A twist in incest

destinie21

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I'm working on an incest story where a woman has sex with a stranger and gets pregnant as a result. 18,19.or 20 years later(whatever age doesn't matter) Her daughter born fron the one night stand meets an older man. Has sex with him and all that.
later she finds out that this man is her father. anyone interested in collaborating with me on this story?
 
over here, in Germany, there is a tv show, about problems between people.

I remember one case: a girl (18) dated an older guy (about 40) (and they had sex).
In the beginning, everything was o.k. Sure, the mother of the girl wasn't that happy that her daughter had a boyfriend who was much older.
However, the mother wanted to meet the boyfriend, just to make sure that he was a "good guy" ... however, the daughter was against that. She feared that her mother would put an end to the relationship between her and the older boyfriend. The only thing that the daughter told her mother was the name of the boyfriend.

Well, somehow, the mother meet the boyfriend and after that, the boyfriend told the daughter that it's over, because he talked to her mother ....

Of course, the daughter got mad at the mother and asked her, why she did that ....

That was the time when the mother confessed: 18 years ago, she had a relationship with a guy (but I think it was longer then a one night stand) Anyway, after some time, the guy left her ... what he didn't knew was, that he made her pregnant .... now 18 years later, the same guy had sex with the daughter .... HIS daughter ....
 
NASCARaddicted said:
over here, in Germany, there is a tv show, about problems between people.

I remember one case: a girl (18) dated an older guy (about 40) (and they had sex).
In the beginning, everything was o.k. Sure, the mother of the girl wasn't that happy that her daughter had a boyfriend who was much older.
However, the mother wanted to meet the boyfriend, just to make sure that he was a "good guy" ... however, the daughter was against that. She feared that her mother would put an end to the relationship between her and the older boyfriend. The only thing that the daughter told her mother was the name of the boyfriend.

Well, somehow, the mother meet the boyfriend and after that, the boyfriend told the daughter that it's over, because he talked to her mother ....

Of course, the daughter got mad at the mother and asked her, why she did that ....

That was the time when the mother confessed: 18 years ago, she had a relationship with a guy (but I think it was longer then a one night stand) Anyway, after some time, the guy left her ... what he didn't knew was, that he made her pregnant .... now 18 years later, the same guy had sex with the daughter .... HIS daughter ....





we ( USA ) also have a show about
'troubled' people
Jerry Springer
no one with an I.Q. exceeding 100
takes it seriously ....it's more for the amusement of the lower classes

ya know 'Bread & Circuses"
we have the bread ....we're working on a perfect circus .......
Valhalla !! sehr gut !!!!
 
Better Idea

I have a better idea for a story.
A father fucks his wife's best friend. They have a daughter. When underage material removed by moderatorand visiting, she sees them fucking right in his wife's house. She waits till he is alone in the living room and stands over him on the chair and he eats her pussy until she comes , then they fuck . From then on they fuck in places where they can get caught, she moans a lot and they talk dirty.
Come on, write this story.
 
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Re: Better Idea

sexipussy said:
I have a better idea for a story.
A father fucks his wife's best friend. They have a daughter. When underage material removed by moderatorand visiting, she sees them fucking right in his wife's house. She waits till he is alone in the living room and stands over him on the chair and he eats her pussy until she comes , then they fuck . From then on they fuck in places where they can get caught, she moans a lot and they talk dirty.
Come on, write this story.

You'd have to make it 18 not 13 to get it posted here, any mention of a person under 18 is banned in literotica stories.
Life begins at 18 in porn land I'm afraid, hell of a freekin birth that would be, ouch!!!!
 
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destinie21 said:
I'm working on an incest story where a woman has sex with a stranger and gets pregnant as a result. 18,19.or 20 years later(whatever age doesn't matter) Her daughter born fron the one night stand meets an older man. Has sex with him and all that.
later she finds out that this man is her father. anyone interested in collaborating with me on this story?

I wrote a story about a young woman having sex with an older man she had just met on her honeymoon ( A Honeymoon Affair). I questioned whether or not the story would be believed. Two women sent feedback saying something similar had hapened to them; one thinks she had a child by the guy. Much of the feedback called for a sequel, which I am not going to write, and wanted the woman to get pregnant (why, I dunno), so I do think there is a substantial audience for your story.
 
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I agree you would have quite a reader following with this story idea. But I do raise a question.

If a daughter has sex with a father she does not no about, never met, never even heard of, is that incest? I'm not sure. Just asking.
 
