A New Life in Perpetual Orgy - A New Story

[NemesisGB]

Is promoting your own story acceptable in this forum? I assume it is as others seem to have done. No doubt someone will let me know if it is not!!

I have recently A New Life in Perpetual Orgy under the Groups section. I think this is the link to save time

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20530

I simply want people to let me know what they think. If what I have done is considered reasonable I will do more, I do not however want to post blindly only to bore the pants off people.

Kind Regards to all

NemesisGB

 

[Nawlinslady]

So far, your story is the only one I've read here, but I'm enjoying it immensely. Looking forward to finishing it soon. Very nice work.

 

[sanchopanza]

why the hell won't anybody read mine? or at least post feedback on it? ah well - by the way, blatant self-promotion is the aim of this forum

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Sancho,

When asking for feedback and specifying you don't want critique you make many people shy from reviewing your work. Not many, but some of those who post here are loooking for praise and have become hostile or snide when they get honest critique. I am not saying you would by any means, but people who have posted critique or feedback and been villified will think twice before giving a review after that happens.

Also, some of the best reviewers, and the most active aren't going to give feedback where they don't feel free to give critique too.

Just my opinion from what I have seen,

-Colly

 

[JohnOne]

Well, NemesisGB, I for one thoroughly enjoyed your story. Besides the fact that it just happened to be about one of my own personal fantasies, it was well written with enough sexual heat to keep me interested. Not to mention getting me to pop off. I loved the naked sex in the theater and him getting "caught" by the Pussy Cats.

 

[OldnotDead]

Good first story. Very timely as I recently found out about a friend on his Junior Year Abroad was assigned a flat with two women. I wonder if he is also 'living the dream'.