A slight change to my story

[gizmoo69]

I've just slightly changed the premise of my story The Mum-Next-Door so that the mum is no longer a bored housewife but a single mother. It's not a big change, but I just thought it made it a bit better as a story. Also, well...let's just say my muse has had a change in circumstances!

Enjoy!

 

[Torg]

Aw, I liked the illicit or at the very least unknown nature of the story. But I'll be contributing soon anyway. Just need a minor adjustment.

 

[Zingiber]

When I checked, only one of the branches reflected the change in premise -- another still mentioned her husband

Of course this is Chyoo. You could run both at the same time.

-Z

 

[gizmoo69]

When I checked, only one of the branches reflected the change in premise -- another still mentioned her husband

Bugger, didn't notice! oh well, as you say, this is CHYOO.