a simple poem, lotsa reads?

[Maria2394]

OKay guys, something odd going on, so I was wondering if anyone else had this happen..

I posted a poem, ( a poem about love and want) last week. It is a simple poem, no rhyme, no aliteration, nothing fancy, just feelings and it was / is closed to votes and comments because I wrote it for a person who only communicates with me through my LIt submissions...so whats the weird thing?

Usually when I write something that should have received a lot of bad comments, or excess ( anonymous) criticism, it really never gets more than a few reads in a month, ( just a girl as an example)'

this one is getting like 30 + a day and its not a GOOD poem in any sense of the word

so, who is reading the damned thing?


any ideas, cuz its freakin me out and I have so litle to be freaked about anymore

 

[wildsweetone]

good grief woman when are you going to learn to Post a Link???!!!

hurry up! quick! i want to READ it!

 

[Maria2394]

hey WSO

I just enjoy number stuff like SJ does, I suppose and like i said abou the poem...

anyway, here it is, not posting alink, just wanna see hwo long the phenomenon goes on, and it is a phenom to me, since I dont post much on here anymore, dont have the reader base i had when I had 20 + stories and over a hundred poems...


a poem about love and want ( from the passion thread)

I do not want random sex
fuck random sex
I want a man to hold me, whisper

Here's something for you, Honey

It's me and I will never leave.
Come let me love you, let me touch your face
forever be my angel.

****

see? simple, not a "good" poem in any real poetic sense,

I was just curious is all



marrria

 

[WickedEve]

When you get 30 "reads" a day, you're actually getting 30 hits a day. Some may not be reading. They are probably clicking on the link because they like your poetry or they like the title. I'm sure the title and poem appeal to many lit readers.

 

[Maria2394]

When you get 30 "reads" a day, you're actually getting 30 hits a day. Some may not be reading. They are probably clicking on the link because they like your poetry or they like the title. I'm sure the title and poem appeal to many lit readers.

ahh, as usual you are practical and more than likely right

its just kinda funny, as my other stuff just languishes in the impotent hell I have assigned them to


as for appeal... oh well...I just aint up to wring good stuff anymore, lol, much less, erotica. i just wanna snuggle, feel a hand on my shoulder, a kis on my neck


or

whatever

 

[WickedEve]

The poem is rather erotic in a sweet way. Sometimes a simple poem works.

 

[Maria2394]

The poem is rather erotic in a sweet way. Sometimes a simple poem works.

well, thank you Eve. Im sweet, just so danged sweet I make myself ill sometimes with the sweetness

youre sweet too

 

[The Mystery Valiant]

Ah yes, it's the killer!

This is a phenomenon I am quite familiar with, I have made simple and quite unimpressive comments in reply to what other ppl have said many times. And each time, I am shocked that the whole room erupts into a riot of laughter. And I wind up confused because I didn't mean it as a joke!

You see, what might have happened here is that you relaxed and just went straight to the main source of lucidity. You chose to be upfront, honest and casual. And in so doing, tapped that thread of human emotionalism. The core of the human existance. You went to a place that talks to everyone, and in kind, they whole-heartedly responded. Your talking to ppl straight up and face forward..., no mask's, no inhibitions. You did it babe! You found a mark..., can you recreate it?

 

[wildsweetone]

hey WSO

I just enjoy number stuff like SJ does, I suppose and like i said abou the poem...

anyway, here it is, not posting alink, just wanna see hwo long the phenomenon goes on, and it is a phenom to me, since I dont post much on here anymore, dont have the reader base i had when I had 20 + stories and over a hundred poems...


a poem about love and want ( from the passion thread)

I do not want random sex
fuck random sex
I want a man to hold me, whisper

Here's something for you, Honey

It's me and I will never leave.
Come let me love you, let me touch your face
forever be my angel.

****

see? simple, not a "good" poem in any real poetic sense,

I was just curious is all



marrria

well, I like it and I've read it 15 times already, so there.

is there a man out there who would say such things? who cares, it's sure nice to imagine there is one, or two, or three...

 

[Maria2394]

This is a phenomenon I am quite familiar with, I have made simple and quite unimpressive comments in reply to what other ppl have said many times. And each time, I am shocked that the whole room erupts into a riot of laughter. And I wind up confused because I didn't mean it as a joke!

You see, what might have happened here is that you relaxed and just went straight to the main source of lucidity. You chose to be upfront, honest and casual. And in so doing, tapped that thread of human emotionalism. The core of the human existance. You went to a place that talks to everyone, and in kind, they whole-heartedly responded. Your talking to ppl straight up and face forward..., no mask's, no inhibitions. You did it babe! You found a mark..., can you recreate it?

LOL

thank you, Mystery Valiant ( i like your name, by the way)

umm, the poem? was a moment of weakness, Im sure it would be no problemo to recreate that!!

so, basically, I have been trying too hard... interesting


thank you

 

[Maria2394]

well, I like it and I've read it 15 times already, so there.

is there a man out there who would say such things? who cares, it's sure nice to imagine there is one, or two, or three...

WSO-

oh, I know there are men out there that would say it, and mean it, just they all said it to someone else already.



ps, thank you for reading my stuff

 

[wildsweetone]

WSO-

oh, I know there are men out there that would say it, and mean it, just they all said it to someone else already.



ps, thank you for reading my stuff

thank you for writing your stuff!

 

[My Erotic Trail]

The poem is rather erotic in a sweet way. Sometimes a simple poem works.

I agree, sometimes simple and direct worded as wonderful as this poem works great. The longer the poem and the more images painted in one's mind complicates the trail of thoughts and words that tangle the tail... I meant 'tale.' example...

I like it when your panties hit the floor.

or...

Take your pantys from your pose
peel them slowly from your skin
sway in the moonlight's glow
and allow them to fall to the floor.

<grinin'

 

[The Mystery Valiant]

LOL
thank you, Mystery Valiant ( i like your name, by the way)
umm, the poem? was a moment of weakness, Im sure it would be no problemo to recreate that!!
so, basically, I have been trying too hard... interesting
thank you

Oh no Maria! You understate yourself too easily! It was not a moment of weakness! It was a moment of insight! Of strength! Don't let introversion color all your self-conceptions. Remember creativity is an obtuse definition! How a person taps and/or finds that inspiration, sometimes is the finest accident and amazing surprise in the universe! And guess what! You have tapped a very primal and erotic form of muse! You sure it came at a time of weakness? Then the universe needs to be that weak!