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[anonamouse]

all my own, like so many others, useless and self serving. Happy (fillin name&date) whatever

 

[anonamouse]

Trailer Park Zen

Trailer park zen
I've got a yen
for trailer park zen

Oh,
Trailer park zen
I've got a yen
for trailer park zen


The dead come back as penisheads
pointing towards nirvana

and I basking in a casket
in the back of some cabana

with Discovery channel on in
beautiful down town Havanna

watching lame gazelles
getting slaugthered on the savanna

knowing damn fool well
they all come back
to do it again

with trailer park zen

 

[WickedEve]

Don't hate me for the lame comment, but I LOVE this:

and I basking in a casket
in the back of some cabana

with Discovery channel on in
beautiful down town Havanna

watching lame gazelles
getting slaugthered on the savanna

 

[champagne1982]

Y'know, it ain't t'all 'bout Animal Planet.
Just consider the mythic Janet
and her mulberry nipple pop.
Thet shore made the networks hop
to get it covered up. All them thar football
freaks, trying to make NASCAR streaks
down the road in front o' the mall
racin' fer pinks and a little kiss
from the mulberry lips of their personal doll.

 

[annaswirls]

Trailer park zen

The dead come back as penisheads
pointing towards nirvana

and I basking in a casket
in the back of some cabana

you are a sick sick puppy!

I could just picture the dead attached to some kind of spinner (like twister) and we fools watching to see where their penis heads point....

 

[bogusbrig]

http://keithbrighouse.exto.nl/gallery/detail/id/12029422.htmlTalking about penis heads, I painted one not long ago.


http://keithbrighouse.exto.nl/gallery/detail/id/12029422.html

How's it going 1201, good to see you around. I could be back for a while as I've suddenly got time to write some poetry.

Hi Jen! Congrats on your family's new addition!

 

[annaswirls]

http://keithbrighouse.exto.nl/gallery/detail/id/12029422.htmlTalking about penis heads, I painted one not long ago.


http://keithbrighouse.exto.nl/gallery/detail/id/12029422.html

How's it going 1201, good to see you around. I could be back for a while as I've suddenly got time to write some poetry.

Hi Jen! Congrats on your family's new addition!

Thanks! Now he is sleeping I hope to actually write something and maybe have some adult conversation

 

[WickedEve]

http://keithbrighouse.exto.nl/gallery/detail/id/12029422.htmlTalking about penis heads, I painted one not long ago.

Well... I never did think penises were all that attractive. I do like the painting, though. lol

 

[anonamouse]

you are a sick sick puppy!

I could just picture the dead attached to some kind of spinner (like twister) and we fools watching to see where their penis heads point....

now, now
I cut out all the sick and dirty parts.

ps think of casket as a metaphor for vagina and slaughter as random fuckery as in wimmin being devasted by my wit and attractiveness - that makes it nornal for around here.

 

[anonamouse]

Y'know, it ain't t'all 'bout Animal Planet.
Just consider the mythic Janet
and her mulberry nipple pop.
Thet shore made the networks hop
to get it covered up. All them thar football
freaks, trying to make NASCAR streaks
down the road in front o' the mall
racin' fer pinks and a little kiss
from the mulberry lips of their personal doll.

NASCAR - you are a sick puppy

Jughead makes Janet the car hop's
nipples pop beneath her tight Riverdale
sweater, ah what could be any better?
Than to have a hot jalop,and babes in tow
and thumb my nose at Reggie
'cause, I Jughead, got Betty*

* and resembalance between this and a comic book is purely coinsidental **

** ant muspelling are due to the fact my Spell Checkensie is set on Dutch

 

[champagne1982]

NASCAR - you are a sick puppy

Jughead makes Janet the car hop's
nipples pop beneath her tight Riverdale
sweater, ah what could be any better?
Than to have a hot jalop,and babes in tow
and thumb my nose at Reggie
'cause, I Jughead, got Betty*

* and resembalance between this and a comic book is purely coinsidental **

** ant muspelling are due to the fact my Spell Checkensie is set on Dutch

Well, Juggie, I've ben studyin' life outside uh th' trailer park and I've decided thet Gawd sends tornadoes down on 'em to keep people from bein' too jealous uh th' lifestyle. If'n t'weren't for fear of nature's wrath, everyone would wanna be a born agin redneck.

Gawbless yez all.

