Grave clown
Virgin
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- Jul 7, 2005
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I just got my second chapter approved. Could I get some feedback on this story please? It's about a young woman trying to make her way in a dangerous city. Non-human and non-consent so far. Sword and sorcery setting.
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Villains 1 & 2
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=539586&page=submissions
What od you think of my introduction? Story flow? Characters? Dialogues? Actions? Any advice at all would be appreciated, to help me on my third chapter. Thanks in advance. Vote and comment too please.
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Villains 1 & 2
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=539586&page=submissions
What od you think of my introduction? Story flow? Characters? Dialogues? Actions? Any advice at all would be appreciated, to help me on my third chapter. Thanks in advance. Vote and comment too please.
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