A "shoping" day...

[trisquel_astur]

... my first story.

May I have a little bit of feedback?

English version Thanks a lot to faeriefire for her help translating and with the flow of the English version.

Versión en Español

TIA,
Angel

 

[kinky_meh]

oooo I have forgot about your story!

I will read it in a while, when i have bit more privacy , i am sure it will make me feel oh so much better. *looks innocent*

I will comment your story later today Angel!

 

[kinky_meh]

Finaly found time to read it and I LOVED IT.

Nice story Angel, keep writing!!


~K.