A Timeless Place Ch. 7

[windstormy]

Thank you first of all, for viewing this post. I would like to invite you to read A Timeless Place Ch. 7. In this one, Jonathan and his new family, Bruce, Peter, Greg and Tony, return to Mr. Bowman's mansion. There are is a lot of detail in this which I must thank Athena_by_night, for her help in assisting the creation of, especially in the foyer. The grounds and Mr. Bowman's room were my own works.

At any rate, it is a work that guides you into the next chapter, setting the stage and laying the foundation for Ch. 8. This is gay male material. So, please do not go there is you do not approve. And I thank you for your time.

 

[mitchpack]

From the very beginning of this chapter, I was reeled in. The detail of the mansion and grounds is uncanny. I could literally see it in my own mind and felt as if I were there. I could feel the gentle warm breezes you mentioned as they happened.

The scene in the bedroom was beautiful. The emotion and impact of the relationship between Bruce and Jon was deeply felt. And I could tell that Jonathan is struggling with adulthood and adolescence. He's a charming young character that I would love to actually meet. Of course, Tony might make me a little leery about doing so. He seems to be a man I wouldn't want to piss off or tangle with in anger. LOL...

Mr. Preston was an interesting character. I got the strangest feeling he's a professional. A phsychiatrist perhaps? And only because of the comment that was made about him hearing off the wall secrets on an hourly basis, daily. What else could he be. But that is a good thing to throw into the mix with Jonathan experiencing such troubling thoughts at this time.

Anyway, I loved this, Billy. And I'm eager to read ch. 8.

 

[windstormy]

From the very beginning of this chapter, I was reeled in. The detail of the mansion and grounds is uncanny. I could literally see it in my own mind and felt as if I were there. I could feel the gentle warm breezes you mentioned as they happened.

The scene in the bedroom was beautiful. The emotion and impact of the relationship between Bruce and Jon was deeply felt. And I could tell that Jonathan is struggling with adulthood and adolescence. He's a charming young character that I would love to actually meet. Of course, Tony might make me a little leery about doing so. He seems to be a man I wouldn't want to piss off or tangle with in anger. LOL...

Mr. Preston was an interesting character. I got the strangest feeling he's a professional. A phsychiatrist perhaps? And only because of the comment that was made about him hearing off the wall secrets on an hourly basis, daily. What else could he be. But that is a good thing to throw into the mix with Jonathan experiencing such troubling thoughts at this time.

Anyway, I loved this, Billy. And I'm eager to read ch. 8.

Glad you enjoyed this chapter, Mitch. And there is much more to come. I hope to keep you on the edge of your seat as you read each one. It's always fun to get comments like yours. At least I know I'm making an impression somewhere.

 

[athena_by_night]

Thank you first of all, for viewing this post. I would like to invite you to read A Timeless Place Ch. 7. In this one, Jonathan and his new family, Bruce, Peter, Greg and Tony, return to Mr. Bowman's mansion. There are is a lot of detail in this which I must thank Athena_by_night, for her help in assisting the creation of, especially in the foyer. The grounds and Mr. Bowman's room were my own works.

At any rate, it is a work that guides you into the next chapter, setting the stage and laying the foundation for Ch. 8. This is gay male material. So, please do not go there is you do not approve. And I thank you for your time.

Thank you for the acknowledgement, honey... I had fun with it and the day I sent it to you was special indeed. Love you.

 

[athena_by_night]

From the very beginning of this chapter, I was reeled in. The detail of the mansion and grounds is uncanny. I could literally see it in my own mind and felt as if I were there. I could feel the gentle warm breezes you mentioned as they happened.

The scene in the bedroom was beautiful. The emotion and impact of the relationship between Bruce and Jon was deeply felt. And I could tell that Jonathan is struggling with adulthood and adolescence. He's a charming young character that I would love to actually meet. Of course, Tony might make me a little leery about doing so. He seems to be a man I wouldn't want to piss off or tangle with in anger. LOL...

Mr. Preston was an interesting character. I got the strangest feeling he's a professional. A phsychiatrist perhaps? And only because of the comment that was made about him hearing off the wall secrets on an hourly basis, daily. What else could he be. But that is a good thing to throw into the mix with Jonathan experiencing such troubling thoughts at this time.

Anyway, I loved this, Billy. And I'm eager to read ch. 8.

lol....ok... ditz here.... was actually picturing Mr. Preston as a lawyer.. and ohhhh he has information about Jon's parents....how enticing is that?

 

[mitchpack]

lol....ok... ditz here.... was actually picturing Mr. Preston as a lawyer.. and ohhhh he has information about Jon's parents....how enticing is that?

Really... It just makes it all worth the wait in reading these chapters. Oh, and btw, you'll see your lawyer on sunday. hehehe

 

[mitchpack]

Glad you enjoyed this chapter, Mitch. And there is much more to come. I hope to keep you on the edge of your seat as you read each one. It's always fun to get comments like yours. At least I know I'm making an impression somewhere.

Of course you're making an impression, Billy. A writer like you shouldn't have to worry about stuff like that. It seems to me, you automatically draw in your readers with your work and your natural abilities.

 

[athena_by_night]

Really... It just makes it all worth the wait in reading these chapters. Oh, and btw, you'll see your lawyer on sunday. hehehe

laughing my you know what off at that Mitch.... that was good! I'm going to have to watch my step around you.....

 

[athena_by_night]

Of course you're making an impression, Billy. A writer like you shouldn't have to worry about stuff like that. It seems to me, you automatically draw in your readers with your work and your natural abilities.

DAMN STRAIGHT! (I was going for pithy)

 

[mitchpack]

laughing my you know what off at that Mitch.... that was good! I'm going to have to watch my step around you.....

And you thought I would be just another ordinary dull guy.

 

[mitchpack]

DAMN STRAIGHT! (I was going for pithy)

Beat you to it. ) And I've noticed this giggle thing doesn't work in here. Rats...

 

[athena_by_night]

And you thought I would be just another ordinary dull guy.

Raises eyebrows..... ordinary? dull? Not likely....... I know the company you keep.....