A Silly Love Song?

[sirhugs]

I wrote another poem
Not A Sonnet is now posted
in addition to being defeated again by iambic pentaneter (hello, high school english class!) I could not even do 14 lines.
Just more whiny unrequited love. A lot like high school there, too...
thoughts?
Suggestions? ("give up"?)

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Keep at it! It could be great, once you're finished.

 

[sirhugs]

Keep at it! It could be great, once you're finished.

Thank you for the encouragement, but I rather thought this one was finished- not like it is a Norse saga. Though if I had enough tissues, writing the saga of my love life might be cathartic.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Lol. I hear you.

 

[sirhugs]

reporting in...only 192 views (low even for a poem by me). Up to an even 4 on 6 cotes after slumping in the 3s. as with all my poems but Lost, a Poem, no comments.

 

[Winter_Fare]

reporting in...only 192 views (low even for a poem by me). Up to an even 4 on 6 cotes after slumping in the 3s. as with all my poems but Lost, a Poem, no comments.

My latest only has half those views(92). I have stuff that just seems to drop, unnoticed. Weirdly the poems I'm most attached to get the worst reception.

I liked your unsonnet x

 

[sirhugs]

My latest only has half those views(92). I have stuff that just seems to drop, unnoticed. Weirdly the poems I'm most attached to get the worst reception.

I liked your unsonnet x

You post so much poetry, I'm jelly.

Which is the one you are referring too?

 

[Winter_Fare]

You post so much poetry, I'm jelly.

Which is the one you are referring too?

Three votes. Three. It's been up since August last year.

https://literotica.com/p/day-lily

 

[Winter_Fare]

And my one attempt at humour tanked.

Two votes!

https://literotica.com/p/what-tyler-said

 

[sirhugs]

Three votes. Three. It's been up since August last year.

https://literotica.com/p/day-lily

lilies are always controversial. and I suspect their heel turn at the end cost you some support.

 

[sirhugs]

And my one attempt at humour tanked.

Two votes!

https://literotica.com/p/what-tyler-said

Did the freedom bread come with jam? Toe jam perhaps?
And I was never great at humour either.
Three votes now.

 

[Kindfarmer]

I wrote another poem
Not A Sonnet is now posted
in addition to being defeated again by iambic pentaneter (hello, high school english class!) I could not even do 14 lines.
Just more whiny unrequited love. A lot like high school there, too...
thoughts?
Suggestions? ("give up"?)

Never quit! I swear Paul McCartney wrote something about that, turned out well for him…..

 

[Kindfarmer]

Did the freedom bread come with jam? Toe jam perhaps?
And I was never great at humour either.
Three votes now.

That was quick! I don’t by it