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Gwen looked at her tits in the mirror. She was 53 and her tits still retained the bounce and tautness of a much younger woman.

She had been plowed last night by her husband Rick and he had also rammed her tight ass hole till he came inside of it filling her tight rear hole with a nice creampie.

She was expecting Kathleen and Liza this afternoon and her loose fitting skirt and blouse hund loosely on her body.

Liza arrived first and as they were sipping their afternoon tea, Gwen recounted to liza how she had been mauled the night before by her husband and had been "forced" (they all shared the force me fantasy) to lick and suck his flaccid cock and jerk it as it rose to its 8 inch hard-state.

Gwen explained it was all part of a game and she spread her legs and played with her clit a bit simulating masturbation.

Liza was 32 and was quite aroused, feeling her sick center grow slicker, she knelt on the hardwood floor before her professor's pussy and tasted her, licking her clit as she moaned herself at her boldness.

Gwen smiled and leaned back to enjoy this young lady's breath and tongue on her needy clit. Her ass sent her the feeling it usually sent when she needed it filled.

Liza was very sexy, shor dark black hair, violet lipstick, delicate bra and panties, she knelt at her sacred twat's owner, licking and sucking her clit.

Liza wanted the collar and craved the riding crop applied harshly to her tight young ass.

Peter entered the room unexpectedly with the black riding crop and stood before the 2 bi-sexual lovers and cracked the crop across Liza's slutty ass extracting yelps and moans.

His cock was bulging and Gwen suggested he let it out of its cage, so Liza asked his permission and unzipped his trousers taking his tool out for play.

She licked his cock in worship, running her fingers along his tight heavy balls.

He cracked the crop across Liza's ass again and again making her drench herself and a puddle gradually began to appear on the hardwood floor beneath her pussy.

Gwen became so enthralled to Liza's attention that she she stood up and turned her back and got down on all fours. She said "my ass needs a large cock in it right now" and she was playing with her clit.

Liza stopped with pete and came to Gwen's attention and Gwen asked her to suck her tits and play with her nipples and then to apply the clothespins to her nipples.

As per their plan, Pete moved up behind Gwen and slid his long tongue deep into Gwen's arse which made Gwen feel very good indeed! Gwen was now being serviced by Pete and by Liza and she waggled her tight bum in excitation.

Pete stood behind Gwen, crouched really, and he slid his massive cock into her tight rear hole like he did with the Captains Wench the night before. His wide head almost made her cry as he stuck it gradually into her tight hole with liberal amounts of ky jelly to help lube the journey. Gwen cried out as her tight hole was now half filled with the biggest 24 year old cock she had ever taken, and he wasn't through with her yet.

Kathleen walked in from the neighbor's house where she had just serviced her owner orally (her owner was 40 and well hung) and she was looking for her own satisfaction now.

She held Peter's riding crop in her hand and as she watched Gwen taking the largest cock ever up her tight ass, Kathleen whipped Gwen's back with the crop making Gwen feel the desired effect of pain/torture/humiliation/sexual arousal and satisfaction all at once.

Liza slid underneath gwen and serviced Gwen's slick wet center orally as Peter rammed Gwen's ass harder and harder.

Gwen moaned and cried out "I'm cumming-I'm such a cock-whore" an her hips bucked and shook as her legs clenched around Liza's tongue and face, and her ass clenched involuntarilly around Pete's GIANT cock forcing it deeper inside her rectum where he came, erupting and spewing his hot white seed deep inside Gwen's recturm while Gwen had come to Liza's tongue between her legs.

Kathleen continued whipping Gwen and then Liza took the crop and whipped kathleen as peter stuck his large cum-soaked cock in Kathleen's tight back hole. Kathleen squealed like an animal as her ass was rammed by her Pete, while Liza caned Kathleen but good making her squeal all the more in pain/pleasure.

The caning and the ass fucking made Kathleen explode in orgasm, hips shaking as she drenched herself cumming.

Everybody had to be out in 1 hour since that was when Gwen's husband was expected home.

Liza sucked Gwen's tits some more and Kathleen licked Gwen's freshly fucked ass tasting Peter's creampie as she licked Gwen to a second orgasm.

All but Gwen were gone by 6 PM though.
 
There are a number of smaller grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. A simple re-read or copy and paste to word should cure them at least.

There are several areas in the story where the tale seems disjointed and unnatural.

We transition from someone's slick center getting slicker to licking her professor's pussy to a guy entering with a riding crop.

Although I like the imagery and what I understand to be the plot line, it needs to be fleshed out a bit more. Background information, character development, and well placed descriptions all would really help.
 
May I suggest that you get an editor, they do help. Mine has worked wonders for me in the past two week. TTFN :rose:
 
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