A twist on the in-law theme

[Nechash]

I would enjoy finding someone to either co-write a story or do a SRP thread..

the topic I have in mind is a variation on the in-law relationship

The basics: A brother and sister, a year apart in age, in their mid 30s get married. As it turns out, the people they become involved with and marry once dated. Nothing is said and life has gone on for a year or two with sexual tensions building between the former lovers now in-laws. The brother and sister rent a beach house for a week and the two couples go on vacation.

The stroy picks up there

let me know what you think

 

[LustiRusti]

So, does the previous couple cheat on their new spouses or are we talking about some kind of foursome thingy?


~Kenzie

 

[Nechash]

Im not sure i want to go in the direction of the 4sm.. due to the incest issues.. but it could go that way.. i was thinking more along the lines of a building sexual tension.. perhaps some "accidental" observation of the former lover in sexual situations .. leading to conversations between the former lovers about the sexuality of their mates.. finally things get hot enough that something happens..

 

[LustiRusti]

 

[Nechash]

any thoughts on your part?

 

[LustiRusti]

Well, I like this idea and I'm glad to see that you're staying away from incest.

I think the old couple shouldn't know they're married to siblings until all four meet up at some family cabin. I think the brother and sister should be close (but not like that! lol). They should have been "good friends" ever since their mid-twenties or so. (Perhaps they had an alcoholic mother or an abuser father...or any kind of family skeleton in the closet...that bonded the siblings once adults in post college life?)

So, the former couple is surprised to see one another at the cabin. (For whatever reason, the two new couples hadn't gotten together before now. Perhaps one or both sibling is a newly wed so that's why they're all gathering?)

As you said, there should be sexual tension between the former couple. Perhaps they try to sneak away together to talk, but their plans keep getting foiled by their spouse? And, the brother and sister aren't suspicious of their spouse and have no clue about the old history.




~Kenzie

 

[Nechash]

thats very good

another way to make it work would be for them all to be from the same town, but the brother and his future wife move away to a big city for new jobs in their late 20s.. they meet and fall in love and get married.. at the same time the sister and the guy stay in the town.. meet and do the same...

to add to the tensions.. the inlaws could be of a different social class than the brother and sister.. say working class family background while the b and s are from a wealthy family

thoughts?

 

[LustiRusti]

All of the ideas you have placed are great ones and I think this story will be wonderful no matter which direction it goes!

But, if you do start a role play, I suggest that you still write out a "full" story as well!


~Kenzie

 

[Nechash]

the question is.. would you like to help?

 

[LustiRusti]

I would love to help out with it, but right now I have made so many promises on SI threads that I am currently backed up with stories. (I never should have come to this board after I finished my first story! lol)

If you wish to chat back and forth to get a female's point of view for your story, I'd gladly do that. I'm not sure I'd have time to correspond in a chain story with you though, and it's not fair to you to keep you hanging if you want the story done at a certain time.


~Kenzie

 

[Nechash]

Would anyone else like to add anything to this conversation?

 

[AllieCat]

I would be interested in co-writing a story. If I have to get it done I will lol... I have another story that I was working on but it hasn't been looked at in a little bit cause I have nothing pushing me to do it.