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Hi there. :) Eve here. ;) lol For some time now I haven't been able to shake this "title". It sticks with me. When I think it's finally gone, there it is again crawling back to me like a bad lover! :eek:

So, I would love to hear what An Evil Need means to you!



Offer opinions, feedback, ideas, and so on! Inspire me. ;)
 
In my mind that's a woman cursed by a devil with insatiable desire that can only be satisfied by the devil, but he holds that satisfaction back until she performs distasteful tasks for him.
 
A young man forcing his girlfriend to be taken by various other men as he watches. It is a fantasy he's imagined and fed through various porn sites and stories. Eventually a time and place presents itself and he finds himself acting on it. Various BDSM type play, all the while he knows this is wrong, forcing her to do these things, as well as allowing others to violate her, but he can't help it. His lust for the fantasy to become reality is too great.
 
Ok, I have a thought similar to red's, though not enacted by the boyfriend. Sort of biographical of me, but hey still works well for the title. :eek:

Anyway, what you have is a woman in a relationship, her boyfriend is really good for her and they do it often, however, she can't help but think about other men on top of her. She fights the urge then one day passes this really hot amazing looking guy with a serious bulge in his shorts and melts into his arms, then his bed.

Now before anyone asks, I've not done that recently, heck not at all with my current, he rather IS the amazing looking man with a serious bulge, and no we didn't meet like that either. ;)
 
I picture a Nun. She is holy by day, the very personification of piety and propriety. She prays her knees off, counsels the weak, bolsters the doubtful, and is an inspiration to all who know her. The priests love her, the parishioners look to her for strength.

But, by night, an evil need consumes her. She doffs her holy habit and dons some slinky, slutty duds, and prowls the dark recesses of the red light district of her town. She fucks and sucks the most depraved elements in town, slurping cocks in alleys, swallowing jism by the gallon, taking raging dicks up her asshole, and generally wallowing in the carnal pleasures of the flesh.

Then she wakes up again in the morning, fully aware of the sins she has committed, and re-dedicating herself to holiness. Until the sun goes down, yet again.

Or something like that!
 
I see a trend here...

Contrarian idea: A man driven to rape (I'd leave the reasons unspecified) encounters someone who likes it. This, needless to say, throws him for a loop and sucks the thrill out of it for him. He's trying to get back to that control thrill and she's just soaking up everything he can throw at her and telling him how good it is. In the end he feels relieved that he didn't hurt another person and she turns him in to the police to get him off the street.
 
A sexually frustrated wife finds it necessary to get a sadistic thrill from teasing her colleagues. It works well, until she finds one guy who plays it far too cool.....he doesn't reveal that he thinks of her frequently when fucking and masturbating.....since he's getting it regular from other sources, he is able to keep a calm facade, which really affects her...she can't help wanting to get into his pants....and, even more importantly from her POV, finding out what makes him tick....since she knows that she is hot (ego satisfied by all of her male victims), she wants to know if he is gay or something....or just being very calm...she's not satisfied with her vibrators and the rush of giving men blue balls anymore...it can go a number of ways....but the Evil Need part comes in with her teasing fetish...
 
Otto26 said:
In my mind that's a woman cursed by a devil with insatiable desire that can only be satisfied by the devil, but he holds that satisfaction back until she performs distasteful tasks for him.

If its written, I will read it.
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Hi there. :) Eve here. ;) lol For some time now I haven't been able to shake this "title". It sticks with me. When I think it's finally gone, there it is again crawling back to me like a bad lover! :eek:

So, I would love to hear what An Evil Need means to you!



Offer opinions, feedback, ideas, and so on! Inspire me. ;)
every thing i knew its wrong but i do it its an evil need
but for idea ther alot
1 -woman want distroy a nice marriage
2 -man want make his frind wife to whore by gang rape her
and i can gave more and more
 
Carnie may have the winner so far, IMHO, but I think Eve might be disappointed if I did not suggest a Dad/daughter tale.

Perhaps a long complex one, where they deny the attraction, but with denial comes awareness. With awareness come flirtation. With flirtation comes vamping. With vamping comes vampires????
 
sirhugs said:
I think Eve might be disappointed if I did not suggest a Dad/daughter tale.

Perhaps a long complex one, where they deny the attraction, but with denial comes awareness. With awareness come flirtation. With flirtation comes vamping. With vamping comes vampires????

Well, it seems like most "dad/daughter tales" have the "denial of attraction". Sure, its a good idea but its already been done. I think this story should be more fresh. Something new, you know? ;)
 
Virgin_Whore_Baby said:
Well, it seems like most "dad/daughter tales" have the "denial of attraction". Sure, its a good idea but its already been done. I think this story should be more fresh. Something new, you know? ;)


where Dad is the preacher who is secretly a vampire? or maybe he isn't but daughter is ( it runs in Mom's side of the family)?
 
sirhugs said:
where Dad is the preacher who is secretly a vampire? or maybe he isn't but daughter is ( it runs in Mom's side of the family)?

okay, that's makes it fresh. carry on.
 
