A short story .. turned into a series maybe?

[SheDevilShay]

I wrote a short story of a vampire and an angel who was send to be his "babysitter"... in my story, becoming a vampire is bestowed at near death by an angel for select human protectors against non humans by the gods... they send down an angel to bestow the gift...

Well the angel that was put on baby sitting duty.. isn't a very good angel.. she's a sex maniac who's kind of bubble headed.. but sweet/funny...

I ended the short story in a way that could be continued as a series or even turned into a novella... but I'd appreciate some constructive feed back.. the story is unedited and I would need to re-write a little bit of it to start a next chapter....

Can I post it here to get feed back, or do I just discuss it here but not post it?

 

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I wrote a short story of a vampire and an angel who was send to be his "babysitter"... in my story, becoming a vampire is bestowed at near death by an angel for select human protectors against non humans by the gods... they send down an angel to bestow the gift...

Well the angel that was put on baby sitting duty.. isn't a very good angel.. she's a sex maniac who's kind of bubble headed.. but sweet/funny...

I ended the short story in a way that could be continued as a series or even turned into a novella... but I'd appreciate some constructive feed back.. the story is unedited and I would need to re-write a little bit of it to start a next chapter....

Can I post it here to get feed back, or do I just discuss it here but not post it?

that would fit Story Feedback forum better.