A repost of mine...

[TheWriter]

My story "Day One (NonConsent) has been updated, so it should now make a bit more sense.

I would humbly ask that anyone who read it before read it again, and get back to me. And if you haven't read it yet, READ IT DAMMIT!!!

You can find it through my signature.

 

[Black_Bird]

WOW

I like this one! Quite the opposite of what you expect on a erotic story site - but good just the same...

I also noticed the techniques you used to give the story that paniced feeling towards the end... I love it! Good job!

 

[TheWriter]

Thanks Black_Bird