Hi, all!
Since this is the Story Ideas board, I wanted to get an opinion on a story idea I've had in my head for a while now. I personally like it, and think it could be really good quality-wise (i.e. not plotless smut) if I ever get around to writing it.
Just so you know, the story is rather fantastical, i.e. it hinges on comic-book sci-fi. I know that the majority of stories on Lit are 'realistic', and I know some of you don't care for overly-fantastical stories. Still, I think it has great potential (both sexually and literary)...I'd like to know what you all think of it.
A word of warning: the synopsis is rather long. I've been thinking in great detail
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Story: "The Incredible Hunk" - An erotic take-off of the original comic story.
The story centers on a young man, a college senior attending Generic University (or whatever...it's not important where he goes). He's very much a nerd; he's overweight, unpopular, and very shy. He only has two real friends; the leader of the university's science club, and a cute female classmate who works with him as a study and project partner (and who he secretly is in love with, but is too shy to say anything).
One day, while helping the science club guys with a lab experiment, our hero accidentally gets a sizable dose of untested radiation. Fortunately, he doesn't die...indeed, he doesn't seem to be affected at all. Baffled, the medics allow him to go on his way.
Later that day, he is set upon by one of the popular girls (you know the type), who have taken to cock-teasing him for their own mean-spirited amusement. She proceeds to get a rise out of him, only to laugh in his face.
As the resultant horniness and frustration set in, he starts feeling ill...he dashes outside just in time to see his body transforming. His skin turns green, his body becomes huge and massively muscular, and his cock grows to elephantine proportions.
Gone is our shy, lovable hero. There is now only the Hunk...a massive, muscular *brick* of a creature with an impossibly huge penis. His mind is gone...he is driven solely by lust. Years of pent-up horniness and sexual frustration boil to the surface as the Hunk sets out to sate his monsterous libido.
Thus the premise is set. Whenever our hero becomes too sexually aroused, he becomes the Hunk, who prowls the university campus like an animal, hunting for pussy. One by one, he corners the school's sexiest girls and has his way with them. Each time the scenario is the same; he follows them until no one else is around, overpowers them, and rapes them. Well, "rape" isn't exactly right...though they always resist at first, the girls are soon begging for more of his monster member.
Every time, our hero wakes up back in his dorm, his clothes tattered, with no memory of what happened. This cycle continues for a good few weeks, with over a dozen girls ending up on the business end of the Hunk's cock. Rumors start to circulate of a "huge green monster" stalking and sexually assaulting girls on the university grounds. The police and campus security try to look into things, but the Hunk's sporadic appearences make it very difficult...especially since the creature's victims don't seem to mind...
Eventually, the Hunk is caught on film by reporters from the university newspaper. OUr hero reads the paper, and begins to fear that his blackouts may be more dangerous than he thought...
One night, our hero wakes up to find himself naked and next to a girl who looks like she's been fucked with a cum-spraying firehose. Putting two and two together, he realizes that HE'S the "monster" in the paper.
The realization takes a heavy emotional toll on him. Not only has he been sexually assaulting these poor (lucky?) women, but he has no control over his alter-ego; it's only a matter of time before the Hunk ends up hurting somebody. Frightened for the sake of the female student body, he confides in his friend in the science club. Together, the two work towards finding a cure.
...but it may already be too late. The Hunk's assaults have been getting more and more violent; one girl has already been hospitalized. Our hero fears it is only a matter of time before he outright kills someone.
Even worse is the issue of his female friend/crush. Ever the empathic one, she's become worried over his strange disappearences and sudden aloofness. The poor hero is worried for her safety; given his romantic feelings toward her, she could easily be the Hunk's next target. Ultimately, he decides that the only way to protect her is to stay away from her for good...
Will our hero be able to conquer his inner sex demon? Will he be able to protect the woman he loves from...himself? Will the women of Generic University continue to be terrorized by the Hunk, and if not, will they be sorry to see him go? Will anyone stomach this ridiculous premise?
...I guess we'll have to wait until I write the thing to find out.
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So, people...what's the verdict? I'm really interested in hearing what everyone has to say. Though I've never released a written work before, I do have extensive practice (I'm working on a facfiction novel as we speak), and I'm sure I could write this into a quality erotic/romantic story eventually. Hell, I've even got some ideas for sequels.
Since this is the Story Ideas board, I wanted to get an opinion on a story idea I've had in my head for a while now. I personally like it, and think it could be really good quality-wise (i.e. not plotless smut) if I ever get around to writing it.
Just so you know, the story is rather fantastical, i.e. it hinges on comic-book sci-fi. I know that the majority of stories on Lit are 'realistic', and I know some of you don't care for overly-fantastical stories. Still, I think it has great potential (both sexually and literary)...I'd like to know what you all think of it.
A word of warning: the synopsis is rather long. I've been thinking in great detail

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Story: "The Incredible Hunk" - An erotic take-off of the original comic story.
The story centers on a young man, a college senior attending Generic University (or whatever...it's not important where he goes). He's very much a nerd; he's overweight, unpopular, and very shy. He only has two real friends; the leader of the university's science club, and a cute female classmate who works with him as a study and project partner (and who he secretly is in love with, but is too shy to say anything).
One day, while helping the science club guys with a lab experiment, our hero accidentally gets a sizable dose of untested radiation. Fortunately, he doesn't die...indeed, he doesn't seem to be affected at all. Baffled, the medics allow him to go on his way.
Later that day, he is set upon by one of the popular girls (you know the type), who have taken to cock-teasing him for their own mean-spirited amusement. She proceeds to get a rise out of him, only to laugh in his face.
As the resultant horniness and frustration set in, he starts feeling ill...he dashes outside just in time to see his body transforming. His skin turns green, his body becomes huge and massively muscular, and his cock grows to elephantine proportions.
Gone is our shy, lovable hero. There is now only the Hunk...a massive, muscular *brick* of a creature with an impossibly huge penis. His mind is gone...he is driven solely by lust. Years of pent-up horniness and sexual frustration boil to the surface as the Hunk sets out to sate his monsterous libido.
Thus the premise is set. Whenever our hero becomes too sexually aroused, he becomes the Hunk, who prowls the university campus like an animal, hunting for pussy. One by one, he corners the school's sexiest girls and has his way with them. Each time the scenario is the same; he follows them until no one else is around, overpowers them, and rapes them. Well, "rape" isn't exactly right...though they always resist at first, the girls are soon begging for more of his monster member.
Every time, our hero wakes up back in his dorm, his clothes tattered, with no memory of what happened. This cycle continues for a good few weeks, with over a dozen girls ending up on the business end of the Hunk's cock. Rumors start to circulate of a "huge green monster" stalking and sexually assaulting girls on the university grounds. The police and campus security try to look into things, but the Hunk's sporadic appearences make it very difficult...especially since the creature's victims don't seem to mind...
Eventually, the Hunk is caught on film by reporters from the university newspaper. OUr hero reads the paper, and begins to fear that his blackouts may be more dangerous than he thought...
One night, our hero wakes up to find himself naked and next to a girl who looks like she's been fucked with a cum-spraying firehose. Putting two and two together, he realizes that HE'S the "monster" in the paper.
The realization takes a heavy emotional toll on him. Not only has he been sexually assaulting these poor (lucky?) women, but he has no control over his alter-ego; it's only a matter of time before the Hunk ends up hurting somebody. Frightened for the sake of the female student body, he confides in his friend in the science club. Together, the two work towards finding a cure.
...but it may already be too late. The Hunk's assaults have been getting more and more violent; one girl has already been hospitalized. Our hero fears it is only a matter of time before he outright kills someone.
Even worse is the issue of his female friend/crush. Ever the empathic one, she's become worried over his strange disappearences and sudden aloofness. The poor hero is worried for her safety; given his romantic feelings toward her, she could easily be the Hunk's next target. Ultimately, he decides that the only way to protect her is to stay away from her for good...
Will our hero be able to conquer his inner sex demon? Will he be able to protect the woman he loves from...himself? Will the women of Generic University continue to be terrorized by the Hunk, and if not, will they be sorry to see him go? Will anyone stomach this ridiculous premise?
...I guess we'll have to wait until I write the thing to find out.
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So, people...what's the verdict? I'm really interested in hearing what everyone has to say. Though I've never released a written work before, I do have extensive practice (I'm working on a facfiction novel as we speak), and I'm sure I could write this into a quality erotic/romantic story eventually. Hell, I've even got some ideas for sequels.