A Horror Movie

[Senna Jawa]

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a movie
of long years of nightmares
of fearing of falling asleep

no!
i don't want to... --
let the movie keep moving

i want a new scenario
going back'd be nice
too much to ask for?
but can't i have
the last few frames?

forget it
i know the answer
​

wh,
2011-05-21/22

 

[Senna Jawa]

2nd version

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a movie
of long years of nightmares
of fearing of falling asleep

no!
i don't want to... --
let the movie keep moving

i want a new scenario
going back'd be nice
too much to ask for?
but couldn't i have
the last few frames?
​

wh,
2011-05-21/22




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English will always be for me like walking on thin ice or jumping across a mountain creek from one stone to another. Either way I am likely to end up in freezing water.

Here I have my ideas but am not confident about the actual impact of "can't" versus "couldn't".

There might be some other issues too (I hope not ).