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denis hale

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Post Yer Fave SP Poem Here

Somebody else start er off.
Too hard for me to pick.

Too many good uns. ;)
 
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"A Shameless Blog Plug"

A plug for a shameless blog? Cool.
 
uhh yah

I dont know if this is my favorite. It's definitely one of my favorites. :)



simple solar




-introduction by moisture:
I am his sweet gooey pond
sticky below his fragrant flower
proper pruned to be,
just so

-flash back:
living in a foot hill cave
he runs to look down
waiting for the two inch heeled
mountain knobbed clog lady with great mirth and happy hair

-flash forward:
straws chock full of syrup
hard to suck due the chunks
of banana and berry,
they gape below the sun vacuum cheeked all rosy and cute

-secondary and primary characters:
the lone elk and wedded pair of wild boar
are dispatched with ease
to dinner and a show with extra butter
so waffle stomper woman can rest her curious poetic head

-real life:
he beams like a coal miner’s headlight
all switches on
he watches the semaphore dancing across her forehead
she dreams of spice and soft touch with edge
 
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There are many good ones.

By the way, don't you have a new blog? Hey, post a link in your sig line.
 
WickedEve said:
There are many good ones.

By the way, don't you have a new blog? Hey, post a link in your sig line.


if you don't, I will

:p


simple solar is one of my all time favorites as well...
 
What kind of plug?

OMG! I misread the thread name. I thought it was about a shameless 'butt' plug!
 
I fell in love with this poem

the first time I read it long ago. smithpeter could never understand why I liked it so much--he thought it wasn't very good. I think it says a lot about who smithpeter was--a sweet, loving soul. :)

Spending Time Near Her Face
by smithpeter ©

On the porch during storms
in late afternoon
with electricity inspires poems
for mathematics and ants.
All those lines and symbols in order
of chaos. Marching.

Waking next to your pucker
is more stirring.
You look sweet and sour.
There must be a bug in your nose.
The cure for that twitch is soft kiss of cheeks
and smoothing night ruffled hair.
My breakfast of sliced pears with sorbet and candle
does not dim from streaming morn.
We share licorice end to end.

You don a pair of smiles, dimples
and all the trimmings.
Good morning my lover's, lovely face.
 
Lovely

That is a lovely, sweet, funny beautiful poem.

Thank you for sharing it!

I had a moment of lysdexia, though, in reading the line:

for mathematics and ants.

I read "for mathemantics."

I like that, too...

peace.

srw
 
Here's a

very good un. And it's got Eve in it! ;)



Paper Airplane Poem
by smithpeter ©

Eve writes with lipstick
Poems of the moment
Rapidly folded, she
Flings them from the tip
Of the tallest building

Her fingers delicately aim
The darts of verse
With nails painted olive near brown
Down on roofs of homes
Containing bedrooms shaped in narrow
Wedges, like tunnels

The tapering minds within
Below sweaty sheets
Spread their legs to the chant
Of a porn video, commanding
Ass to Ass! Ass to Ass!

It comes as no surprise
The wind gift on the shingles
Is unknown in that
Society measuring 8½ by eleven
 
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