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Currently this is my first draft; so I apologize for the lack of actual dialogue (which I will edit in later) and the clumsiness of it. I will edit this by tomorrow (hopefully) to a quality introduction. This is meant as an introduction to my character and the world in which he now lives. I hope that Jadefox will take the character of Thea, and introduce her story, but you are free to invent your character from the start if you wish.
P.S. The world does involve magic, but Nathaniel just hasn't seen it enough to believe in it yet. The school is also a school of beginning magic students.
Nathaniel:
Right before the new year began Nathaniel was taken from the Petz’s family so that another family could adopt him. He still remembers that day very vividly; it was a bright day with no clouds in the sky. Nathaniel was excited to celebrate Christmas with a family that he liked. It would have been his first Christmas in a house. Eager in anticipation, he set out to the woods to find a Christmas tree. He often set out on errands like these, but he preferred to call them “quests” or “adventures.”
The first such quest that he set out on occurred when he was about six years old. His family at the time was a very prominent family who were very imposing on his character. He had to act the way that they wanted him to. Every rebellious act on his part had been returned with an unproportional punishment. One such punishment that Nathaniel could recall was his being locked in his room for a week with only a meal every other day for a week because he forgot to thank their neighbors for giving him a gift on his birthday before actually opening it. Therefore Nathaniel scoured the forest on his free time to find a place that he can call his own. However, it didn’t take long for the family to figure out what he was up to and punish him for it. It wasn’t long thereafter that the family returned him to his social worker.
The social worker told him, “Well, your true parents wouldn’t have wanted you to live with that family anyways. Let’s just hope that the next family is.” Neither Nathaniel nor the adoption agency looking after him has any idea who his family is. He was found when he was five years old, or so they guesstimate, with another boy his age. The other boy, Areli, was tested to see if there were any relation between the two. But alas, there was none. Any person who watched them play together would think that they were somehow related despite their different appearances because of the way that they got along so well together.
Therefore, over the years of returning from houses that have rejected him, Areli has always been there to welcome him back. Yet, this family, the Petzs were different. The other families had kept him so separated from the family related by blood that it was easy for him not to get attached. But now, he knew them all like the back of his hand. There was Nancy, the oldest of the children; then Peter; then he and Vanessa were about the same age; and the youngest was Gene.
Nathaniel had been living with the Petz family for almost a year. Since then the family has also gotten to know him fairly well. They got used to his adventures and even let him keep a space that he could call his own. However, on that day when Nathaniel returned from the forest, he felt this really creepy chill crawl up his spine and was scared beyond reason. It certainly wasn’t the first time that he had had this feeling. He had been feeling it for many years already; but now, the feeling grew strangely strong. Therefore, he thought that something bad was going to happen and took Gene, the only other person in the house, with him to his secret place in the forest so that they would be safe. A couple of hours later the police had found them and he was accused of kidnapping the youngest child.
Therefore, on this Sunday afternoon, the last day of December, social workers arrived at Nathaniel’s house to take him away. The social worker said, “Well, your true parents wouldn’t have wanted you to live with that family anyways. Let’s just hope that the next family is.” Yet this wasn’t as comforting as it usually was. The pain in Nathaniel’s heart was too great. He thought that he loved these people and that they could really begin to be his family. He couldn’t bear them thinking that he would harm any of them in any way. Furthermore, he felt even more tears drop as he realized that he would never see any of them again. Nathaniel cried continuously for another few days. Finally he arrived at the conclusion that no one could really understand him. He saw the future of his life: he would be a child constantly passed around from house to house and never really get to know who he is. So he did the only thing he thought that he could do to change that: he ran away.
He didn’t run away alone however, he took his brother with him. The first couple of nights they both went without very much food. They were living off of pieces of food that other people had thrown out into the dumpster. Once they found a banana peel in the dumpster and they were both so happy to find such a treat. The peel was all brown because of the length of time it had been outside. But that only encouraged Nathaniel and Areli because it meant that it had a lot of sugar in it. The nights were fairly hard at first but the streets felt a lot more comfortable after the first few months.
The first problem for Nathaniel was that Areli wanted to go back to the way that things were. He felt that anything was better than the situation that they were currently in. But Nathaniel, being stubborn, told him that if he wanted to go he would have to go alone. Areli, not being the kind of person who would just leave his brother on his own, decided to stay only to make sure that nothing happens to Nathaniel. The bigger problem, however, came along with the changing of the seasons. Where he lived, it was summer at around the time of Christmas. Therefore, Winter was now upon him. The rain made sleeping in the streets nearly unbearable. He and Areli tried sleeping in covered places but the police never let them stay there. One day Areli saw a girl, who he knew to be the daughter of a baker, drop her keys without realizing it. Realizing what a great opportunity suddenly fell into his lap Areli retrieved the keys. Nathaniel was nervous about the whole thing because he didn’t think that it was a good idea to sneak into a bakery and steal some food, much less sleep there.
