A recent comment just... just... just frosts my butt.

[MrPixel]

And I know from the few votes I get on that and similar stories, he one-bombed it. Not anonymous, though, to his credit.

"Too many characters, too much action to follow."

I found myself silently screaming at my computer, "You ninny! This was a swinger party story! You ever been to a swinger party, or even imagine one? What do you expect? In this genre, expect lots of people doing lots of things to each other in lots of ways, both serially and simultaneously. Were you expecting a quiet dinner out between two couples and a straight swap after cordials? That's not how it works!"

[grumble]

Yeah, you can't make all the people happy all the time, but unfortunately you can't steer away baseless, naïve assumptions from the clueless. At least it wasn't a personal attack. Those get the bye-bye button.

...sigh...

 

[AwkwardlySet]

That was a... pretty mild comment if we disregard the 1* vote. You should see some of the comments I get from my eternal bomber

 

[StillStunned]

Some people just aren't used to parties with more than a handful of people.

 

[AchtungNight]

Maybe he attended such a party and was shunned or shamed by exploitative fakers. I’ve been that guy. Not personally bitter enough about it to leave a bad review for anyone but the party hosts, but other people can have worse reactions.

 

[samhasstories]

I can relate to the comment. I also prefer stories where nothing happens to nobody. Just long descriptions of empty rooms.

 

[StillStunned]

I can relate to the comment. I also prefer stories where nothing happens to nobody. Just long descriptions of empty rooms.

I've played D&D adventures like that.

 

[EmilyMiller]

And I know from the few votes I get on that and similar stories, he one-bombed it. Not anonymous, though, to his credit.

"Too many characters, too much action to follow."

I found myself silently screaming at my computer, "You ninny! This was a swinger party story! You ever been to a swinger party, or even imagine one? What do you expect? In this genre, expect lots of people doing lots of things to each other in lots of ways, both serially and simultaneously. Were you expecting a quiet dinner out between two couples and a straight swap after cordials? That's not how it works!"

[grumble]

Yeah, you can't make all the people happy all the time, but unfortunately you can't steer away baseless, naïve assumptions from the clueless. At least it wasn't a personal attack. Those get the bye-bye button.

...sigh...

Can you recommend Cressie Craves Cream-pies to your admirer?

Emily

 

[Djmac1031]

That's like watching Avengers: Endgame and complaining it's not My Dinner With Andre.

 

[lovecraft68]

Doesn't appear to be a lot of skin on that butt if you ask me.

 

[M_K_Babalon]

And I know from the few votes I get on that and similar stories, he one-bombed it. Not anonymous, though, to his credit.

"Too many characters, too much action to follow."

I found myself silently screaming at my computer, "You ninny! This was a swinger party story! You ever been to a swinger party, or even imagine one? What do you expect? In this genre, expect lots of people doing lots of things to each other in lots of ways, both serially and simultaneously. Were you expecting a quiet dinner out between two couples and a straight swap after cordials? That's not how it works!"

[grumble]

Yeah, you can't make all the people happy all the time, but unfortunately you can't steer away baseless, naïve assumptions from the clueless. At least it wasn't a personal attack. Those get the bye-bye button.

...sigh...

I wish we could reply like on AO3. Some of us writers would be cooking in the review section.

 

[M_K_Babalon]

That was a... pretty mild comment if we disregard the 1* vote. You should see some of the comments I get from my eternal bomber

A mild, yet... stupid flavor.

 

[Kelliezgirl]

How many characters were there? We talking 8 or 80?

 

[SimonDoom]

When I saw "frosting my butt" I naturally assumed it was some new erotic cosmetic procedure I wasn't aware of.

 

[Djmac1031]

When I saw "frosting my butt" I naturally assumed it was some new erotic cosmetic procedure I wasn't aware of.

I'm sure there's a fetish board on Reddit for it as well.

 

[MrPixel]

How many characters were there? We talking 8 or 80?

18.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Well to play devil's advocate, group scenes are kind of challenging to write for that very reason. Which story was it? I'm always down for a group sex story.

 

[MrPixel]

Well to play devil's advocate, group scenes are kind of challenging to write for that very reason. Which story was it? I'm always down for a group sex story.

Barstow - Home Again

 

[Rob_Royale]

Barstow - Home Again

I'll check it out tonight. Thanks.

 

[NoTalentHack]

*laughs in Loving Wives*

 

[EmilyMiller]

Well to play devil's advocate, group scenes are kind of challenging to write for that very reason.

I had to draw a diagram for my ten guy gang bang story.



Emily

PS The vertical lines was me keeping track of orgasms - R = regular and N = newbie

 

[Djmac1031]

I had to draw a diagram for my ten guy gang bang story.

Emily

That's a lot of stick figures with penises.

Edit: nevermind. You actually had a fucking diagram .

 

[pink_silk_glove]

I had to draw a diagram for my ten guy gang bang story.

View attachment 2319895

Emily

PS The vertical lines was me keeping track of orgasms - R = regular and N = newbie

What, no Jamal? No Kenji? No Ashraf? Not even a Percival?

 

[EmilyMiller]

That's a lot of stick figures with penises.

I should have used UML like my IT friends

 

[EmilyMiller]

What, no Jamal? No Kenji? No Ashraf? Not even a Percival?

If you mean ethnicity, I’ve only ever fucked white guys, quite a few non-white girls though.

Or maybe you meant something else?

Emily

 

[EmilyMiller]

That's a lot of stick figures with penises.

Edit: nevermind. You actually had a fucking diagram .

It’s me, hun