 

[anonamouse]

Well, Juggie, I've ben studyin' life outside uh th' trailer park and I've decided thet Gawd sends tornadoes down on 'em to keep people from bein' too jealous uh th' lifestyle. If'n t'weren't for fear of nature's wrath, everyone would wanna be a born agin redneck.

Gawbless yez all.

Aluminium - the wrath of gawd.

Little known or cared for fact - It killed Napoleon, true when they first sarted processing it, it was more expensive than gold, so to show off his wealth his silverware was Aluminium. The man was a genius, till Aluminium.

 

[champagne1982]

Aluminium - the wrath of gawd.

Little known or cared for fact - It killed Napoleon, true when they first sarted processing it, it was more expensive than gold, so to show off his wealth his silverware was Aluminium. The man was a genius, till Aluminium.

A dire warning to all the airplane lickers out there. or, oh Gawd fergive me ... http://img.nauticexpo.com/images_ne/photo-p/121250.jpgcanoe lickers.

 

[anonamouse]

A dire warning to all the airplane lickers out there.

I can see your buds need a little nozzling.

 

[anonamouse]

...and I'm just the tin man to do it

 

[anonamouse]

Coping with my NPD

I'm coping with my NPD
the whole world should worship me
- love my poetry

'cause I'm coping with my NPD*

inadequately

*Narcissistic Personality Disorder

Damn it all rhymes, if cheaply

 

[normal jean]

did y'all know that I live in a trailer park and not all of us are beer swillin' rednecks? sometimes God just decides to hate you and give you bad circumstances...to quote Forrest Gump, "..it happens". and i blame Bush. ( the president, not the beer)

thats just kinda like thinking all blacks are thugs, blonds are dumb, poets are snobs, etc etc.
In fact, let me introduce you to Hidden Oaks....i live in front, nearest the road. behind me is a black lady , a single mom who works 2 jobs to take care of her 16 year old daughter, who is an honor student and a sweet kid. No gangs shooting the place up. The mom's name is Nellie, and last week, she stopped by and brought me 5 packs of vegetable seeds. For my container garden that I am about to put out in my yrd snce we aint allowed to dig here.. That was thoughtful, wasn't it?

To my immediate right, in the front, is a couple who moved in recently, they are from Michigan, and they are both disabled. I haven't formally met them, just going by their tags and what i see in transition. They have spoken, they seem like nice people. behind them, is another old lady, Mary H. She is suffering from end stage lung disease. She is on oxygen and her youngest daughter is always giving her hell. Whenever I make banana nut bread, I take her a loaf. The girl is 25, always in and out of jail, a drug addict, young mother who has lost her kids to social services. I guess she would be the "type" you expect in a trailer park. Loud and causing trouble.

Behind Miss Mary, another elderly couple. They are race fans, i see them with their full regalia on race day. They sit in their yard with some friends and watch the race under a big shade tree when it isn't cold. I expect them to be out there today, with their grill going and budweiser flowing. They have a good time, but never bother anyone.

Behind them, a rather tall, older woman with the prettiest white hair. It makes her look older than she is, but its still very pretty. She walks to the Food Lion everyday, its about 3.5 miles round trip. We have offered her a ride., but she always refuses, thanks us, and says its for her exercise.

I don't know many people beyond that, I know that the majority of the residents here are up and leaving for work between 4 am and 8 am. The cops are rarely ever out here since the rowdy people moved. Most of us are just people who work, are raising kids, people who don't bother anyone and all we want is peace and quiet, a decent place to live. Just like people who live in great big houses and comfy apartments, or schoolbuses in the middle of a corn field, or where ever.I'm ashamed to live in a trailer park, of course, just for the reason here. being judged and made fun of with such a blanket stereotypification.. and looked down upon. oh, thats always good for a laugh, huh. what feelings, right?





y'all have a nice day

 

[champagne1982]

Hi NJ!

You do know that humour tends to stick to its comfort zones? I've been told to lighten up, laugh a little at life's circumstance and then move on. I didn't say anything horribly cruel about people who live in mobile home parks, I just mentioned the stereotypical redneck. That some of them live in trailer parks, love NASCAR and are born again Christians out of the southern US -- that says more about them than it does about you.

Please don't take it personally. If it were funny to make fun of the upper middle class it would be done. Oh wait, hang on, people laugh at them, too. There is no escaping the human sense of absurdity. If we were to always be defensive about where we come from and who we are, then God bless our parents, because it's all their fault.