It had been about a month and a half of stealing from the bakery and sleeping in the basement that the night that Nathaniel dreaded came. The baker walked in on Nathaniel and Areli getting ready to go to sleep in the basement and his anger flared. The baker had a shotgun in his hands but instead used it to beat the two children to semi-unconsciousness. After many hours of Nathaniel and Areli crying the baker was finally about done. But as a last act he took them both and threw them into the river so that they would never return again. Yet, what the baker didn’t know was that the children were not only sore, but they also didn’t know how to swim. Therefore, after about a minute in the river they both went unconscious.
Nathaniel awoke to find a girl that was about six years old standing over him moving her hands in a very weird and what appeared to also be a bit clumsy way. Nathaniel felt the water draining from his lungs. Eventually his breathing returned to him and he was amazed at what this six year old girl had done. When he got up he found his bother right next to him with a worried look on his face. Nathaniel asked what the girls name was and she said, “Thea” quickly before running away.
Left alone with his brother to fend for themselves for the second time Nathaniel decided that leading this kind of lifestyle was not getting his brother and him anywhere, Thus, he decided to go find an adoption agency again for his brothers sake. Yet when Nathaniel found the nearest ciy it was nothing like the cities that he remembered: It was straight out of what he would picture as a kingdom’s capitol. There was in fact a castle in the center of the city. Fortunately, Nathaniel stumbled into a man who was very nice. The man was very interested in Nathaniel and his brother and asked why they weren’t home with their families right now. Nathaniel admitted that he and his brother were orphans and asked the man if he would adopt them together. The man said that he could not; but he could enroll them in the local school. However, since they are both orphans and have no money they would have to work for the school a lot and they would have little time to themselves. At this Nathanaiel was inclined to decline the offer yet one look at Areli told Nathaniel that he had no choice but to accept.
When Areli and Nathaniel get to the school, they both are instructed to begin their work. Nathaniel, not knowing what they were supposed to do, wandered about the premises. Most of the areas that he had direct access to were rather plain: food courts, bedrooms, living rooms… However, he noticed that there was a lack of technology. Every room he searched had no televisions, no radios, no electrical lights, and not even any electrical outlets! Secondly, he noticed that there was a lack of metal objects: sure there were metal utensils, but there were no metal chairs no metal tables…It seemed to him that this place was supposed to be a rather nice place but it simply didn’t have the technology to create all of the metal objects and all of the luxuries that existed in his town. But then he began to question where he was. He decided to ask someone and they told him that he was in a town called Capashen. When Nathaniel asked about the lack of technology they simply gave him a confused look and called him crazy.
Eventually Areli and Nathaniel found out that they were to be the janitors for the non teaching sections of the school until they turned eighteen. The years passed slowly until Areli turned eighteen when it passed even more slowly for Nathaniel. Nathaniel didn’t see Areli at all while he was working or any time after that. The only thing that Nathaniel was able to discern about his brother was that he was the second best student in magic: second only to some girl named Thea.
P.S. The world does involve magic, but Nathaniel just hasn't seen it enough to believe in it yet. The school is also a school of beginning magic students.
Nathaniel:
Right before the new year began Nathaniel was taken from the Petz’s family so that another family could adopt him. He still remembers that day very vividly; it was a bright day with no clouds in the sky. Nathaniel was excited to celebrate Christmas with a family that he liked. It would have been his first Christmas in a house. Eager in anticipation, he set out to the woods to find a Christmas tree. He often set out on errands like these, but he preferred to call them “quests” or “adventures.”
The first such quest that he set out on occurred when he was about six years old. His family at the time was a very prominent family who were very imposing on his character. He had to act the way that they wanted him to. Every rebellious act on his part had been returned with an unproportional punishment. One such punishment that Nathaniel could recall was his being locked in his room for a week with only a meal every other day for a week because he forgot to thank their neighbors for giving him a gift on his birthday before actually opening it. Therefore Nathaniel scoured the forest on his free time to find a place that he can call his own. However, it didn’t take long for the family to figure out what he was up to and punish him for it. It wasn’t long thereafter that the family returned him to his social worker.
The social worker told him, “Well, your true parents wouldn’t have wanted you to live with that family anyways. Let’s just hope that the next family is.” Neither Nathaniel nor the adoption agency looking after him has any idea who his family is. He was found when he was five years old, or so they guesstimate, with another boy his age. The other boy, Areli, was tested to see if there were any relation between the two. But alas, there was none. Any person who watched them play together would think that they were somehow related despite their different appearances because of the way that they got along so well together.
Therefore, over the years of returning from houses that have rejected him, Areli has always been there to welcome him back. Yet, this family, the Petzs were different. The other families had kept him so separated from the family related by blood that it was easy for him not to get attached. But now, he knew them all like the back of his hand. There was Nancy, the oldest of the children; then Peter; then he and Vanessa were about the same age; and the youngest was Gene.
Nathaniel had been living with the Petz family for almost a year. Since then the family has also gotten to know him fairly well. They got used to his adventures and even let him keep a space that he could call his own. However, on that day when Nathaniel returned from the forest, he felt this really creepy chill crawl up his spine and was scared beyond reason. It certainly wasn’t the first time that he had had this feeling. He had been feeling it for many years already; but now, the feeling grew strangely strong. Therefore, he thought that something bad was going to happen and took Gene, the only other person in the house, with him to his secret place in the forest so that they would be safe. A couple of hours later the police had found them and he was accused of kidnapping the youngest child.
