A Timeless Place Ch. 6

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It is with great pleasure that I post this to you with the news that, A Timeless Place Ch. 6, is now posted for your reading pleasure. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it. It continues to focus on the plot of the story of which I am attempting to build for you. And I must apologize when I also admit that I do hope the suspense is beginning to get to you.

I want to draw you in completely with this story and its characters, as well as force many emotions to the surface as you read it. And the only way I will know if I am doing this is if you send me your feedback and submit your vote. I do so much want to hear from you.

I'm still attempting to get finished with Chapter 7 as soon as possible. There is so much detail that is going into this work that it is taking me longer than I had anticipated. So, please bare with me. I will finish it and submit it as soon as I can.

This particular chapter has no erotic situations in it. However, this entire story is a gay based work. So, if this is not your thing, please skip this and this story. Thank you.

And I do hope to see you again, in the folds of the pages....
 
Really Kool Chapter, Billy!!!!!! And is there anything I can do to help you hurry chapter 7 along? snickers...... :p
 
Ooh, really nice post, Billy. And really nice chapter too. I think I enjoyed the stubborn will of Bruce more in this chapter than your entire story. It really sprang out at me. And it seemed the poor guy was bent on getting Peter's papers done that very day. But oh, how the law can sometime thwart us, don't you think? LOL.

You also did a really good job on showing the many changes in Jonathan's emotions in this chapter. I just knew at one point he was going to throw a tantrum. hehehe....... :D
 
mastergary4u2 said:
Really Kool Chapter, Billy!!!!!! And is there anything I can do to help you hurry chapter 7 along? snickers...... :p


Only if you plan to become an interior decorator... I can see you with your swatches now and books of fabric....

"Oh, huney...... that deep amethyst really brings out the tourquoise of your eyes..."

Or words to that effect.... and I am definitely snickering....
 
athena_by_night said:
Only if you plan to become an interior decorator... I can see you with your swatches now and books of fabric....

"Oh, huney...... that deep amethyst really brings out the tourquoise of your eyes..."

Or words to that effect.... and I am definitely snickering....

OH! NO! That was just sooooooooo cold!!! But so damn funny!!!!!!!!! ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
sweeteric2u2 said:
OH! NO! That was just sooooooooo cold!!! But so damn funny!!!!!!!!! ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cold? LMAO.... I thought it was a rather warm greeting... ;) And yes.... I am being so verrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyy...............


GOOD!
 
athena_by_night said:
Only if you plan to become an interior decorator... I can see you with your swatches now and books of fabric....

"Oh, huney...... that deep amethyst really brings out the tourquoise of your eyes..."

Or words to that effect.... and I am definitely snickering....

Oh, yes, Ri... *Batting my eyes atchya* And the swirl of ruby would go well with the amethyst, too.......

Get real!!!! OMG!!!!!!
 
mastergary4u2 said:
Oh, yes, Ri... *Batting my eyes atchya* And the swirl of ruby would go well with the amethyst, too.......

Get real!!!! OMG!!!!!!

You know Gary.... your long lashes and the way you color coordinate......and ooooohhhhhh huney... your walk..... you were a born Diva... sway those hips and slink around the room with your wily ways and create..Create.. CREATE! I'm awaiting your best shot.... :kiss:
 
athena_by_night said:
You know Gary.... your long lashes and the way you color coordinate......and ooooohhhhhh huney... your walk..... you were a born Diva... sway those hips and slink around the room with your wily ways and create..Create.. CREATE! I'm awaiting your best shot.... :kiss:

You are not only dealing with Gary, the Master of all HE surveys, but you are also dealing with a fiery furnace of vindication, if you're not careful, my dear, Athena........
 
mastergary4u2 said:
You are not only dealing with Gary, the Master of all HE surveys, but you are also dealing with a fiery furnace of vindication, if you're not careful, my dear, Athena........

a fiery furnace of vindication? so NOT shaking in my non-existent boots... but it was a great turn of phrase... could there be a writer under that seething volcano? Bring it on um.... mastergary.... I know that I can handle the heat. The question is.... can you?
 
athena_by_night said:

a fiery furnace of vindication? so NOT shaking in my non-existent boots... but it was a great turn of phrase... could there be a writer under that seething volcano? Bring it on um.... mastergary.... I know that I can handle the heat. The question is.... can you?