Technically it would be incest, but, in the beginning at least, it wouldn't be in their minds.

However, after finding out that he was her father, but refusing to give him up, that's when things could get racy for the readers.
Maybe he gave her the best sex she ever had, and knowing he was her father made it even more exciting, not to mention sordid.
 
Tatelou said:
Technically it would be incest, but, in the beginning at least, it wouldn't be in their minds.

However, after finding out that he was her father, but refusing to give him up, that's when things could get racy for the readers.
Maybe he gave her the best sex she ever had, and knowing he was her father made it even more exciting, not to mention sordid.

I have to add that while I don't really like incest stories, I really don't like the ones where the incest is unintentional. I think part of the thrill when I do read incest stories is that both partners know what they're doing, and throw caution to the wind to do it anyway. If you put in that the two don't know they're related, then I feel like that's sort of non-consensual. So, Tatelou's suggestion that finding out and refusing to give away is excellent. Don't make it a big point in the beginning of the story that she's having sex with her father and not knowing it - what if the sex happens in passing, a casual opening scene, and then later when introduced to her father finds out she's committed the incest. He comes to her and apologizes, but confesses that he's never had better. She moves into his lap and starts to wriggle on his cock, whispering seductively into his ear that she's never wanted anything more than to have him again...something like that

Chicklet
 
... and then mom walks in, and they allll live happily ever after?
 
I'm working on an incest story where a woman has sex with a stranger and gets pregnant as a result. 18,19.or 20 years later(whatever age doesn't matter) Her daughter born fron the one night stand meets an older man. Has sex with him and all that.

I Just dont get a charge out of it. Yes it would be incest by definition. Just not with the intentions that make incest so wrong.

If I was to meet a female one day have a sexual relation ship. And niether one of us knew honestly that some how we were related. What would be wrong?

If we found out and continued to love one another then maybe a little.

90% of the fun of an incest story is that. Both or at least one person knows it is wrong, Yet the desire in lust of the moment is stronger than the moral decision.
 
TongueTyler said:
I Just dont get a charge out of it. Yes it would be incest by definition. Just not with the intentions that make incest so wrong.

If I was to meet a female one day have a sexual relation ship. And niether one of us knew honestly that some how we were related. What would be wrong?

If we found out and continued to love one another then maybe a little.

Not exactly the same, but: I have this one cousin. The last time that I saw her, she was 13. Now, recently, I saw her again, and now she is 18. I didn't even recognize her, until she told me her name ....
So, it could be something like that. For some reasons, the father leaves the family, when his daughter is very young, maybe like 10 years old or younger. Then, after about 10-20 years (or maybe even more) he seeks her (maybe for example, he needs an organ donation, and the only one who matches would be his daughter). So now he has to see her again.
He goes back to his home town and searchs for her, without luck. What he doesn't know is, that she married and so she got a new surname.
While the father searches his daughter, he starts to flirt with a waitress in a bar. In the end, they have sex (more then once ?). After some time, they start to talk, and he tells her, that he searches for his daughter. The waitress tells him, that she spent all her life in this town, she knows about everybody ...
So he starts to tell her stuff about his daughter: she was born on February the 14th, 1970. The maiden Name of the Mother is "Richardson". The daughter has a small scar on her knee, from a bicycle accident when she was a kid. And he tells her, that when she was a kid, everbody called her "4 eyes", because she wore big, old fashioned glasses.
All the time, the waitress listens quietly, but with a strange facial expression. Then, finally she says "4 eyes ... no one called me like that, since I got contact lenses .... And I still have the scar on my knee ....."
 
is the point being missed?

true, in most incest stories, the 'overcoming the taboo' is the turn on. That does not mean, though, that the ' surprise' story plot lacks potential, as long as its the beginning of the story not the end...it can be very interesting to read how they deal with the discovery. It may make for a deeper psychological character driven story than most.
 
true, in most incest stories, the 'overcoming the taboo' is the turn on. That does not mean, though, that the ' surprise' story plot lacks potential, as long as its the beginning of the story not the end...it can be very interesting to read how they deal with the discovery. It may make for a deeper psychological character driven story than most.

I can agree with that Kind of like why star wars started in the middle to capture the excitement.

Nascar I kind of like your twist as well it is different. But if the woman freaks and leaves and then it would have just been a personal mistake. If she finds out and wants more then it is all good, even if it just excites her after she learns the truth.



Just adding my 2 cents. And that makes no sense alltogether
 
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