A Spunky Wedding Gift

[PinkPartyGirl]

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[seabass723]

Hey there party girl and welcome to lit. I haven't really participated in this thread prior but thought to stop by and saw your post. I have to say the idea of your story had me smiling especially with the image of a Zach galiafanakas as your smarmy and idiot best man. Do you plan on continuing the story thereafter and having the bride get even somehow? Or potentially having the best man continue his foot assaults throughout the story until one of the characters brings him to justice? Have you thought of developing the groom or other groomsmen? You've put a lot of thought into the bride and her maid of honor so I ask what sort of qualities the groom would have etc. Hope this helps or at the very least gets you thinking.

 

[PinkPartyGirl]

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[lovecraft68]

That's a fun idea, I think it would play really well in fetish.

I'm thinking past the reception and the wedding night, maybe the husband wants to undress her starting with the shoes? By then you'd smell the cum when they come off and her stockings(she would not be barefoot, at least I doubt it) would be dry, but stained.

She tells him what happened and he gets turned on by it and he wants to 'love' her feet and seeing how turned on he is, she gets into it and let's him.

He then confesses he has a foot fetish and now that she is happy to indulge him you can end it with a ....

Sole mates joke.

 

[FunkyBohemian]

Thanks for your feedback.

I thought it thru and I have a few more twists for the story.

I hadn't initially factored in revenge, but that's a great idea, so here is what I have...

The bride intentionally has the best man switched and paired up with her plus-sized sister (a Rebel Wilson type character) at the last second, right before the formal reception ceremony. After the wedding ceremony is done, she privately tells him she knows what he did and he better stay away from the cute maid of honour if he knows what's good for him. He is very angry.

The big girl he's paired up with is into BDSM and she tries to hit on him all night, but he rejects her. Finally, he tries to be polite, but ends up saying something very rude to get away from her late in the reception. He then ends up back with the maid of honour and they leave together. The bride pretends to be happy for them, but she is furious. He tells the bride that her shoes are very cute and she turns bright red as he leaves with the bridesmaid.

At her apartment, he is about to go all the way with the bridesmaid (who has him tied spread eagle to the bed) but she stops to answer a call from the distraught bride. Apparently, during the honeymoon, the groom was having difficulty taking off the bride's sticky shoes. When he finally pried free one shoe, he lost his balance and fell backward. His head hit the dresser and then the TV on top fell off and bonked him in the head too. He's in serious but stable condition at the hospital. The bridesmaid apologizes before grabbing a skimpy shirt, shorts and sandals and running out... leaving the best man tied up, horny and waiting.

At the hospital waiting room, the bridesmaid asks the bride why she has one shoe on and the other shoe off. The bride tells her what the best man really did to her shoes. The bridesmaid is angry and she admits he is tied up in her apartment. The bride says she has an idea, and she makes a call.

After waiting and sleeping for an hour, the best man wakes up to find a large penis gag tied around his mouth... along with the plus-size girl he rejected standing beside the bed. She tells him she's the roommate and her sister called and told her what he did. She also tells him that only one of them are gonna have sex tonight... and it's not gonna be him. Then, she goes on to describe how she's gonna sit on his head, shoot her load and spread it evenly all over his face multiple times throughout the night, just like the way he humiliated her sister.

And that's all I have for now. Feel free to let me know if I'm missing anything and thanks again for your feedback. I greatly appreciate it.

Wow funny and also, with the rejected girl getting sexual revenge, the chance of being highly erotic too...