A Middle Class Orgy

[AaronWebster]

Hi all,

Just to announce that "A Middle Class Orgy" has finally been approved and can be found here:

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=857

The setting is an office party at the home of your boss. It is an immersive story with options for whether you are male, female, married or single.

Any threads added will be announced and given a link here. Any comments, good or bad, are welcome here.

If you write a thread for me, I will be happy to contribute a thread to any story that you might have.

Hear from you soon?

 

[AaronWebster]

Many thanx to lilguy who has got the party started with a game of Truth or Dare. And Marcia has already lost her top. Read about it here:

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6119

I have already written a thread for his story "Beth's Night On The Town", but I will soon be writing another one.

 

[lilguy]

little bit of advie. I find people get more reply if you put a Faq is one of these topics in this section, You know basicly tell you the guidline and charcter names they need to know shit like that

 

[AaronWebster]

Excellent idea, lilguy.

I have just written some fairly massive guidelines (but please don't be put off - its mainly just to put all the character descriptions in one place). Which can be found at:

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/editor/?dx=s&story_id=857&mode=8

But which I have reprinted below. Here goes:-



5 steps to instant thread acceptance!:

1. Don't invent any new characters. There are 10 characters detailed below (9 if the reader's character is single). The point of the story is the vast range of possibilities for interaction (that is fucking) within that group. Gatecrashers will be rejected!

2. Please don't change any characters. By which I simply mean that if Melanie is a blonde in a red dress in one seen, I don't want to hear threads that describe her as a brunette in a blue dress. Anything that is *not* described below in terms of age, appearance, history, personality, etc please feel free to invent. I may even add it to the character description.

3. Please try to make at least some reference to all of the characters in each thread - even if its just "Marcia & Anita just watched in amazement" or "meanwhile Melanie & Dan continued to fuck on the sofa".

4. The story is written in present tense, second person.

5. Get me hard.

Yep, thats pretty much it. Unless I think of something else. Please just have fun with the concept and explore the possibilities.

The character descriptions are:

You
This character has to be personal to the reader, so other than the fact that they are wearing a casual shirt & trousers (if male) or a little black dress (if female), try not to be to specific about descriptions ("he sucked on my tender breasts" rather than "he sucked on my C-cup breasts").

Your spouse - if married.
Again, this character has to be personal to the reader, so other than the fact that they are wearing a casual shirt & trousers (if male) or a little black dress (if female), try not to be to specific about descriptions ("she sucked on his throbbing cock" rather than "she sucked on his 9 inch cock").

Melissa Cole
Your attractive 40-something boss. Short brown hair, tanned. Has a bit of a (unspecified) past. Wearing a vest top and white shorts, revealing imprssive breasts.

Gordon Cole
Melissa's middle-aged husband. Tall, if somewhat paunchy. Dressed in a dinner suit (Tuxedo) and bow tie. Likes to make an impression.

Mark
Semingly shy 19 year old student, doing a summer job at your office.

Anita
Mark's 19 year old girlfriend. Also a student. Of Indian descent. Wearing a crop top and short skirt.

Marcia Woolley
Payroll clerk, blonde, about 25. Mother of young children. Attractive, but seems to be disorganised and flustered. Wearing blouse & short tight skirt that she seems to have bought when she was a size smaller.

Dan Woolley
Marcia's school teacher husband. Much more laid back. Turns up in a ill-fitting suit.

Melanie
Department secretary aged 20. Attractive spectacle wearing blonde with an engaging smile. Quite demure at work, but turns up to the party in vampish red dress, revealing a lot of leg & cleavage. Once danced topless at works do when she was 18 & got too pissed.

Martin
Divorced IT bloke, black in his 30s. Tall & handsome, he is the office stud. He was once caught fucking one of the office girls in the photocopier room. Might have done Marcia too once. Wearing polo shirt and tight trousers.

 

[AaronWebster]

In other news today...

True to my word, I delivered another installment to lilguy's story "Beth's Night On The Town". Read it here:

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=839&next_id=6127

"A Middle Class Orgy" has passed the 100 reader mark (small victories, small victories).

