A slightly erotic poem, I share.

always_smiling said:
You give me devilish looks
With an eyebrow raised, and
I close my eyes to remember,
And fantasize
Because you're at work,
Wishing we're together.

Your hands, so soft, yet, manly,
And how they touch me
Sends goose bumps
To my freckled, milky white skin
Perspiring to pink after only one kiss.

Thrusting your love; we call my oven
You so easily set to broil;
Sizzling hot, I become
Like well-done meat, but quite tender.
I'm always ready for your mouth
To nibble then drink
Juices out of me.

Dreaming of your love
With hands in my panties
Hiding under the sheet
Starting to play,
You come home with that grin;
So seductive, it makes me limp,
You know it,

Then lift the sheet
To take a peek,
And start devouring me
From grins to open mouth,
I feed what you crave and need;
My love.




Thrusting your love; we call my oven
You so easily set to broil;
Sizzling hot, I become
Like well-done meat, but quite tender.
I'm always ready for your mouth
To nibble then drink
Juices out of me.


very nicely put. i thought this was very good
nin-
 
templeminded said:
Thrusting your love; we call my oven
You so easily set to broil;
Sizzling hot, I become
Like well-done meat, but quite tender.
I'm always ready for your mouth
To nibble then drink
Juices out of me.


very nicely put. i thought this was very good
nin-

Thanks! I'm glad you liked. :)
 
templeminded said:
checking them out now
nin-


ok i think i got them all that were on there and voted and commented
i'm no poet so nothing profound was said but i voiced (wrote) how i felt
hope you have a wonderful day
nin-
 
4degrees said:
no, i just like the mental picture you painted for me of something slightly homicidal.


*hearty laugh*

I fell off my desk chair. You best come rub my butt, and make it better.
 
*hearty laugh*


why is this funny?
i meant that in earnest.

the visual
of bashing
that FUCK in
his skull
watching him
fall
and bleed
soaking
carpet
with hot
red
life.
 
4degrees said:
why is this funny?
i meant that in earnest.

the visual
of bashing
that FUCK in
his skull
watching him
fall
and bleed
soaking
carpet
with hot
red
life.


if you really did mean this that would be all the more reason why it would be cute and funny. lol
i sure have felt like that a few times before. lol
it is a cute poem
nin-
 
the visual
of bashing
that FUCK in
his skull
watching him
fall
and bleed
soaking
carpet
with hot
red
life.[/QUOTE]



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