I like the devil and nun ideas, so why not combine them hentai style?
A sexy woman dedicated to God's work without a sinful thought in her mind.

In the day, she works with the "sinful", hearing confessions, counseling the hopeless.
During the night, another personality takes over in the form of a devil (winged succubus), sexually satisfying her lust with the ideas that were brought to her nun persona's attention.

She has a kind of amnesia when she wakes, totally unaware anything has happened.
 
What about a Cain type story- a man/woman is cursed by God to wander the earth for all eternity bearing a burden that only they know of. Every time they settle, find friends, family, etc, the need rises up (its their mark) and causes them to destroy what they have. Could be a great chain that covers a long period.
 
Athena_e19 said:
What about a Cain type story- a man/woman is cursed by God to wander the earth for all eternity bearing a burden that only they know of. Every time they settle, find friends, family, etc, the need rises up (its their mark) and causes them to destroy what they have. Could be a great chain that covers a long period.

what would their "need" be?
 
Hmmm... Obviously his evil need would have to be sexually centered and while it could satisfy the loins it leaves the heart shallow and bitter. :) This very well could be a more challenging chain story! Possible different title: Cain's Distruction or Cain's Downfall? ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Hi there. :) Eve here. ;) lol For some time now I haven't been able to shake this "title". It sticks with me. When I think it's finally gone, there it is again crawling back to me like a bad lover! :eek:

So, I would love to hear what An Evil Need means to you!



Offer opinions, feedback, ideas, and so on! Inspire me. ;)


I wrote a story off of Literotica based on historical fiction and set in the 1930's here in Maine. In a nut shell, this woman became a widow at a young age when her husband was killed in a logging accident in the Great North Woods. It was sort of reversed roles in that this widow-turned-waitress ended up having non-consent sex with a man because of her need to get impregnated.

Here is the link in case anyone is interested in reading it. Dangerous Dame
 
I read that , A Evil Need, and thought anal.

You have a happily married woman, good husband apart from one thing. She has always wanted to try anal, the hubby won't even discuss it. Likes his sex straight vanilla, she's getting older and decides to find someone who will give her this sexual experience that is a burning Evil Need in her. One part of her is appalled that she wants to try anal but that doesn't stop her. The story could carry on as she tries various avenues of getting a lover - a workmate, sons friend, dating agency etc. :)
 
EveAnna said:
I read that , A Evil Need, and thought anal.

You have a happily married woman, good husband apart from one thing. She has always wanted to try anal, the hubby won't even discuss it. Likes his sex straight vanilla, she's getting older and decides to find someone who will give her this sexual experience that is a burning Evil Need in her. One part of her is appalled that she wants to try anal but that doesn't stop her. The story could carry on as she tries various avenues of getting a lover - a workmate, sons friend, dating agency etc. :)

I like that idea. I know I'd read it.
 
Is the need a bowel movement? It would be a rather evil need to surprise your very reluctant spouse upon their first very reluctant penetration of your back door with a little bit of high fiber regularity.

I don't see the anal idea really working with the title unless there is a significant moral compunction and pressure to avoid it.
 
I saw the emphasis more on NEED than on evil.

Something along the lines of Interview with a Vampire and Silence of the Lambs merged. Psychologist talking to a inmate of unspeakable atrocities, with the inmate reading the doctor's body language and non-verbals. Pointing out the subtle tells of frustration and suppressed hunger, the inmate hits on the inner spark that strikes the doctor and (s)he can't shake the image. The seed is planted and grows quickly in the fertile creative mind.

Wrestling with the hunger, fighting off the taboo but unable to resist is appeal, until the NEED is too great to be denied. Acting upon it makes it worse, more consuming. Finally going back to teh inmate only to find him (her [a female Hannibel Lechter... hmmmmm]) dead, and the doctor is now the carrier of this unspeakable need.
 
I love the interpretation of the title and feel that it really measures up to the topic.
Stories that seem to require that much expression, de-evolution, and manipulation seem to never come out very well from our amateur lips. Hopefully someone is capable!
 
Going back to "The Mummy", I think you can make it more erotic.
In the dark ages, a time of magic and mystery, a couple was persecuted for scandalous religious beliefs.
The boyfriend revolted, and took revenge on society's norm at the time, and was executed on the spot.

Making a vow to his love with a prayer to his god, his spirit is doomed to walk the earth for eternity looking for her, but what happens when he is reunited with his love?
Centuries later, the evil prince is separated once again from his love.

Revenge in a modern city can only take the story so far, and it would be more like Austin Powers International Man Of Mystery.
 
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