a new idea for a rape story (even though I don't like rape)

[NASCARaddicted]

Some time ago, I heard of a case ... a girl was raped by 2 guys. Later, they were in the court, and they revealed the whole incest story ... they tried to force the brother of the girl to rape her, too (but the brother couldn't, he wasn't able to get an errection)


However, here is the story idea: There is this guy. He is very sadistic, and he wants to humiliate this one girl. Maybe this guy wanted to date the girl, but she refused to go out with him ...

So, he stalks her. At one time, the girl is alone with her brother in the garden, while the parents are far away. Suddenly, there is this maniacs. And he has a gun in the hand. The plan was to rape the girl, to humilate her. But suddenly, he came up with an even worse plan ...

"Hey Britney, remember when you refused to go out with me ? I planed everything so nicely. I even bought some kondoms ... "

"Are you insane ? I never would fuck with a guy like you" Suddenly, she realize what this guys want to do "Are you ... are you gonna rape me ?"

"Well, I thought about it, but ... no, I won't"

Britney is relieved, but still worried. This guy has a gun, and it is obvious that he has an evil plan.

"I won't rape you. Your brother will do this for me".

"I will do what ? Are you insane ? I will never rape my sister"

"Alright, then I have to rape your sister, while you watch. Then I will kill her ... and then I will kill you, too. But don't worry, I will take my time. Hey, look, over there. You see this huge cucumber ? Do you think it would fit into your sisters butthole ? I guess she will love it, when I push this whole thing up her ass. And when I think about it ... hey, and I think your brother would also love to get a cucumber rammed in the ass ..."

So now, the siblings have only 2 choices ... either the sister has sex with her brother, or she will be raped and killed.

Britney is shocked, but for the sake of her life (and the life of her brother) she has to accept her fate. "Alright Ben, you can fuck my pussy ... it is out only chance to survive"

"Yes, Britney, you are right. Now you both get undressed and start to fuck. I just wish I had a video-camera ..."

Britney and Ben undress slowly. All the time, they search for a way to get away, or maybe to take the gun away from the maniac ... but there is no chance.

Now, they are both naked. "Go on, fuck your sister. I am sure she will love it, since she is the biggest slut in town"

Ben was very frightened and points at his limp dick "How should I fuck my sister ? I can't get a hard one, when you point the gun at my head"

"O.k. maybe you prefer a hard bullet ? Go on Britney, I am sure you know how to give a man a hard one. Suck his cock, until it is hard ..."

Britney has no choice, so she goes down on her knees and starts to suck on her brothers cock. After some time, she notices how his dick gets hard.

"You see ... I knew you can do it. Now, open your legs and get ready for the coolest fuck of your life"

"hey, I don't use any contraception. Please, give my brother a condome. I don't want to get pregnant"

"A concdome ? No way. Just think about how funny it would be, if you get pregnant from your brother. Now go on and fuck her"

Ben has no choice. Slowly, he pushes his hard dick into his own sisters pussy. Suddenly, he feels some resistance in her pussy. He couldn't believe it ... his sister was still a virgin.

"What's wrong ? Don't hesitate, just ram it in."

"You heartless bastard, she is a virgin"

"Ah, don't worry. In a few seconds, she will be no more virgin ... NOW FUCK HER"

Ben looks into Britneys face. She is frightened, but they don't have any other choice. So Ben fucks his sister, like he has seen it in porn movies. Boy, this was so strange. Like his sister, Ben was a virgin. He should be disgusted by this incest, but somehow, he loved it. His sisters pussy was so tight and warm ...

Suddenly, Ben felt that his orgasm was near. He could have pulled his dick out and spurt his cum on her belly, but ... somehow, the idea of cuming deep inside of his sister fascinated him.

"Wow, boy, it really looked as if you love to fuck your sister. Now, Britney, turn around and bow down. You know, every good slut has to take it in the ass, too. "

Britney does as the maniac orders her.

"Now go on and fuck her up the ass, she will love it."

Ben puts some saliva on his cock and pushes it against Britneys butthole. Then he pushes his cock slowly in her tight butthole.

Britney tries to relax her butt as good as possible, but under this circumstances, she can't really relax very much. It hurts when her brother fucked her in the butt. But after some time, she got used to the new feeling in her butt.