It has also appeared at no.3 in the top rated stories for September since some nice person decided to give it some votes. Okay, okay, I know that we're only one day into September and the rating system doesn't really work, but none of those votes were cast by me, so heck I'm proud!

 

[AaronWebster]

Heh, heh, heh.

Pride comes before a fall. Some git (who presumably read my posting yesterday) went round giving me ratings of 1 for all my pages. So we've plummetted down to level 15.

Of course s/he might just have though my story was crap (benefit of the doubt an' all that), but it seems a little bit too much of a coincidence.

Anyone care to help me out here?

 

[AaronWebster]

Another day, another thread from lilguy.

This time, the game for our party-goers comes from the single woman thread - and she has chosen strip poker... She has also already lost her dress in the process. Read about it here:

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6165

Slipped to no.25 in the polls. How art the mighty fallen!

 

[lilguy]

is any of the women BI

 

[AaronWebster]

They certainly can be. As I say in the guidelines: Anything that I haven't specifically said in the character descriptions, please feel free to invent.

 

[Zingiber]

"1" ratings and browsers

Heh, heh, heh.

Pride comes before a fall. Some git (who presumably read my posting yesterday) went round giving me ratings of 1 for all my pages. So we've plummetted down to level 15.

Of course s/he might just have though my story was crap (benefit of the doubt an' all that), but it seems a little bit too much of a coincidence.

Anyone care to help me out here?

It's possible the unfortunate reader was using the Lynx browser, which insists on selecting the first radio button ("1", in this case), unless the user chooses a different one. I have done a little damage of this sort in the past myself.

I wish I could keep using Lynx, but it would require a change to either the browser or to Chyoo, to add a distinct "no rating" option.

Or the fortitude to rank every page I read.


-- Zingiber

 

[AaronWebster]

Thanks, Zingiber, for restoring my faith in human nature (almost!).

Okay, to business. And this last week has seen 6 new threads added - none of them by me (been a bit busy at work).

So big thanks to lilguy, Zingiber and DaisyDuke. Thanks guys, my cup runneth over (or should that be my cum?)

lilguy has added to his Truth Or Dare game, under the single man thread, with our guy having to admit which girl he'd like to fuck.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6260

Then for the married man, he's added a game of Spin The Bottle (yeah, we're all kids at heart!), which has resulted in an encounter between lady boss, Melissa, and student worker, Mark.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6209

And lilguy has already added another thread to that, to hook our married fella's wife up with Marcia.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6255

Meanwhile, the ladies don't lose out, as Zingiber introduces a game of Broken Telephone to the married woman thread. And some anticipatory fondling is going on at:
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6245

If that doesn't sound dirty enough to you, see the results here in Zingiber's second thread, as the lads get their cocks out and Anita gives you the eye:
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6265

Last, but certainly not least, DaisyDuke has added to lilguy's Strip Poker game under the single woman thread, by getting our heroine to strip off for Martin, the office stud. I initially messed this one up, when I uploaded it. Daisy has been good enough to correct my mistake. If you haven't read it already, read it here:
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6206



And thats where we are now. Looks like I have some writing to do.

Oh yeah, we've passed the 500 reader mar too. Starting to look respectable.

 

[AaronWebster]

Three days later and three more threads to report:

First Zingiber has written an alternative second poage to his Broken Telephone thread, in which the boss gets enthusiastically bisexual with her secretary.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6418

Then lilguy has extended his Truth or Dare game to see your boss getting enthusiastically heterosexual with you.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6473

Last (but I hope not least), I figured I ought to write something myself. Otherwise pretty soon lilguy & Zingibe would have written more of my story than me. So I've come up with another game under the single woman thread, called Snogging In The Dark (did you not play that at high schoo?). Somebody has already put a very nice comment about it under My Ratings.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6496

 

[AaronWebster]

Another day, another TWO threads:

First of all, Zingiber has extended his Broken Telephone thread, so our married woman can follow Anita into the bathroom and... Well, that would ber telling. Read it here.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6508

Then I added a new game for our single man to choose. Its called "Blow The Boys" - so guess what that one entails.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6512

In the light of Zingiber's thread, I have updated Anita's character description (just to maintain the illusion of some kind of continuity across threads). It now reads as follows:

Anita
Mark's 19 year old girlfriend. Also a student. Of Indian descent. Small in height and small breasted. Wearing a crop top, short skirt and amber essence. Piercings include small nose jewel & clit ring. Rings on 6 fingers. Never been with a woman, but difinitely bi-curious.


