A good MMF story

[Missouribiguy]

Hey folks,

I've been thinking of this story focusing on two guys having sex in a weight room, and a sexy girl catches them in the act. I thought up a outline, but I was thinking what you all would think of it.

Would you like to check it out?

 

[Lalah]

The problem is, two guys having sex automatically get sent to gay, but if you add a woman they complains about it. I suppose you may manage to get it sent to group sex, but the reaction probably wouldn't be good.

 

[emap]

She has a point actually. Sad but true if your story does not hold true to the section that it is placed in it will get bad reviews because it doesn't follow the pattern. However it does not mean everyone will hate it, you just find yourself as a niche writer. I'm there and actually the smart people seem to read your stories and send feedback and the dumb ignore you for the most part.

I like your story idea though. Sorry I didn't say anything before you just didn't seem to need any help.

 

[Roleplay_Mom]

Something about catching 2 guys together is just gay and a total turn-off for me.

But for some reason, I get very turned on if the woman is there from the beginning and helps/encourages the guys to suck cock. Something about guys who are situationally bi-curious (only with a sexy willing woman present to watch and urge them on) is a total turn-on for me.

I'm not knocking your story idea.... it just isn't for me I guess.

 

[sunandshadow]

You could always post it to the Nifty archive instead, they have a bi category.

 

[Missouribiguy]

You could always post it to the Nifty archive instead, they have a bi category.

True...

How about a different approach? Maybe have a woman convince her husband/boyfriend to pick up a guy, so she can watch them have sex. Of course, she would join in.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

The problem is, two guys having sex automatically get sent to gay, but if you add a woman they complains about it. I suppose you may manage to get it sent to group sex, but the reaction probably wouldn't be good.

That's odd. Could have sworn the MMF threesomes wound up in Group.

 

[Lalah]

That's odd. Could have sworn the MMF threesomes wound up in Group.

You're thinking of two man making love to a woman without touching each others. It's different when it's two man fucking each others, as far as this community seem to be concerned.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

There should be no difference at all. If there was a FFM threesome and the two ladies touch each other as well, that story goes to Group.

 

[emap]

A think alot of placement depends on how it is written. Because obviously two guys fucking a woman is a group action, the gay part comes in because the two men are fucking each other and she joins them. That's not so much a group sex thing as a woman getting very lucky.

Bed I gotta ask, does't that hand hurt?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Bed I gotta ask, does't that hand hurt?

He had two fingers in...and yes, yes it did.

 

[DS_Curious]

Something about catching 2 guys together is just gay and a total turn-off for me.

But for some reason, I get very turned on if the woman is there from the beginning and helps/encourages the guys to suck cock. Something about guys who are situationally bi-curious (only with a sexy willing woman present to watch and urge them on) is a total turn-on for me.

I'm not knocking your story idea.... it just isn't for me I guess.

I'm with Roleplay Mom, the idea of being coerced into giving head or another man giving me head at a woman's urging is a total turn on to me. I'm straight, but have sometimes fantasized about a woman telling how good it looks as a cock slides in and out of my mouth. Would I ever give head or let a man give me head? No. But add a woman who wants me to and I would... for the right woman!

 

[noisymother]

I think it's a good plan. How much would the girl join in? Or is she just a voyeur?

Either way - it's a very hot idea! I certainly am not averse to a little man on man action!

Hey folks,

I've been thinking of this story focusing on two guys having sex in a weight room, and a sexy girl catches them in the act. I thought up a outline, but I was thinking what you all would think of it.

Would you like to check it out?

 

[DS_Curious]

I wouldn't want her to be a voyeur. I'd want her to play too. She could somehow coerce me into giving head or letting another man suck me and make me cum. That would be rather hot...

Any other woman like the idea of a situationally bi-curious man? Do women fantasize about men giving head or getting sucked off by other men?

 

[Etaski]

Any other woman like the idea of a situationally bi-curious man? Do women fantasize about men giving head or getting sucked off by other men?

Well, I know one in real life who has done that; but it isn't so much her fantasizing about watching men getting sucked as she simply likes control. *shrug* But her husband likes giving her the control, so it works.

I'd rather hope you'd keep your original premise, MObiguy. It would have to be done well (I'd hope for a decent understanding of why the two men were having sex, and why they decided to let the woman join), but it is a less common idea, so why not explore it?

Example: I've only read one other story with that premise so far. A woman sees her "essentially gay" neighbors having sex through the window one day. She is turned on and also enjoys anal sex. She fantasizes, decides she'd like to try getting involved, conveniently shows up at their door another day when they're aroused but not sated. It was precarious for a moment (Why would two boyfriends want to invite the girl inside?), but what worked was the author described one partner actually being more bi than exclusively gay; he was interested in her, made it known, but left it up to his partner. The more dominant, exclusively gay man decided to indulge his partner and figured while he was at it, he'd see if a woman's ass was as tight as a man's while he had the opportunity. Sort of reversing the typical bi-curious situation. It worked; pretty hot scene, actually.

