A Timeless Place Ch. 5

[windstormy]

It's out and this one is the one some have been begging me for. Bruce and Peter get some quality alone time together, after Peter reveals quite a few answer to some questions, in Ch. 4. I hope you enjoy the passion I attempted to portray in it. Any and all feedback is absolutely welcome. Just click 'Enter Here' to get there. Thanks. Be careful reading this, if you are not into gay male stuff, pls ignore this.

 

[athena_by_night]

It's out and this one is the one some have been begging me for. Bruce and Peter get some quality alone time together, after Peter reveals quite a few answer to some questions, in Ch. 4. I hope you enjoy the passion I attempted to portray in it. Any and all feedback is absolutely welcome. Just click 'Enter Here' to get there. Thanks. Be careful reading this, if you are not into gay male stuff, pls ignore this.

I could never ignore your writing Billy....always such passion and wonderful little surprises around every corner. And your characters are inherently good. What a delight series of events with Bruce and Peter and well worth the wait. Well the wait until the next chapter.... I know...damn my impatience! Awesome art Billy.....

 

[alias x]

The Story

That should increase the amount of feedback you get. The story descriptions didn't grab my interest so no feedback from me. Sorry.

 

[spiritwalker]

Once again, you have proven your worth with yet another poetic piece of impassioned work. I truly enjoyed the coupling you portrayed between Bruce and Peter. Every word of it was most sensual and profitable to read. I look forward to your next.

Jules.....

 

[spiritwalker]

Just click 'Enter Here' to get there.

Hmm...I wonder if I click 'Enter Here', if it will take me there?

 

[DGentleBen]

Ooh, Billy. I love reading your work, and this one is no different. It is amazingly awesome. The chapter is very good, all the way to the end. I'm beginning to wonder if this might turn out to be an espionage with intriguing scenes that leave us panting for more. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. And btw, the love scene was absolutely fantastic. Really good work.

 

[DGentleBen]

Hmm...I wonder if I click 'Enter Here', if it will take me there?

Oh, my. Do I sense a hint of sarcasm, Julius? Such from you is so very....rare...

LMFAO...

 

[DGentleBen]

I could never ignore your writing Billy....always such passion and wonderful little surprises around every corner. And your characters are inherently good. What a delight series of events with Bruce and Peter and well worth the wait. Well the wait until the next chapter.... I know...damn my impatience! Awesome art Billy.....

You're so very correct, Ri. In all his writings he is so passionate and seems to capture the emotions of the characters so very well. I love to read his stuff.

 

[dcraig]

Hmmm.......Billy, love, you are an artful master of emotions, sensations and culminated lovemaking. I could taste, feel and visualize everything that was going on. This is very good writing, Billy. I can't wait for the next chapter.

 

[Doug Lewis]

Ok, I'm hooked on this one. I do love a good suspence mystery, Billy. I'm thrilled in the way this is going. And I can't wait to see what you mean to do next. And I did love your scene between Bruce and Peter...

 

[Doug Lewis]

Hmm...I wonder if I click 'Enter Here', if it will take me there?

Julius, are you having issues that you need to discuss, my friend? Lmao...

 

[mastergary4u2]

Oh, wow! Loved this chapter, Billy. It's full of...well...everyone's already said it, but...Passion. And very nice that Bruce and Peter have finally gotten together.

Ok, so show me where the next chapter is.......Hurry, man!!!!!! hehehe

 

[mastergary4u2]

Julius, are you having issues that you need to discuss, my friend? Lmao...

Snickers.........

 

[mastergary4u2]

Hmm...I wonder if I click 'Enter Here', if it will take me there?

Oh no, Julius...You just didn't!!!!!!! Snickers.........

Btw, Happy Birthday, Jules. Love ya man....

 

[mastergary4u2]

Hey, Ri!!!!!!! Waving the hand!!!!!!! hehehe ​

 

[athena_by_night]

Hey, Ri!!!!!!! Waving the hand!!!!!!! hehehe ​

LMFAO...... waving back....

 

[sweeteric2u2]

Julius, are you having issues that you need to discuss, my friend? Lmao...

LMFAO!!! OMG, DOUG!!!!!!!!!!!​

 

[sweeteric2u2]

LMFAO...... waving back....

Hey, Ri!!!! ​

 

[sweeteric2u2]

Hmm...I wonder if I click 'Enter Here', if it will take me there?

JULIUS!!!! LMFAO.........​

 

[sweeteric2u2]

Oh no, Julius...You just didn't!!!!!!! Snickers.........

Btw, Happy Birthday, Jules. Love ya man....

Ah, well...Gary? I think he just did........ snickers......... ​