Thats it for now. Gonna be a bit busy at work this week, so if I don't upload your thread for a bit, or write for you, its nothing personal. Should be able to clear the backlog by Thursday, or Friday at the latest. Keep posting.

 

[AaronWebster]

I'm back!

And we have had another two additions to our thread family. Once again these are from old favourites, Zingiber and lilguy (these guys are just phenomenal writing machines!).

How 'bout soimething from someone else for a change (I mean as well as Z & l, not instead of).

lilguy continues the adventures of our married woman in the bathroom with Anita - as they are joined by Melissa.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6577

Zingiber looks at what our married woman might have gotten up to if she had declined Anita's invitation and joined the men for their penis joust in the kitchen.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6615

 

[Ooohkitty]

Shaking in the corner in fear

i want to add to your story
i really do but im afraid to
it just seems so intense story wise
and i dont want to mess it up.
My god TEN differnt characters...
and the writing so far is really good
and i'm not sure if i can handle it
i only have one story posted so far
A day at stone wall mall
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=907&next_id=6422
It only has one main character
an exo
But i dont think im good enough for your story yet
but once i feel secure enough
i will begin to add to it.
I just wanted to let you know
Luv,
Christy

 

[AaronWebster]

Re: Shaking in the corner in fear

i want to add to your story
i really do but im afraid to
it just seems so intense story wise
and i dont want to mess it up.
My god TEN differnt characters...
and the writing so far is really good

Awww gee, thats sweet. But then I've read your story already and the writing's really good there as well (will send a thread as soon as I get back into the swing of things).

There is no way that you can mess this story up. If, for some bizarre reason, people didn't like your thread, they can choose to read (or write!) up to three alternatives. Or they can choose to continue your thread in a different direction that better suits their interests. Variety is the spice of chyoo!

Yeah, I appreciate that 10 characters may seem a bit intimidating at first. But they are the only 10 characters that will ever appear in the story and they are all described in the guidelines. In a lot of stories, you can quickly find yourself with a cast of thousends as each writer adds new encounters.

Hope that sets your mind at rest a bit.

Hear from you soon?

 

[Zingiber]

Re: Shaking in the corner in fear

Oooh kitty
It'll be easy
Just choose
A naughty new game
For the people to play
Then no one can say
You've stepped on their toes

And if you choose a single woman
Or a single man
You're down to nine
Plus the taxi driver
Who doesn't figure
Unless Aaron lets you play with him
or it could be her
on your way home.

And if you're not ready
to join the party
you can always
add some ginger to my story

Perhaps you can startle the window washers.

Office Morale

 

[Ooohkitty]

sweet sweet sweet sweet

you guys are sweet
thanks
i'll try to add some ginger to both your stories
when i get a chance
luv,
christy

 

[Ooohkitty]

I did it I did it I did it I did it I did it

hey aaron

I did it
hope you like
more threads to come
MORE THREADS FOR EVERYONE
::begins throwing threads arounds::
sorry moment of sillyness
forgive me
okay back to the thread
i hope you like
luv,
Christy

 

[AaronWebster]

Time for more thread updates. And this week has seen 5 new threads added (mostly by lilguy - surprise, surprise!)

True to her word, Christy added a great continuation of my "Snogging in the dark game for our single woman, where she has an amazing encounter with a mystery woman. Read it here:
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6693

Zingiber also added an alternative snog, where she instead encounters two men and a woman - and hears a lot going on around her:
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6767

And lilguy has added threads to each of the games that he started:

For our single woman, he continues the strip poker game with Martin taking her up on her challenge to let him play a bit.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6758

For our single man, he goes back to the beginning of the truth or dare game to see what would have happened if he had said "dare". He now has his cock out and some interest from Melanie.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6717

Our married man is playing spin the bottle and watching as Anita ups the stakes with Dan. What will our hero do when it is his turn with Melissa?
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=6845

 

[AaronWebster]

Its been a quiet week for threads, but we did pass the 1000 reader markand ratings continue to be in the ascendant. Meanwhile this just in from lilguy:

An extension to my "Blow The Boys" game under the single man storyline, in which Anita becomes the lucky girl to guess the identity from a face full of cock.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7091

 

[Zingiber]

I notice your latest new addition is Oct. 10th. On which story branch is it to be found?