Therefore, on this Sunday afternoon, the last day of December, social workers arrived at Nathaniel’s house to take him away. The social worker said, “Well, your true parents wouldn’t have wanted you to live with that family anyways. Let’s just hope that the next family is.” Yet this wasn’t as comforting as it usually was. The pain in Nathaniel’s heart was too great. He thought that he loved these people and that they could really begin to be his family. He couldn’t bear them thinking that he would harm any of them in any way. Furthermore, he felt even more tears drop as he realized that he would never see any of them again. Nathaniel cried continuously for another few days. Finally he arrived at the conclusion that no one could really understand him. He saw the future of his life: he would be a child constantly passed around from house to house and never really get to know who he is. So he did the only thing he thought that he could do to change that: he ran away.
He didn’t run away alone however, he took his brother with him. The first couple of nights they both went without very much food. They were living off of pieces of food that other people had thrown out into the dumpster. Once they found a banana peel in the dumpster and they were both so happy to find such a treat. The peel was all brown because of the length of time it had been outside. But that only encouraged Nathaniel and Areli because it meant that it had a lot of sugar in it. The nights were fairly hard at first but the streets felt a lot more comfortable after the first few months.
The first problem for Nathaniel was that Areli wanted to go back to the way that things were. He felt that anything was better than the situation that they were currently in. But Nathaniel, being stubborn, told him that if he wanted to go he would have to go alone. Areli, not being the kind of person who would just leave his brother on his own, decided to stay only to make sure that nothing happens to Nathaniel. The bigger problem, however, came along with the changing of the seasons. Where he lived, it was summer at around the time of Christmas. Therefore, Winter was now upon him. The rain made sleeping in the streets nearly unbearable. He and Areli tried sleeping in covered places but the police never let them stay there. One day Areli saw a girl, who he knew to be the daughter of a baker, drop her keys without realizing it. Realizing what a great opportunity suddenly fell into his lap Areli retrieved the keys. Nathaniel was nervous about the whole thing because he didn’t think that it was a good idea to sneak into a bakery and steal some food, much less sleep there.
It had been about a month and a half of stealing from the bakery and sleeping in the basement that the night that Nathaniel dreaded came. The baker walked in on Nathaniel and Areli getting ready to go to sleep in the basement and his anger flared. The baker had a shotgun in his hands but instead used it to beat the two children to semi-unconsciousness. After many hours of Nathaniel and Areli crying the baker was finally about done. But as a last act he took them both and threw them into the river so that they would never return again. Yet, what the baker didn’t know was that the children were not only sore, but they also didn’t know how to swim. Therefore, after about a minute in the river they both went unconscious.
Nathaniel awoke to find a girl that was about six years old standing over him moving her hands in a very weird and what appeared to also be a bit clumsy way. Nathaniel felt the water draining from his lungs. Eventually his breathing returned to him and he was amazed at what this six year old girl had done. When he got up he found his bother right next to him with a worried look on his face. Nathaniel asked what the girls name was and she said, “Thea” quickly before running away.
Left alone with his brother to fend for themselves for the second time Nathaniel decided that leading this kind of lifestyle was not getting his brother and him anywhere, Thus, he decided to go find an adoption agency again for his brothers sake. Yet when Nathaniel found the nearest ciy it was nothing like the cities that he remembered: It was straight out of what he would picture as a kingdom’s capitol. There was in fact a castle in the center of the city. Fortunately, Nathaniel stumbled into a man who was very nice. The man was very interested in Nathaniel and his brother and asked why they weren’t home with their families right now. Nathaniel admitted that he and his brother were orphans and asked the man if he would adopt them together. The man said that he could not; but he could enroll them in the local school. However, since they are both orphans and have no money they would have to work for the school a lot and they would have little time to themselves. At this Nathanaiel was inclined to decline the offer yet one look at Areli told Nathaniel that he had no choice but to accept.
When Areli and Nathaniel get to the school, they both are instructed to begin their work. Nathaniel, not knowing what they were supposed to do, wandered about the premises. Most of the areas that he had direct access to were rather plain: food courts, bedrooms, living rooms… However, he noticed that there was a lack of technology. Every room he searched had no televisions, no radios, no electrical lights, and not even any electrical outlets! Secondly, he noticed that there was a lack of metal objects: sure there were metal utensils, but there were no metal chairs no metal tables…It seemed to him that this place was supposed to be a rather nice place but it simply didn’t have the technology to create all of the metal objects and all of the luxuries that existed in his town. But then he began to question where he was. He decided to ask someone and they told him that he was in a town called Capashen. When Nathaniel asked about the lack of technology they simply gave him a confused look and called him crazy.
Eventually Areli and Nathaniel found out that they were to be the janitors for the non teaching sections of the school until they turned eighteen. The years passed slowly until Areli turned eighteen when it passed even more slowly for Nathaniel. Nathaniel didn’t see Areli at all while he was working or any time after that. The only thing that Nathaniel was able to discern about his brother was that he was the second best student in magic: second only to some girl named Thea.