Hmm... searing, yes...Sweltering, even more so....sultry, omg. I do love the humidity of this. Such are you attempting to raise within moi? Do tell, my lovely one. For I am pulsing with the desire to apprehend.
 
mastergary4u2 said:
Hmm... searing, yes...Sweltering, even more so....sultry, omg. I do love the humidity of this. Such are you attempting to raise within moi? Do tell, my lovely one. For I am pulsing with the desire to apprehend.

You are definitely feeling the heat....that's for certain. mmm.... what have we stumbled over here? I am sure there is one there that would sooth your brow, cool your heated flesh, take your...um..... temperature?? Someone should call a nurse... or a doctor to alleviate your um.... discomfort...
 
athena_by_night said:
You are definitely feeling the heat....that's for certain. mmm.... what have we stumbled over here? I am sure there is one there that would sooth your brow, cool your heated flesh, take your...um..... temperature?? Someone should call a nurse... or a doctor to alleviate your um.... discomfort...

Oh, make no mistake, my dear Athena. There is no discomfort here. Only pure unadulterated joy at your continued pose, and impassioned pleasure of the challenge you believe you have roused me with.
 
mastergary4u2 said:
Oh, make no mistake, my dear Athena. There is no discomfort here. Only pure unadulterated joy at your continued pose, and impassioned pleasure of the challenge you believe you have roused me with.

Ah, my dear MasterGary... you do love to continue to raise the bar. Have I not tempted you with the morsel of my words? The taste of them wrapped around your tongue as they swirl into your consciousness? I must be losing my touch...I am at a loss as to how to respond.

How shall I woo your jaded soul? Turn your mood around from blue? I weep at the thought of not capturing your thoughts.... I beg of you...my dear sweet master..... what would tempt you so to continue to converse with me? I am bereft.... yours..... Athena
 
athena_by_night said:
Ah, my dear MasterGary... you do love to continue to raise the bar. Have I not tempted you with the morsel of my words? The taste of them wrapped around your tongue as they swirl into your consciousness? I must be losing my touch...I am at a loss as to how to respond.

How shall I woo your jaded soul? Turn your mood around from blue? I weep at the thought of not capturing your thoughts.... I beg of you...my dear sweet master..... what would tempt you so to continue to converse with me? I am bereft.... yours..... Athena

Oh, my dear Athena, you strum the very cords of transposed thought. Tell me how I could ever remain low in spirit in your presence? The very breath with which you whisper my name causes such a motility within my mortal soul. Suffer no more, my dear sweet Love. I would that you be showered with the affections of warmth from the tendril rays of the sun, and the plush greens of a forrest lawn. To be caressed in the delicate petals of a rose, my sweet. This is what you so deserve.........
 
mastergary4u2 said:
Oh, my dear Athena, you strum the very cords of transposed thought. Tell me how I could ever remain low in spirit in your presence? The very breath with which you whisper my name causes such a motility within my mortal soul. Suffer no more, my dear sweet Love. I would that you be showered with the affections of warmth from the tendril rays of the sun, and the plush greens of a forrest lawn. To be caressed in the delicate petals of a rose, my sweet. This is what you so deserve.........

Your words have left me with a smidgeon of hope, of this I am most assured now. The very thought of blossoming in the sun has caused me to stretch out those very petals that they might seek what is so very necessary to continued life. Your words have allowed my roots to spread even further into the firmament and hold on. My leaves are glistening with the dew left by the early morn and all is right in my world. I would leave you with the hope that all is right in yours my dear, poetic master.......
 
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