A mother-daughter thing

[SteelPoint]

Thinking of plotting a short story where the two females of a family are treated callously by the two males.

In brief, the mother and daughter end up in each other's arms almost as a refuge from the viciousness and sneering loaded on them... but of course find that this is to their liking. The sub plot to revolve around their planning to disappear with all the family wealth and proceeds from selling the family house secretly.

The husband and brother are left with nothing.

Wanted to ask: does anyone know if this storyline has an echo in any other stories they've read... or perhaps films..?

 

[JJA122]

Umbrella Academy, season 2

 

[Carnevil9]

Thinking of plotting a short story where the two females of a family are treated callously by the two males.

In brief, the mother and daughter end up in each other's arms almost as a refuge from the viciousness and sneering loaded on them... but of course find that this is to their liking. The sub plot to revolve around their planning to disappear with all the family wealth and proceeds from selling the family house secretly.

The husband and brother are left with nothing.

Wanted to ask: does anyone know if this storyline has an echo in any other stories they've read... or perhaps films..?

Sounds deliciously naughty to me!! And not at all familiar from anything else. (haven't seen Umbrella academy, though)

 

[SteelPoint]

Sounds deliciously naughty to me!! And not at all familiar from anything else. (haven't seen Umbrella academy, though)

That's what I was wanting to hear! I'll check out this Academy thing.

 

[JJA122]

There's no incest.

"After Vanya lands in 1963, she is hit by Sissy with her car and loses her memory. Sissy takes her in and she becomes a nanny to her eight-year-old son Harlan. Sissy and Vanya eventually fall in love and begin to have an affair behind Sissy's husband Carl's back. However, when it's time for Vanya to go back to 2019 with her siblings, Sissy can't go with her and the two tearfully part ways."

The husband was neglectful. Lies to his wife about gambling, doesn't interact with his son, talks down to his housewife. You know, 60s stuff.

"Carl and Sissy enjoyed a stable relationship prior to Vanya living in their house for a while. Eventually, their marriage broke down, and Sissy exclaimed to Vanya that she no longer loved Carl, but couldn't muster the strength to leave him.
Carl eventually finds out about the relationship between Sissy and Vanya, and tells Vanya to call it off, or risk harming Harlan."

 

[SteelPoint]

So, very far from comparable, then... and especially if it's mired in all that non-realistic, SF/apocalypse/time travel crap.

 

[jaF0]

Though I can't quote specific cases, this sounds much like many real life situations where part of the family escapes from the others for one reason or another.


Sounds more like a Lifetime Movie or maybe a Hallmark movie that a Lit story.

 

[jaF0]

My story 'Mother Knows Best' doesn't really fit your angle, but could be the precursor to it. They sort of bond in erotic acts (not with each other directly) and that could be the 'refuge' you mention. Though not a direction I would go, it could follow your lead in that they could move on together and start a new life.

 

[SteelPoint]

I think what I'm proposing, basically, is the possibility of extending the 'cuckold principle'. It opens up the possibility of betrayal within the wider family setting.

I could, for example, equally and as validly suggest that a father and his married daughter commit incest, thereby producing a double act of infidelity to his wife and her husband.

As I mentioned on another thread not long ago, the potential here is considerable - and particularly if you bring in the revenge motive.

 

[jaF0]

I think what I'm proposing, basically, is the possibility of extending the 'cuckold principle'. It opens up the possibility of betrayal within the wider family setting.

That's closer to mine then. Still not exact though. No revenge for example.

 

[SteelPoint]

Well, whatever, it seems to me that there are multiple scenarios available...

 

[JJA122]

Rude.

They are similar in that a wife finds love in a woman, and attempts to run away from her husband. The Sci-Fi element didn't even play into it!

You fucking asked if we had heard of any similarities in TV/movies, and that was the ONLY one. If I knew you were being anal about being original, even though there are is no true original plotlines left, I would not have contributed.

 

[SteelPoint]

And I thank you belatedly for your contribution.

I merely noted your own acknowledgement that the main erotic driving force - the incest - was conspicuously absent. The clue to what we discuss on this site is in its name - LitEROTICA.

There are plenty of non-erotic, in-family revenge stories - did you really think I was asking for examples of that?