 

[normal jean]

Hi NJ!

You do know that humour tends to stick to its comfort zones? I've been told to lighten up, laugh a little at life's circumstance and then move on. I didn't say anything horribly cruel about people who live in mobile home parks, I just mentioned the stereotypical redneck. That some of them live in trailer parks, love NASCAR and are born again Christians out of the southern US -- that says more about them than it does about you.

Please don't take it personally. If it were funny to make fun of the upper middle class it would be done. Oh wait, hang on, people laugh at them, too. There is no escaping the human sense of absurdity. If we were to always be defensive about where we come from and who we are, then God bless our parents, because it's all their fault.

ya know what Champ I prefer a poor redneck to a rich jerk any day. LIke you said, laughter is what makes the difference. I love you ...and you better know that sweetie. and I know, you're one of the last people on here that would be cruel, to anyone. I love Larry the Cable Guy just as much as anyone


but, I didnt COME from a trailer park, just to clarify, when i was born, my parents too k me home to a house and i have lived in beautiful houses, none since i met my husband...that says a lot. doesnt it....


smoochies

NJ

 

[anonamouse]

Hi NJ!

You do know that humour tends to stick to its comfort zones? I've been told to lighten up, laugh a little at life's circumstance and then move on. I didn't say anything horribly cruel about people who live in mobile home parks, I just mentioned the stereotypical redneck. That some of them live in trailer parks, love NASCAR and are born again Christians out of the southern US -- that says more about them than it does about you.

Please don't take it personally. If it were funny to make fun of the upper middle class it would be done. Oh wait, hang on, people laugh at them, too. There is no escaping the human sense of absurdity. If we were to always be defensive about where we come from and who we are, then God bless our parents, because it's all their fault.

and you are doing quite nicely

 

[anonamouse]

did y'all know that I live in a trailer park and not all of us are beer swillin' rednecks? sometimes God just decides to hate you and give you bad circumstances...to quote Forrest Gump, "..it happens". and i blame Bush. ( the president, not the beer)

thats just kinda like thinking all blacks are thugs, blonds are dumb, poets are snobs, etc etc.
In fact, let me introduce you to Hidden Oaks....i live in front, nearest the road. behind me is a black lady , a single mom who works 2 jobs to take care of her 16 year old daughter, who is an honor student and a sweet kid. No gangs shooting the place up. The mom's name is Nellie, and last week, she stopped by and brought me 5 packs of vegetable seeds. For my container garden that I am about to put out in my yrd snce we aint allowed to dig here.. That was thoughtful, wasn't it?

To my immediate right, in the front, is a couple who moved in recently, they are from Michigan, and they are both disabled. I haven't formally met them, just going by their tags and what i see in transition. They have spoken, they seem like nice people. behind them, is another old lady, Mary H. She is suffering from end stage lung disease. She is on oxygen and her youngest daughter is always giving her hell. Whenever I make banana nut bread, I take her a loaf. The girl is 25, always in and out of jail, a drug addict, young mother who has lost her kids to social services. I guess she would be the "type" you expect in a trailer park. Loud and causing trouble.

Behind Miss Mary, another elderly couple. They are race fans, i see them with their full regalia on race day. They sit in their yard with some friends and watch the race under a big shade tree when it isn't cold. I expect them to be out there today, with their grill going and budweiser flowing. They have a good time, but never bother anyone.

Behind them, a rather tall, older woman with the prettiest white hair. It makes her look older than she is, but its still very pretty. She walks to the Food Lion everyday, its about 3.5 miles round trip. We have offered her a ride., but she always refuses, thanks us, and says its for her exercise.

I don't know many people beyond that, I know that the majority of the residents here are up and leaving for work between 4 am and 8 am. The cops are rarely ever out here since the rowdy people moved. Most of us are just people who work, are raising kids, people who don't bother anyone and all we want is peace and quiet, a decent place to live. Just like people who live in great big houses and comfy apartments, or schoolbuses in the middle of a corn field, or where ever.I'm ashamed to live in a trailer park, of course, just for the reason here. being judged and made fun of with such a blanket stereotypification.. and looked down upon. oh, thats always good for a laugh, huh. what feelings, right?





y'all have a nice day

I knew a black poet who was blonde

you may be on to something there

I blame both Bus(c)hes if you must know

Now, NJ, how long have you known me? You know I hate just about everthing?
The Rich
The Poor
The Muddled Middle Class

The Neoformalists
The Avant-Guarde

Dem's and Republicans
Tories and Neo-Tories (Labour)
All Religon


I got no problem with god(s) whoever or whatever they may be, as long as they are open to suggestion.

