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champagne1982
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Your poem is full of all of the good things that make a fun read, meter, simple rhyme, humour and even a little story.
Do you have any others in different styles?
Well, just keep on doing what you're doing. Your status will change, eventually. You gain experience with every reply and thread you post.DanaQt said:
Your poem is full of all of the good things that make a fun read, meter, simple rhyme, humour and even a little story.
Do you have any others in different styles?
Angeline
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Everyone has "vrigin" status until they reach 30 (I think it's 30) posts. Then it changes to Experienced and keeps changing at every milestone until you have 1,000 posts. Then you can choose your own title. When you reach 100 posts you can add an avatar.
DanaQt said:
Everyone has "vrigin" status until they reach 30 (I think it's 30) posts. Then it changes to Experienced and keeps changing at every milestone until you have 1,000 posts. Then you can choose your own title. When you reach 100 posts you can add an avatar.
WickedEve
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Do you have any non erotic poetry? I believe non erotic is a good choice if you're new to poetry and wanting to improve. The web cam poem is cute, and I know that sort of poetry is fun to write. At one time, I was writing cute poetry like that. Then I concentrated on non erotic until I was good enough to tackle more than cute.
Hmmm... you know what I'd like to see you do? Write another version of your poem. Try a free verse, non erotic version. Tell the reader why there's a need to be an exhibitionist, and how it makes your character feel after she's had the thrill of being watched. Does it ever disturb her, or simply leaving her craving more? Does she worry about the boyfriend finding out? Maybe she wants him to know? It could make a very interesting poem.
Hmmm... you know what I'd like to see you do? Write another version of your poem. Try a free verse, non erotic version. Tell the reader why there's a need to be an exhibitionist, and how it makes your character feel after she's had the thrill of being watched. Does it ever disturb her, or simply leaving her craving more? Does she worry about the boyfriend finding out? Maybe she wants him to know? It could make a very interesting poem.
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