I also pointed out that this problem was hardly improved by the story being assaulted by a totally non-realistic setting.

I believe both of these observations were fair.

 

[jaF0]

The clue to what we discuss on this site is in its name - LitEROTICA.

There are a significant number of stories posted on this site that have little or no sex. There is a whole category for it ... Non-Erotic.

Mother/Daughter does not need to mean sex at all, let alone incest. My story has open sex involving both, but no incest.

 

[Magineer]

There are a significant number of stories posted on this site that have little or no sex. There is a whole category for it ... Non-Erotic.

Mother/Daughter does not need to mean sex at all, let alone incest. My story has open sex involving both, but no incest.

Yeah... maybe even a whole 1%.

Someone here is trying to stretch a thin argument beyond breaking point. This is Literotica, not Kiddies' Storytime.

 

[horrorotic]

Umbrella Academy, season 2

Yes, pretty close except they weren't mother and daughter.

 

[horrorotic]

Thinking of plotting a short story where the two females of a family are treated callously by the two males.

In brief, the mother and daughter end up in each other's arms almost as a refuge from the viciousness and sneering loaded on them... but of course find that this is to their liking. The sub plot to revolve around their planning to disappear with all the family wealth and proceeds from selling the family house secretly.

The husband and brother are left with nothing.

Wanted to ask: does anyone know if this storyline has an echo in any other stories they've read... or perhaps films..?

This is a vast site, and not the only one of its kind.

Everything has been done before to various degrees. The questions shouldn't be has someone done this before, but how can make it yours. If people waited until they found something never done before to write there wouldn't be many stories here

Don't let this thread talk you in or out of anything, just role with what your muse wants.

 

[LupusDei]

Kind of a tangent maybe, but I find predatory manipulative moms who all but sell their daughter(s) for furthering own goals excitingly perverse.

So perhaps...

Olivia had always been nothing but a gold digger who loves extravagant lifestyle. But her old man catch Peter was now long lost (either died or divorced and moved on, leaving way too less) and her funds was in rather urgent need of a refill. She set her target on a rich widower Ferdinand, but for whatever reason didn't believe she can attack head on. Or perhaps, it's just that the fact her daughter Diane (who may or may not be Peter's daughter, not that it matters) and his son Markus are young adults about same age and had already met each other in some casual way, and for Olivia it seemed just too good an opportunity. Even despite her daughter was rather on the shy side, studios and not at all interested in such a thing, yet. With was a shame in Olivia's mind, as her daughter... well, she had a bit of crush on her herself, frankly, igniting her never explored but always known bisexual side.

So Olivia engineered a situation between them with she could then purposefully misinterpret as sexual.

For example sake, let's say it just so "randomly" happened that sincerely clueless and completely naked Diane walked in from the pool deck (maybe not quite for the very first time practicing home nudity, but certainly believing to be alone) right on her mother having some kind of business conversation with Markus. And got reprimanded for her nudity by her mother in such a confusing way Markus took charge and effectively ordered Diane to stay naked, and even more confusingly a nonverbal clue from mother confirmed that she must comply. She didn't run screaming either, and Markus, well, it could be worse.

Well, that did put that relationship on a fast track, and when Diane confronted her mother about not just allowing her to date Markus but seemingly actually lobbying for him, Olivia confessed her game, and Diane acknowledged her mission. Yeah, it could be worse.

Meanwhile Olivia closed in on her own target, as planned, but without quite the success of her expectations. With the youngsters setting very obvious example Ferdinand was up for play but not at all falling for her head over heels. Rather, transparently lustig for her daughter. Well, if that's what really needed, it could be arranged, yes? Two couples became a foursome even before the spectacular double wedding.

The manipulative foundation wasn't great for sustainable happily ever after though...

 

[SteelPoint]

Kind of a tangent maybe, but I find predatory manipulative moms who all but sell their daughter(s) for furthering own goals excitingly perverse.

My highlights. Yes, in this looser sense of a scheming family member (or two!) the sky's the limit on the plots to be derived.

People have made the point that 'everything's been done before'... but, honestly, this varies and I personally find not very much at all, even after a fair bit of research, which goes along these lines.

On Lit., it's almost always a straight-to-the-lust stampede with nary a thought being given to back stories or even simple, good ol' fashioned motives.