"Yeah, see, I know you would love this"



This is the story idea so far. I think it could continue like: One of the neighbors saw the stalker and called the police. But the police needed like 30 minutes before they arived at the crime scene. The cops rushed in and arrested the maniac. However ... when the cops came in, Ben came too ... right in Britneys ass ...

What do you think about this idea ? Forced incest

(Basically, the brother and the maniac could be partners, but I think this wouldn't be a good idea in the story ...)

 

[Chicklet]

1) instead of rape use "nonconsent" it's less violent

2) violent rape stories usually get sent to the extreme section. Are you writing this story? If so, be sure not to make it too violent.

3) I disaprove of the use of guns and death threats. I read this one story about a guy forced to suck on another guy or else his wife would get shot. The rapists cut off the wife's finger...it really, really disturbed me.

Chicklet

(ps - glad to see you trying something even though it's not really "your thing")

 

[NASCARaddicted]

after thinking about it, I think you are right.

I mean, the brother doesn't rape his sister. He is forced to fuck her.
Non-consent ? Well, the sister has no real choice, and she thinks, if someone fucks her, her brother would be better (at least, her brother would not be brutal, he would just fuck her). So, somehow she accepts it.

You said you don't like guns in Lit stories ... o.k. but then - how could this maniac force them into having sex ? I think in this case it wouldn't work without guns (but if you have a good idea about something else then guns, let me know it)

What do you think about the idea with the police, arresting the guy ? That way, there is no violence. And maybe: Just when the police arives at the house, the parents come home. So the cops rush in, the parents follow. It just takes a few seconds, because: there are 5 cops with guns, resistance would be futile. However: Just when the cops (and the parents) come in, Ben is lying on the floor. Britney is sitting on his lap, his hard cock is in her pussy. This maniac is really insane, so Britney tries to enjoy the sex as much as possible - maybe he will still rape and kill her, who knows ... so Britney is realy into it now. She rides her brother so good, that she has an orgasm ... just when the parents rush in, right after the cops. (maybe that's too unrealistic ...)

Just imagine: your naked kids are fucking on the floor, and your 18 year old (innocent) girl has an orgasm - and she is moaning in pure pleasure ....

Also: The maniac thought it was funny if the girl got pregnant from her own brother. But I don't like it, when a woman becomes pregnant by incest. (no matter if she wants it or not). Also, I am sure, that if this girl would become pregnant, the parents would talk her into an abortion ... so I guess she was lucky and didn't get pregnant.

And: I am not sure, but: Maybe this girl realizes, that her brother is good in bed, so maybe she has more sex with him ...

 

[mutilato]

kill the rape.

maybe it's just me, but real rape scenarios are a real turn-off to me. I like to use a "slippery consent" vehicle instead of a "no consent" one. A bet or some kind of game/wager, where the individual still faces the fact of performing a sex act against their specific will, but their general consent is given.

 

[BgMma]

Mutilato, that is a good idea. i think that Nascar has something great, it just needs a little fine tuning. It's pretty hot.
I wold really love to hear about a reverse situation. I am really getting annoyed by men forcing women. How about a woman forcing a man?
Anyone?

 

[Chicklet]

Blackmail

Blackmail is the easiest way to get around nonconsent. How do you "force" someone to do what you want? You blackmail them.

This brother and sister...What if they're doing something they shouldn't do? They're out in back of a building smoking a joint or something.

This man, he knows that the girl he wanted to have sex with has a drug habbit, and where she goes to get her stuff. He takes pictures of her and her brother buying, selling, and smoking the stuff. Enough to put you in prison for years here in Oregon. Then he confronts them.

The two youths have a choice. They can do what he wants or go to prison, where they will probably be raped by inmates anyway. Much better to do it with someone they know, right?

Chicklet

 

[peterpan]

Some time ago, I heard of a case ... a girl was raped by 2 guys.

NASCARaddicted,
this has to be atleast the third time you have come up with an extreme and detailed rape based tale while insisting it is not really your thing. (First time I noticed was in the amazons thread).

Now if I missunderstood and you merely meant you would not consider rape in real life but you love rape tales, that would begin to make sense. Is this what you mean?