-Z.

 

[AaronWebster]

I notice your latest new addition is Oct. 10th. On which story branch is it to be found?

-Z.

Well spotted. I have been a little remiss in my updates. I in fact had two more threads added that day (both from lilguy of course!) and I have just added two more from him again today.

For our single guy an extension to the Truth Or Dare game, where he chose dare and whipped his cock out. Well, fortune favours the brave (or unhibited) as both Melissa & Anita go down on hm.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7185

In the same game, but where your character chickened out and picked truth as a first option and Melissa picked dare, Mark now has a go and tells of his fantasy to fuck Anita in the office.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7186

Then a short thread where Melanie picks dare and must perform a dirty show on video, but you get to choose what.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7340

Meanwhile on the married guy thread, Spin The Bottle hots up as our hero and Melanie cover each other's privates in chocolate syrup and have to lick it off. And the best thing about it is you've got your wife's permission. A hot one!
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7338

 

[AaronWebster]

Would you look at that. Two whole weeks and I've not posted a single update. No wonder I'm still a virgin.

I have however neen approving (and writing!) threads like mad. Usually within 24 hours of receiving them (quite often within inutes of receiving them!). So this is the state of the war tonight.

A whole slew of new posts and a whole bunch of new (to this story) authors.

First up to bat is Iron Wolf, who sends our married woman into the bathroom to help Melanie with her zipper, so gues what they end up doing? This is a vey hot thread and very recommended.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7485

And then he was good enough to continue the thread, when Martin, our gorgeous black divorcee, joins the girl's in the bathroom.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7527

And then lilguy has them go for it and get down to business.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7714

In the alternative world where our marrried woman joined cute Indian Anita in the bathroom instead and they were joined by Melissa. We now find that the lady boss carries round a double headed vibrator in her handbag (and presumeably little else. A not so subtle thread from yours truly.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7604

Meanwhile, our single girl has a new option on the snogging in the dark game, where she finds herself with two mystery guys in a very hot thread from Tillie.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7568

And Tillie too has posted a follow up, where she finds out who the mystery guts are and is joined by... who?
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7760

For our single guy, the game of Truth Or Dare has degenerated into a strip show - as gorgeous blonde secretary Melanie strips off and you're holding the camera in lilguy's thread.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7677

Switch76 has given us two new games for our single guy. The first is Suck & Blow (sounds intriguing, but its not what you think).
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7705

Then last night, gamesmaster Switch76, added another game called Find The Smarties. So thats four games for our single guy, which means all the options on that page are allocated. Excellent.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7895

Meanwhile, Zingiber has politically corrected our single guy's "Blow The Boys" game, when the girls introduce their own twist on the notion.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7842

But then Dark Warrior politically uncorrects te "Anita" thread of that game as the horny Indian girl swallows Mark's load and moves on to you.
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7874

And lilguy has given our married man a new game to play, intriguingly called "Pleasure Of Punishment".
http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=r&story_id=857&next_id=7785


Phew! I'll have to start updating a bit more regularly again.

Its been a busy couple of weeks. Thwe Orgy has topped 2000 views. It has also topped the charts, with some enthusiastic ratings given it during October. But November might be a bit quieter as somebody has started hitting it with some really low ratings in the last couple of days. I guess Middle Class Orgy is either a story that people love or hate, or some people are voting tactically. Discuss.

 

[daciasdesire]

Funny votes

After reading your last comment about the votes I went and had a look at the top ratings for the month. We are only hours into November and yet some stories have over 50 votes for this month already. Adventures with Mom 53 votes. A special family camp out 95 votes!!!!! I'm not all that sure I can see how this can happen. It took me three months just to get 100 votes and yet they get how many is a couple of hours????? Strange.

Dacia