A story idea to run by y'all

[penguindance]

 

[playag]

Sounds like a good story idea to me. For myself, the nervousness of the girls added with the sexual tension make this scenario a great story. Good luck with it!

 

[ZIP CODE]

i second that.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

I like the idea

I love the idea, Stranger, but I really don't have anything to add to it either. It sounds like a sweet one that I'd love to read = )

Let us know when you finish it!

Chicklet

PS - maybe this'd be a good one to have two views about? After you write it, if I'm inspired to write another POV would that be ok?

 

[penguindance]

Re: I like the idea

 

[CallaLily]

I think it would be neat for you to write the story, and then rewrite it with the other girl's POV. I think I'd the story about the timid girl, first... and then read the other story/POV. All in all, it sounds like an incredible story! Can't wait to read it.

 

[Chicklet]

Awesome

Awesome, Stranger. Can't wait to hear your part = ) = )

(you were on lit yesterday but not msn! how am I supposed to chat with you on lit? it keeps saying my pm box is full...)

 

[sirhugs]

I agree this would be a great story, and an even better pair of stories. It also could start a series, if that's what you are into- Julie returns to sex with a guy, comparing it to Megan;the girls include a guy in their fun;seducing one of their dads if you like incest....

 

[NASCARaddicted]

yeah, I second that.

Seeing two girls kissing each other is pure erotic, even if they don't have real sex.

Of course, sex should also be included. And like sirhugs said, you could add some incest. At first, Julie seduces Megans father. Then, Julie tells Megan about it, and then Megan and Julie both seduce Megans father (and after that, they do the same with Julies father)

 

[badbabysitter]

sheesh, always comes back to incest on this site doesnt it.

Why not just keep it to just plain ole girl girl loving. Some of us ladies like that.

 

[Chicklet]

Hrmm..

I think we should keep this a cute romantic story, no incest or parental seduction...in my personal opinion. Maybe a different type of story for incest, but I would rather see a romantic seduction story here.

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]

 

[ronde]

It sounds like you have a lot of possibilities that could be pursued, but I agree that incest wouldn't fit very well.

Julie has second thoughts but a repeat convinces her that girls are more fun afterall

Julie enjoyed the experience so much that she initiates the second liaison

I like the idea of some romance between the two girls, especially if they stay together.

 

[Poor Yorick]

I like the general idea, best friends getting together after a long time.

The story itself is great, and nothing against girl-girl hehe, but I would've preferred male-female best friends tho

And yes, incest wouldn't really fit in in this type of story

 

[penguindance]

 

[penguindance]

 

[sirhugs]

Wowzers!

This story is posted, and I think it turned out quite well, actually.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=54879

" quite well " is false modesty, methinks- you rival chicklet for your ability to combine narrative flow, character and eroticism- most can do two , but all three is really talented! thanks for writing it.

 

[penguindance]

 

[sirhugs]

now if I could just master the shift key and get the caps in the right places...

you're welcome

 

[Chicklet]

Megan's POV

I will post a link here when it's up, sound good?

now, back to work!!

 

[penguindance]

Re: Megan's POV

 

[sirhugs]

which subject next for you, p_l_s? I have l;ots of stupid ideas to inspire you to think up good ones...

 

[Chicklet]

<sniff>

no ideas for me?

<rejected>

 

[sirhugs]

<sniff>

no ideas for me?

<rejected>

ideas? I got lots
which ones ya need?