If you've got an outline already, give it a shot.

 

[DS_Curious]

Bump!

 

[Mr. Briggs]

Something like this?

We go to the gym late one night, just before closing time. The gym is pretty dead. We finish up and each go to our respective dressing rooms to shower and get ready to go. After showering I'm sitting in the dressing room getting changed when I hear someone behind me. I turn my head and standing 2 feet away is a guy who just got out of the shower. He's naked and drying himself off. His cock is literally 2 and a half feet from my face. He's in great shape. Completely shaven and a nice meety cock was limp right in front of me. He caught me staring at it and said "Hi."

Embarrassed to have been caught gazing at his wonderful tool I turned away and said "sorry, I'm sorry about that."

He said "No problem. Guys stare at my cock all the time. Besides I see you here all the time with that hot wife of yours. You are one lucky guy."

I nervously reply, "Yeah sorry, I'm not gay or anything. I wasn't expecting to turn around and see a...a.....a...."

"COCK!" he butts in and helps me finish my sentence. "Don't worry, I won't tell anyone. Besides it's just us here alone. You seemed pretty interested in my cock a minute ago. Wanna touch it?"

Without saying a word I put my hand up and take it in my hand. It was soft and heavy, like my own but somehow it was a real turn on to be touching another man's cock for the first time. He took a step forward and now his cock was only inches from my mouth. I don't know what came over me but I took his now semi hard cock in my mouth. It felt so good. I was so hard and completely lost in the moment. So lost in the moment I hadn't heard the locker room door open. My wife was standing behind me watching the whole thing. She came up behind me and said "I see you aren't ready to go yet, keep going I'll be right back." Shocked i stop and look at my wife. She nods to continue so i do. Then minutes later my wife returns and starts playing with my ass, i feel her pour oil down my butt crack and then I felt the familar cold tip of her Strapon. Not any strapon, 9 huge inches of female cock. Then just before sliding it in she says "Honey, you are the hottest cock sucker I've ever seen the only thing hotter will be you taking my 9inches up your ass and his 9 inches in your mouth." With that she pushed the strapon all the way in.

Not able to take the sight, the guy starts buckling and says "OH SHIT I'M going to cum!!"

My wife doesn't miss a beat and instructs him "cum on my little cocksucker. Cum in his mouth and all over his face and when you're done....."

I felt his cum start squirting into my mouth and then warm squirts on my cheeks. I cleaned his cock as well as i could. I was in heaven. I just sucked my first cock and my wife was fucking my ass. Then another surprise was awaiting. My wife finished what she had been saying, "Honey that was very hot of you. I'm not the only one to think so." I turn and see two hunks playing with their huge tools. "They were on their way into the dressing room when I was putting the strapon on. I asked them if they would like to cum all over my husband's face." She turned to them and said "boys get over there and cum all over my husband's face while I finish fucking his ass."

They came up to my face and one after the other cum all over it. They didn't let me suck their cocks, just came all over my face. With that my wife said "WOW. What a dirty cocksucker husband I've got. Get on your back so I can fuck your ass and admire all the cum on your face." So I turn around and she fucks my ass and jacks me off until I add my own cum all over my chest. We finish up with a big sloppy cum kiss and get showered off and head home.

 

[Missouribiguy]

Some great ideas

Ah, very nice ideas going on here. As far I as I know, MMF based bi stories can be put in either Group or Gay Male categories. It depends how you play it. I've seen some which has the usual guy getting caught or talk into gay sex with another guy. Others are guys who are more open about their sexuality and decide to let a girl join. One story on Nifty (the name escapes me) had a guy using a dildo on himself, and the girl gets turn on enough to join in. Also, the additional scenes had a gay friend of his that play around actually having sex with the woman out of the blue.

the idea of the gym bi-sex story comes from this scene I saw off a bi-porn DVD. It features two guys in blue jeans working out around a bench press. The guy who is doing the set (who happens to be Shane Rollins) finishes and sits up. His partner seems to be horny, and he is as well. So, he stands up on the bench, unzips his pants, and get his thick cock sucked. After a while, he bends his friend over and rims his ass, before getting his cock sucked again. Then, he rims the guy's ass again, then starts to fuck him. They do it doggie style on the bench press, and pretty much enjoying it, when a girl walks in on them.

She goes unnotice for a bit unti the bottom spots her. Both guys stop, but she urge them to go on. They resume the doggie style and continue fucking, while she helps. She tells them that she like to do some fucking, leaves the room, and comes back with a strap-on (at the time she leaves, the bottom is riding Shane's cock). She fucks the guy, but Shane talks her into letting him fuck her pussy. He eats her out before he does (missionary), and then both men cum on her.

It was a pretty good scene.