FantasyXY
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I am currently working on a story where a fair amount of the story is told through the main character's thoughts. It's almost as if the character is telling the story; but it isn't first person, (e.g. Like a typical private detective story is told).
I am wondering if any Lit authors out there have written a thought heavy story, and what sort of paragraph and punctuation structures were used to show that this is what the character is thinking.
As it stands now my story is filled with 'he thought', 'thinks to himself' and 'was thinking' sorts of lines to the point of being an annoying distraction.
I've read nearly all of the writers help articles here on Lit and searched other sites for information. I haven't found anything that helps.
Several years ago I read a Robert Heinlein novel that had all of the stuff going on in the main characters' head in a different font. (This sci-fi story had two people combined into one brain so thoughts were more like dialog, which is different than what I am writing)
In that novel it took me several chapters for my brain to really catch on and automatically take the dialog text as thought. I'm not sure my story will have that kind of length, and the character is just thinking to himself, so doing the font/dialog thing my not work. I feel it would risk losing most of the Lit readers as well.
Any ideas on how to write a story through someone's thoughts would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks
I am wondering if any Lit authors out there have written a thought heavy story, and what sort of paragraph and punctuation structures were used to show that this is what the character is thinking.
As it stands now my story is filled with 'he thought', 'thinks to himself' and 'was thinking' sorts of lines to the point of being an annoying distraction.
I've read nearly all of the writers help articles here on Lit and searched other sites for information. I haven't found anything that helps.
Several years ago I read a Robert Heinlein novel that had all of the stuff going on in the main characters' head in a different font. (This sci-fi story had two people combined into one brain so thoughts were more like dialog, which is different than what I am writing)
In that novel it took me several chapters for my brain to really catch on and automatically take the dialog text as thought. I'm not sure my story will have that kind of length, and the character is just thinking to himself, so doing the font/dialog thing my not work. I feel it would risk losing most of the Lit readers as well.
Any ideas on how to write a story through someone's thoughts would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks