A steamy poem....

[Mae13]

....or is it prose? Ahh fuck, I forget which is which...lost in the cups tonight, Mae is. Thought I would try my pen at something that I haven't in a while...at least tried and shared? Only no pictures to go along with it...perhaps someone else can volunteer? hehehe...

A *kiss* to my fellow Lit'ers...
Mae
~~~~
I enter...slowly...
The room dark and damp, and dripping slightly, as if a womb to shelter me.
The hissing sibilance, like a multitude of Tiamats, her sinuous necks wrapping around my body, barely there.
Stretching out, bared, upon the moist tile...I sink into the twilight.
Tongue touching, lips wet and slightly salty...for a moment I forget, and think it is your sex which perfumes me.
My skin; so flushed already, beads of want raised upon my skin...
My hands, sliding, so needful...against a body that seems
it has been making long love on a hot summer's day.
And I find my want, and can imagine...oh! I feel the ghost of your hands upon mine,
teasing that wetness which has nothing to do with environment, and all to do with longing...
I part for you, a hungry, honey-lined flower...eager to devour you.
You are there, your tense voice in my ear, as I please...
As I break, gasping...whimpering...my keening echoes back from the cold squares of porcelain.
My arched, open mouth of submission crying out.
The tension flowing from my body, almost as quickly as it caught me...and in that steamy room, with its scent of sex...
You were there...
Weren't you?
~~~~

Hrm. don't know if I like yet. Fuck it. Critique?
*hugs*

 

[Sabineteas]

I think I like it....it makes my imagination work and I can see you and maybe..........

 

[milkit]

I like it it brings up great images in my mind

 

[Jewelz]

Oh my Gawd Mae!! Dont doubt your talent! I am in awe of you....I would love to read more

 

[Mae13]

OK, I just realized I put Tiamat in a somewhat-sex poem. God...my old 'D&D geekness' comes out

Now...'fess up...who else understood that reference?! hehe

 

[Savant73]

Evocative...

Words compelling thought, and imagintion.
Visions spinning rampant and wanton
Thoughts merging and blending
Feelings haggard and spent

Very well done Mae...well done indeed.

 

[Sabineteas]

OK, I just realized I put Tiamat in a somewhat-sex poem. God...my old 'D&D geekness' comes out

Now...'fess up...who else understood that reference?! hehe

had no clue, but the rest made perfect sense to me<laughing>.

 

[Mystical]

Mae as always your words inspiring into itself. I pictured my husband coming home from the feild after being away for a month. Thank you for a lovely way of breaking the lonely morning.

 

[MarkDelta]

OK, I just realized I put Tiamat in a somewhat-sex poem. God...my old 'D&D geekness' comes out

Now...'fess up...who else understood that reference?! hehe

Errrumm I did....
Great Poem. great images

 

[moondoggie]

outstanding

Lovely poem from a lovely lady.

I wish more would contribute such beautiful words.

 

[Ohiomale]

OK, I just realized I put Tiamat in a somewhat-sex poem. God...my old 'D&D geekness' comes out

Now...'fess up...who else understood that reference?! hehe

Hey whats wrong with D&D? Huh!? hehe... Great poem...and I wish all gammer ladies looked like you... Id go to every Convention...

 

[privy2u]

yep it was me!

You were there...
Weren't you?


I can see I need to leave a much deeper impression next time!



Privy

 

[Rollin Fun]

your prose, even more beautiful, passionate then your pictures.

you're a beautiful, passionate woman.

what more can i say.

thank you for sharing your thoughts

 

[Ice Cold]

I don't critique them, I just enjoy them Mae.

Now since you invoked Tiamat, Go and see the goblin king!!!

 

[druce19]

Now...'fess up...who else understood that reference?! hehe

Druce slowly raises his hand.... Wow....that brings back some memories of times *long* past !! LOL

Mae...what are we going to do with you ?? Every time that I log on and see something else that you've posted, I get so excited in so many ways

Seriously......trust your Muse(s), hon !

 

[Just_Avg_Guy]

The more times I log on to this site, the more times I realize that the beauty of the mind far surpasses physical beauty.
Thanks Mae, for the reminder.

 

[Guest]

Hi Mae

Just to let you know, i've been admiring you photos for months now.......and im in lust! You are an amazing woman!

Take care
Joanna
xx

 

[Shy_Joanna]

Hey again

I got myself a proper ID at last, so i can stop leaving unregistered comments! Stay sexy.......

Joanna
x

 

[Morning Rain]

Mae13

I really like your Poem. I write when Im sad.... maybe I'll write tonight.

Very Good GF

 

[rexfelis]

Is there ANYTHING artistic that you can't do so amazingly well?

 

[ALeeInAStorm]

Standing agape and blinking

Mae!

Once again I am impressed and frightened by your many talents. Each time I think I have gained some insight, you do something to blow me out of the water.

You have a depth to you that many strive to achieve and it eludes them forever.

Your word craft is amazing. You paint with words that are charged with imagery and emotion causing pictures of intense and vivid beauty to dance across the mind's eye. Effects that you have on other parts of bodies is not to be left unmentioned. *Evil Grin*

Your reference to Tiamat has been niggling at the back of my mind. I am sure once I stop trying to remember, it will come back to me. I really hate old age! *chuckle*

Thank you for sharing another of your amazing gifts.

 

[~justin]

*raises his hand*

...but we both know that you out-geek me, Mae

...that was one sensous piece of free verse...

 

[Mae13]

Wheeee! Good to know there's other sexy geeks out there! *snicker* Lee baby, think back...check the old MM...7-headed dragon...she was a nasty bitch! Or, if you ever saw the D&D cartoon, she was in there too! *smooch* I miss our chats!

Now Justin, I don't know about out-geeking you...I'd just try real hard to wipe you at StarCraft *sigh* I don't have anyone to play with me anymore...*pout* Maybe someday....

Thank you all for your kind comments. I've been thinking about writing a lot more lately, maybe I'll toss some more up here, or start submitting things. Also getting up the nerve to try painting again, we'll see how that goes too!

*kisses*
Mae

 

[Sabineteas]

Wheeee! Good to know there's other sexy geeks out there! *snicker* Lee baby, think back...check the old MM...7-headed dragon...she was a nasty bitch! Or, if you ever saw the D&D cartoon, she was in there too! *smooch* I miss our chats!

Now Justin, I don't know about out-geeking you...I'd just try real hard to wipe you at StarCraft *sigh* I don't have anyone to play with me anymore...*pout* Maybe someday....

Thank you all for your kind comments. I've been thinking about writing a lot more lately, maybe I'll toss some more up here, or start submitting things. Also getting up the nerve to try painting again, we'll see how that goes too!

*kisses*
Mae

I learn more about you every time I see your posts, Mae....please write more....and you paint? What medium? Talk to me lady!

Sabine

 

[Mae13]

Well Sabine, the more appropriate words might be I *try* to paint...hehe! I was always better at sculpture I think...horrid at drawing (which REALLY sucks when you're trying to design your own tattoos!)...and never had the patience for oil! So...mostly acrylic/tempura stuff. I actually have a batch of trivet-like things that I am going to attempt to sketch and paint on to give as gifts to my Circle brothers and sisters before I leave. I will miss them greatly, although I'm sure the Pagan proclivities are much greater in Europe overall than So.Dakota, lol!
If I do any for real that I can stand, I will photo and post them for you babe

*smooch*
Mae