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cymbidia

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Two Tales From the Depths of Domspace

A while back, I posted a plea of a story idea on the Story Ideas board. Will someone not, I asked, write about a little-known BDSM phenomena called “Domspace”? Will someone not write about it from the Do/me’s perspective?

Someone did; actually some two did. The stories that came from this black place in a Dom/mes soul may not be what you consider “erotica” but they contain seeds of truth and shards of illumination into what makes a Dominant tick. Both stories focus on the dire depths of Domspace, a rarely-visited and frightening place in which a Dom/me comes too close to losing control of themselves and, so, damaging their sub. It's a hellish place, and one that all good Dom/mes seek mightily to avoid.

Please do not go read these stories if you’re looking for mainstream erotica, looking for something to whack off to, or looking for something romantic and softly-focused. Ray Dario and Mistress Hecate have written masterful stories but they don’t fit those categories at all. I know, however, that they’d appreciate your feedback, should you be strong and brave enough to read what they’ve written.

And so, from Story Ideas to written and posted, I give you two tales of the black side of Domspace:

Pushed Too Far by Mistress Hecate
( http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=15999 )

Primal Lust by Ray Dario
( http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=13628 )


Enjoy.
cym
 
Fascinating stories from really talented writers. The dark side of domination. I am not really familiar with this genre but these stories were both intensely gripping. I agree with Cym that they were not exactly erotic but they were both so well written that I got swept along in the pain and torment of the characters. Since beginning to read some BDSM I've wanted to "know" more about the characters rather than just reading the sex play itself (which like any erotica can get a bit "same old" after awhile).

I felt almost privileged as a reader to be able to "witness" such an intimate relationship dynamic where the line between love and pain is crossed. I am impressed with authors who are brave enough to explore the dark areas of life. Thanks for sharing.

Sylvia
 
wow.
really good stories.
these feelings will stay with me, i know.
they were both strong stories.
REALLY good stories.
 
not an easy one ...

I admit, it wasn't easy to write the story refered to (pushed too far) - and even harder to "publish" it.

The more I appreciate positive feedback (since the only feedback e-mail I got so far was telling me I was obviously mentally ill and craved to be a criminal, therefore the (anonymous) sender of the feedback would report my story to the FBI) *shruggs shoulders*
 
Don't worry Hecate. The FBI is much too busy using 14 y/o's as target practice in Idaho to worry about someone writting dirty stories.

BTW, I thought your story was excellent! :) Keep up the great work!
 
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