a possibility, possibly even a common occurance. It just seems that it isn't the only choice you have open to you. So that isn't even worth arguing, the process is exactly the same. The only part where we differ is if the girl wants it, or wether a funnel is forced into her mouth.

Its generally accepted that vampires can heal any wound shy of actual dismemberment with enough time and blood. So I see no reason why a person who became a vampire wouldn't heal wounds they had previously, scars and the such, or in this case paralysis. At the very least it sounds solid enough that you could make it work out for your story if that was your focus point.

I'm not necessarily going to write this story. I was just tossing out some information i found regarding vampires as seductors. Which I think the person requesting the story was looking for.
As for as the reference to the belief in the 1700's that practitioners of witchcraft were likely to become vampires, I just thought it might be a basis for a vampire meet cute.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm definitely not writing it, I'm just helping on the research as well. She is definitly looking for a seduction, story, which was kinda how I''d originally suggested they run with it. Just what the reasoning behind it was. I like the witchcraft angle but I think she's looking for something a little more random than that.

 

[va4footlvrs]

I'm definitely not writing it, I'm just helping on the research as well. She is definitly looking for a seduction, story, which was kinda how I''d originally suggested they run with it. Just what the reasoning behind it was. I like the witchcraft angle but I think she's looking for something a little more random than that.

The girl goofing around with a spell is kind of b-movie. Maybe they could meet at a blood drive.