I don't like the mindsets - I like people as long as they are persons. The brain is a plastic organ, rather soft really, not conducive to mindset.

 

[normal jean]

I knew a black poet who was blonde

you may be on to something there

I blame both Bus(c)hes if you must know

Now, NJ, how long have you known me? You know I hate just about everthing?
The Rich
The Poor
The Muddled Middle Class

The Neoformalists
The Avant-Guarde

Dem's and Republicans
Tories and Neo-Tories (Labour)
All Religon


I got no problem with god(s) whoever or whatever they may be, as long as they are open to suggestion.

I don't like the mindsets - I like people as long as they are persons. The brain is a plastic organ, rather soft really, not conducive to mindset.

YOU, dear anonamouse, are one of the absolutely most gifted poets I have EVER read and I don't care whom or who you hate

but...that is the problem, it is the hate! hate is an awful word, and us trailer trash don't hate nobody, even the ones that laugh at us.

I was watching History channel, well, thats about all I ever watch when I have the TV on, fiction is such a waste, I mean really, I dont read it, rarely write it...

anyway, I get lost, ok

anyone know where the term "redneck" REALLY comes from?

I would say, look it up, but, laziness..... yes, I Hate laziness

It was term that referred to miners who wore red bandannas around their necks to signify who they were during a miner versus mine owner rebellion in the early 1900's. they were strong, independent men who stood up for their rights.

Y'all have permission to call me a redneck now

It's really quite funny, though sad, how people judge one another. And it just shocked me that day, to come in here and find how easily people admit their distolerance for others. Personally, if I harbored that much resentment, I wouldn't want anyone to know it. I wasn't raised to be mean like that, and I don't make fun of anyone, except myself. It is only decent...

 

[twelveoone]

YOU, dear anonamouse, are one of the absolutely most gifted poets I have EVER read and I don't care whom or who you hate

but...that is the problem, it is the hate! hate is an awful word, and us trailer trash don't hate nobody, even the ones that laugh at us.

I was watching History channel, well, thats about all I ever watch when I have the TV on, fiction is such a waste, I mean really, I dont read it, rarely write it...

anyway, I get lost, ok

anyone know where the term "redneck" REALLY comes from?

I would say, look it up, but, laziness..... yes, I Hate laziness

It was term that referred to miners who wore red bandannas around their necks to signify who they were during a miner versus mine owner rebellion in the early 1900's. they were strong, independent men who stood up for their rights.

Y'all have permission to call me a redneck now

It's really quite funny, though sad, how people judge one another. And it just shocked me that day, to come in here and find how easily people admit their distolerance for others. Personally, if I harbored that much resentment, I wouldn't want anyone to know it. I wasn't raised to be mean like that, and I don't make fun of anyone, except myself. It is only decent...

Read again, I hate the mindset, the label, the I AM, too often used as an excuse, a justification, or an entitlement; these are all things to get beyond.

I hate academics (as academics); some are right smart people and can be quite nice from time to time.

One of the rare values of christianity is the humble birth.

You I love.

 

[wildsweetone]

not to get in the middle of anything here, but just jumping right in... if there weren't differences and yes, intolerence to differences, would there be modern poetry?

isn't there only so much peaches and cream poetry we can write, or stand to read?

okay... call me the devil's advocate. i'm not doing a 'side' thing, just wondering out loud, if there weren't differences, weren't stereotypes, weren't some form of ugliness in our world, would poetry be worth reading, would it be worth writing?

like i said, thinking out loud is all i'm doing here. god knows i can't discuss poetry with any reasonable sense anywhere else.

 

[normal jean]

honey, you jump wherever you please, affects me none. and it's good to know that if anyone here wants to write poetry that talks down to a whole segment of people, you will be there to give it a grand 5. hell, while were at it, how bout some fat poetry, some ugly poetry, some poetry about diabetics, ( yeah, how bout that sugar, huh? bet a debbie cake sounds good, huh, fat ass) some poetry about old people stuck in homes, yeah, i can see a lot of promise in poetry based on hated. go for it