21orca
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This is a story idea that came to me when I was posting a reply to another thread(survival horror erotica) about missionary families.
Before I go any further, it is not intended to offend anyone's religion. So let's just say the story is about a missionary family of a generic religion and leave it at that.
The family is made up of a father, mother and four daughters. The daughters range in age from just turning eighteen, another 20, one 23, and the oldest 25. The Mother is 43, so she would have been just eighteen when the first child was born. The Father is much older, say 20 years older, at 63. He is a zealot at whatever the religion is. Very fanatical. The Mother was shotgun married off to him at a young age, and has become over the years dominated by him. She mostly does what he tells her. The daughters, especially the oldest is different, a more independent thinker, but still she is a missionary child, and follows the Father, but is beginning to think more for herself. The other daughters less so per age, with the youngest still naive. All four are very pretty, and virgins.
The story is set in the mid 1930's, this can be adjusted, but not much, does not need to be today. That is because, back then missionary families tended to be large, and mostly stayed together. And less was known about the world back then in general. So the father sets out to take the family into the most remote reaches of the Amazon in Brazil. Remember, he is a fanatic, a zealot. The mother would follow him, no matter how dangerous, the daughters, less so, but would still not stay behind. They just did not do that. It takes weeks, months to get up river, then guides take them further still into the jungle. The guides stare at the beautiful daughters all the time, undress them with there eyes, try all the time to touch them. Make them uncomfortable. But still they go on. Then one night, while camped, the guards all desert the family, terrified by some unseen force. The father, convinced of his "cause" pushes on further into the jungle. There clothes are now torn and ripped. The four daughters and the mother have a hard time covering themselves. Suddenly they are surrounded by men, large, and of all different races, black, white, red, yellow. The men take them to what is a lost city, very large, more people, men and women.
The city is ruled by a Marlon Brando type figure from Apocalypse Now. He has the people under his rule. The family at first doesn't no how to react to him. But remember, sometimes the most zealot a person is, the easier it is to brainwash them to believe something else. That is what happens to the Father and Mother. The daughters especially the oldest, begins to see them change. At the dwelling they are staying in, the father and mother begin to disappear at night when the daughters are asleep. Again, the daughters, especially the oldest, notices changes. There morals are gone, the mother suddenly becomes very sexual, the father like a thug, they start drinking and having wild sex even with the daughters nearby.
So, one night the oldest daughter pretends to be asleep, and waits to see if the mother and father leave. When they do, she tries to follow them. She loses them in this city. Soon however, she here's noises and shouting and crowds coming from what appears to be an arena type structure. When she sneaks in, she is horrified to see dozens of men an women in an orgy of sex and violence. The writer could tone down the violence. But right in the middle his her mother and father. Her mother is being gangbanged. The father, well, whatever the writer wants. Now, here is where I would make it more horror, maybe even scifi oriented. There could be supernatural forces at work. A colony of vampires, or werewolves, or witches and warlocks? And all under the watchful eye of the Marlon Brando Apocalypse Now character.
So here is where the beautiful daughters get drug into the story. All virgins, the oldest tries to lead the other to escape. Needless to say they don't. So, what kind of sexual encounters might await them? Any thoughts?
By the way, the supernatural aspect could be left out. But there would need to be something just as juicy to replace it. I think the supernatural forces work better, but that's just me.
Before I go any further, it is not intended to offend anyone's religion. So let's just say the story is about a missionary family of a generic religion and leave it at that.
The family is made up of a father, mother and four daughters. The daughters range in age from just turning eighteen, another 20, one 23, and the oldest 25. The Mother is 43, so she would have been just eighteen when the first child was born. The Father is much older, say 20 years older, at 63. He is a zealot at whatever the religion is. Very fanatical. The Mother was shotgun married off to him at a young age, and has become over the years dominated by him. She mostly does what he tells her. The daughters, especially the oldest is different, a more independent thinker, but still she is a missionary child, and follows the Father, but is beginning to think more for herself. The other daughters less so per age, with the youngest still naive. All four are very pretty, and virgins.
The story is set in the mid 1930's, this can be adjusted, but not much, does not need to be today. That is because, back then missionary families tended to be large, and mostly stayed together. And less was known about the world back then in general. So the father sets out to take the family into the most remote reaches of the Amazon in Brazil. Remember, he is a fanatic, a zealot. The mother would follow him, no matter how dangerous, the daughters, less so, but would still not stay behind. They just did not do that. It takes weeks, months to get up river, then guides take them further still into the jungle. The guides stare at the beautiful daughters all the time, undress them with there eyes, try all the time to touch them. Make them uncomfortable. But still they go on. Then one night, while camped, the guards all desert the family, terrified by some unseen force. The father, convinced of his "cause" pushes on further into the jungle. There clothes are now torn and ripped. The four daughters and the mother have a hard time covering themselves. Suddenly they are surrounded by men, large, and of all different races, black, white, red, yellow. The men take them to what is a lost city, very large, more people, men and women.
The city is ruled by a Marlon Brando type figure from Apocalypse Now. He has the people under his rule. The family at first doesn't no how to react to him. But remember, sometimes the most zealot a person is, the easier it is to brainwash them to believe something else. That is what happens to the Father and Mother. The daughters especially the oldest, begins to see them change. At the dwelling they are staying in, the father and mother begin to disappear at night when the daughters are asleep. Again, the daughters, especially the oldest, notices changes. There morals are gone, the mother suddenly becomes very sexual, the father like a thug, they start drinking and having wild sex even with the daughters nearby.
So, one night the oldest daughter pretends to be asleep, and waits to see if the mother and father leave. When they do, she tries to follow them. She loses them in this city. Soon however, she here's noises and shouting and crowds coming from what appears to be an arena type structure. When she sneaks in, she is horrified to see dozens of men an women in an orgy of sex and violence. The writer could tone down the violence. But right in the middle his her mother and father. Her mother is being gangbanged. The father, well, whatever the writer wants. Now, here is where I would make it more horror, maybe even scifi oriented. There could be supernatural forces at work. A colony of vampires, or werewolves, or witches and warlocks? And all under the watchful eye of the Marlon Brando Apocalypse Now character.
So here is where the beautiful daughters get drug into the story. All virgins, the oldest tries to lead the other to escape. Needless to say they don't. So, what kind of sexual encounters might await them? Any thoughts?
By the way, the supernatural aspect could be left out. But there would need to be something just as juicy to replace it. I think the supernatural forces work better, but that's just me.
