Hi, I posted my story, a surprise cumming, on the site this morning. It's my first try at erotic fiction and would love to hear other people's views. I'm busy reading through other people's stories and finding out what I like and don't like. My story is pure fiction and someone has said that there is a slight degratation element to it, but it was good. I'd really appreciate any other comments, not only on content but also context. Thanx Alsgal
the direct link to the story (amended thanx to advice from Rakastuja) is:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=198346
the direct link to the story (amended thanx to advice from Rakastuja) is:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=198346
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