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I surely don't love it. I don't search for rape storys. I think rape is one of the worst crimes

And just to add: if you think, it is bad to rape an adult woman ... I saw a terrible report: In Africa, many men still believe in voodoo and that stuff. They believe: If you have AIDS, it can be cured, if you fuck a virgin - the younger the better. One of the youngest victims was 1 year old girl - she was raped by a few guys, one after the other. In the report they also mentioned: Where a normal girl has a pussy and a butthole, there is only a bloody big hole in the body of this baby .... this guys are really sick.



As you may have noticed: my favorite subject is incest (and anal). I know, there have been many story ideas about incest, and I was thinking about something new.

But in the last few days, I saw 3 reports about rape in the news.

One was a story, where a family (father, brother, sister) were driving in a car, when they saw 2 hitchhikers. The father stops to let them in (even though the son has a bad feeling about this guys). Suddenly, one of the hitchhikers strangles the daughter and tell the father to stop the car. Then, one of the guys rapes the daughter, while the other guy points a gun at the father and brother. Then, the other guy rapes her, while the first guy keeps an eye on the father and brother. After they both raped her,, they point the gun on the son and tell him to rape her, too (but he can't get an errection). That's where the latest story idea came from. I guess, I just have a lot of fantasy.

I don't know how other people feel, when they read a story. When I read a story, about 2 (or more) people having sex, I get really excited. Sometimes I masturbate. But when I read a rape story (usually, I don't), then I don't get a hard one, and I don't masturbate ...



Chicklet, I think your idea with the blackmailing is good. This brings a new point of view to the story. So, it looks as if the girl and her brother are not innocent ... they are drug dealers.

And the guy who blackmails them ... maybe his 14 year old daughter died on a drug overdose ... (and she got the drugs from this 2 siblings)

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I thought about a new, different way.

Blackmailing someone with photos and that stuff might work, but I still think that a gun would be better. However ... in some countries (for example in Asia), commonly a drug dealer gets the death penalty ...

However: Some time ago, I saw a short clip of "Sex and the City". Alanis Morissette had a guest appearance. There where a few people at this party. They played this "Spin the bottle" Game (or how is this called in the USA ?).

It is Sarah Jessica Parkers turn. Before she turns the bottle, the others tell her: You spin the bottle. Then, you give a kiss to the person where the bottle is pointing at (I am pretty sure that this is bad grammar ....) So, Sarah turns the bottle. she is curious, on whom the bottle will point. It's Alanis Morissette.

Sarah: "Oh, it's a girl. So I have to spin the bottle again"
Alanis: "Oh, it's alright with me". Then she moves over to Sarah and gives her a hot, passionate kiss ....(this was one of the hottest, most erotic scenes that I have seen on tv since quiet some time).

So, maybe the story could be something like this: There is this couple. They are swingers, and so from time to time, they invite a few people for swinger partys.

At one time, the wife invites her new co-worker, a young girl at the age of 19 (yeah, it is Britney). Also, the husband invites one guy ... Ben. So, they both visit the swinger party.

This time, the swinger party is about "playing games". Of course, Ben and Britney are surprised when they see each other. They tell this to the other people and they laugh about this coincidence.

Well, then, they play "spin the bottle". To add some tension, they use cards. It goes like this: A girl takes a card and spins the bottle. Then, she has to do, what is written on the card.

Britney takes a card "for girls: give one of the guys a blowjob - for guys: lick the butthole of one of the girls". (I am not sure if they should do this in public, or in a separate room)

Britney laughs and accepts it. So now, she has to spin the bottle to see, which one of the guys will get a blowjob .... ups, it is her brother Ben.

At this point, I am not sure how to go on with the story. Maybe the guy who started the party could say: If you want, you can spin again - but the girl says "no, it is alright, I will do a blowjob" (but then, this would be a normal incest story).

Or: this party guy could say: "Rules are rules, and you said you accept them. So now, you have to give your brother a blowjob". (of course, he can't really force her, but she doesn't want to spoil the party, so she gives him a blowjob ....). So she goes down on her own brother, right in front of the other people (if they go to a separate room, they could cheat and not commit incest).