BlackShanglan
Silver-Tongued Papist
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shereads said:Sad, isn't it? How people will participate in something even though they've been warned that it's silly and pointless? People these days!
shereads said:Sad, isn't it? How people will participate in something even though they've been warned that it's silly and pointless? People these days!
Tatelou said:I voted for "Will power..."
The title also says "strength" (as in physical, not just mental) to me. Couldn't even begin to explain why!
Lou
Done editing then?BlackShanglan said:God bless them![]()
Minsue: For description I'm thinking something like "Love and the last taboo." It's "that" story; pondering the title.
(Not, mind you, that I am sure it will matter. They may well decide not to post.)
Shanglan
minsue said:Done editing then?![]()
BlackShanglan said:Utterly delighted. *purr*
Thanks Lou, I was very much hoping for something like that to come through.
Shanglan
BlackShanglan said:Done the big one that pulled 15% of the length. Still polishing a handful of scenes and wordchoices. I think it's got one more sweep coming, but I'm hoping perhaps by the end of the week.
Bit nervous now. I've been dodging the issue of whether they will post; looks like I will be running smack into it at last.
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Shanglan
Sub Joe said:If you call your next story "Will", I will correctly assume it has lots of Willies in it.
"Will" doesn't make me think of will power, by the way. My first reaction was that it was a name: I picture a public schoolboy with oversize ears and narrow eyes, wearing his pink and black school cap. He has grubby knees from having made a bish of a tackle in rugger. He is a bit of a fool, but muddles through anyhow.
perdita said:Made me think of Der Ring des Nibelungen, you know, cos of Schopenhauer's influence on Wagner.
Perdita
Sub Joe said:Shanglan, I do mind if you shoot yourself. I mind a lot. You still have a huge backlog of feedback to give me on my current eight stories.
Sub Joe said:And Perdita twists the dagger exquisitely.
Dranoel said:No option for flogged songbirds?
Oh thank god. I thought I was the only one lost on that one.BlackShanglan said:Never encountered the concept. Care to explain?
BlackShanglan said:Trade you for a good thorough edit on this oneIt's 36,000 words.
Shanglan