A shot at Explicit, But really more like softcore

[Sex The Drug]

Eyes fixed like a scope on its objective
Feeling the desire in the air
Stomachs flip like circus clowns
First touch sends tremors thru the body
Next a kiss that sends me to another solar system
Cloths drop to the floor like bricks
Bodies collide making two into one
Sweet scent of lust in the air
Taste of each other so sweet
Licking the juices of our lust
Slowly entering into her cleft
Thrusting like a piston
Our bodies quiver as if on queue
Warmth flows

 

[Fairytat]

Eyes fixed like a scope on its objective

makes me think of a cyclops or a submarine, not exactly the most romantic or lust-inducing images.

Feeling the desire in the air
Stomachs flip like circus clowns
First touch sends tremors thru the body

Im a stickler for spelling and grammar so it bugs me to see "thru" instead of "through."

Next a kiss that sends me to another solar system
Cloths drop to the floor like bricks

Sorry, clothing dropping to the floor does not make me think of bricks. Clothes are light so the image just didn't work for me.

Bodies collide making two into one
Sweet scent of lust in the air
Taste of each other so sweet
Licking the juices of our lust

I like this. The "bodies collide" works nicely with the "solar system" reference you made a couple lines earlier though you could use a better word then "making."

Slowly entering into her cleft
Thrusting like a piston
Our bodies quiver as if on queue
Warmth flows

"Thrusting like a piston" is very cliche. Every man's hips thrust like a piston --- need to make a fresher simile. Also not quite sure what you mean by "quiver as if on a queue," given that queue is a braided lock of hair, a waiting line of people or cars, or a data structure. Need to clarify that image.