a number of scenes in question

[cmhsgrad02]

I have been stuck on how to write a few scenes in a story for awhile been stumped on. It involves one guy and 2 girls

1. I have a "truth or dare" chapter with an additional guy getting brought in

2. A small scene of dealing with a death and having to pick up and get going.

3. A better way to intro the characters at the beginning (maybe pre-dating the start of current start).

Any constructive help would be grateful. True interest would require a PM for more info

 

[PennLady]

Without knowing more about the story, the context of the scenes, or what you want to accomplish with either, I couldn't offer any help.

 

[cmhsgrad02]

The way the story is now, I have backstories spread all the way into Chapter 3 of it. An edit from last month was read by some friends and they suggested that i put something at the beginning so the first chapter isn't so awkward.

With the "truth or dare" chapter in question, i think i was half drunk when i wrote it but it needs help bad.

The death call scene is still in early stages but its going to be the start of a big adventure for the characters.