"A man Needs A Maid"

[sirhugs]

heard the Neil young classic today & thought of this:

P did well in tech stocks. Owns a great mansion, never has to worrk again. no kids though. Fourth wife just left him. He recognizes that he is vulnerable for gold diggers... so he stays in his den, watching old movies while his youngish maid tries to clean around him. No more wives, he figures, just someone who can cook and clean and get his meals.

One night, he stays up late, watching an old movie where the millionaire falls for the maid. The actress playing the maid wears a skimpy outfit. not having had sex since wife left, his cock rises. He begins stroking it, not noticing his maid enter to see if she can clear away his supper dishes....

 

[Carnevil9]

Once they start doing the deed, you have to take care to keep the "maid" theme going. Otherwise, it's just a setup for an ordinary boy-fucks-girl story.

Maybe she can teach him all sorts of naughty things you can do with cleaning supplies? Tickles him (or penetrates him) with feather duster? Or gets him into her maid outfit for a little CD trip to the local pub?

 

[Aleecia]

To me the Neil Young song is about a man who takes his wife for granted, loses her, and then laments what happened in a sad, pathetic sort of way. Maybe I'm reading more into it than intended but that's what the song says to my ears. However, a theme like that could make an interesting basis for an erotic story as well... at least one with the same sad, pathetic sort of ending.

I'm imagining a man who enjoys sex with his wife but little else. She's dissatisfied with that (even if the sex is great) and eventually divorces him. He misses her but ends up hooking up with a new woman to just repeat the same scenario.

I realize this probably not at all what you had in mind!